Riddhima's love story

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Riddhima love's Armaan....doesn't know if armaan loves her back
SANJEEVANI

Anjali and Riddhima in locker room

Riddhima thinking about Armaan

Anjali ' Kya hua Ridz, kya soch rahi ho

Riddhima ' (hesitates, pushes hair back) ku kuch nahin di, bus patient ke bare mein soch rahin thi

Muskaan comes in with Rahul ( Muskaan, Rahul are girlfriend, boyfriend)

Muskaan ' hi Anjali, hi ridz

Anjali and Riddhima ' hi

Rahul ' Armaan nahin aya abhi tak

Armaan ' tum ne mera naam liya, aur mein agaya (smiles)

Ridz slowly shakes her head and smiles

Sister lovely comes in ' who gi, Dr. Kirti briefing ke liye bularahin hai, aur who bohot ghusa hai gi

All go for briefing'.Atul and Nikki already there

Atul ' yaar tum sab kaha rehgae the?

Dr.Kirti ' Doctors! Aap yahan 5 min. late aeye hai'.itni der mein mai ek patient ko dawa de sakti thi! ((glares at all) ab aap ki duties'.Dr.Anjali aur Dr.Muskkan, pac lab, Dr. nikita, aap mujhe assist kar rahin hai, Dr. Rahul aap Dr. Modi ke saath ek cancer patient ka case handle karenge aur DR. Riddhima and Dr.Armaan, aap dono ICU mein duty karenge'now get to work

Armaan ' (taps riddhima)

Riddhima ' (shivers)

Armaan ' woh is patient ko morphin denge na?

Riddhima ' haan, (sighs) stares at Armaans deep, brown eyes as he explains the case

After duty'.. all in cafeteria, except riddhima

Anjali ' Armaan, Ridz kaha hai?

Armaan ' mujhse keh rahin thi ke use bathroom jana hai (Armaan realizes he left his file in the locker room) oh shoot, mein abhi aata hoon.

Armaan walks by the fire exit (stairs) and sees Riddhima crying

Armaan confused, wondering what happened and walks in'behind ridz

Armaan ' Riddhima, kya hua, tum aise ro kyun rahin ho?

Ridz ' (turns around, wipes tears) woh (nervous) actually

Armaan interrupts ' hmm'. Mujhe pata hai

Ridz ' tum jaante ho?

Armaan ' haan

Riddhima ' Toh phir'

Armaan ' Dekho patient ko kuch nahin hoga

Riddhima ' kya? Oh..haan

Armaan remembers his file again ' Mujhe jaana hai'don't worry kuch nahin hoga
(Armaan leaves)

Riddhima ' (talking to herself) mein us ki waja se nahin ro rahin thi Armaan, mein ro rahin thi, kyun ke I love you (Ridz cries harder)

Shashank comes in ' Riddhima aaj raat ko party hai, doctors day ke liye toh tayari karni hai, ghar chalet hai

Ridz wipes her tears ' gi papa

Riddhima's house (party)

All the girls in the kitchen making food, boys at the dinner table

Muskaan ' Riddhima tumhara mood off kyun hai, aaj party hai, toh enjoy karo na

Anjali ' haan Ridz aaj tum bohot chup si ho aur subah se tumne kuch khaya bhi nahin

Riddhima ' kuch nahin, bus tabyat theek nahin lag rahin (exits with food in to serve), puts food on the table, sits across Armaan next to Anjali

PAdma ' Riddhima tum kuch kyun nahin kahrahin?

Ridz ' mujhe bhook nahin lag rahin (walks away)
Armaan finishes food and goes outside to the balcony to get fresh air, sees Riddhima crying again, Armaan standing behind her with riddhima's back to his face (riddhima doesn't know Armaan is behind her)

Riddhima ' I wish mein tumse kabhi mili na hoti, ARmaan (armaan confused), Armaan tumhe lagta hai ke mein tumse nafrat karti hoon, per such yeh hai ke mein tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon' I love you Armaan!!

Armaan shocked ' kyaaa

Riddhima scared, slowly turns around

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~To be continued ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Edited by dreamguyarmaan - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautifully Written, but I think it should be in the FF section,

Hannahxx

p.s can't wait to read part 2, so jaldi update 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sorry i accidently put this here i ment to put it in the FF section ;)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice


waiting for part 2....



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Posted: 15 years ago
#5
this is really good post next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#6
wow nicely written ... pls write part 2 and pm me too.... thanks in advance
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow nicely written...................waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys....heres part 2 ;)

Riddhima – Armaan tum yahaan?

Armaan – haan. Sur mein dard ho raha tha, toh socha bahar hawa khane ajao, aur meine sab sun bhi liya

Riddhima bows her head down, tears going across her face - I'm sorry

Armaan – tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahin bataya ke tum mere baare mein aisa soch thi ho? (smiles)

Riddhima – haan mein…(realizes what Armaan said)…kya?

Armaan – Meine jabse tumhe dekha toh mere khwabon mein sirf tum aati ho, (walking closer to Riddhima) mein jab tumhe dekhta hoon toh lagta hai, sari problems door hogai, Basket, mein bhi tumse bohot, bohot, bohot pyaar karta hoon.

Ridz – such?

Armaan nods, both hug each other, crying

Armaan wiping ridz tears – ab neeche chalo, sab dhoond rahe honge

Armaan Riddhima inside the house

Atul – arey, tum dono kahan chale gaye the?

Armaan – ek naya rishta banana (winks at Ridz, Ridz smiles)

Atul and Rahul – matlab?

Armaan tells all interns about him and Riddhima, Riddhima shyly smiling

Anjali – (shocked) Riddhima….tum aur Armaan……Weird, per tum dono itne alag ho

Armaan – toh…there are no boundaries for love,am I right basket?

Riddhima – (smiles, says right shyly)

Party over , Anjali and Riddhima in their room

Anjali – this is not fair Riddhima, tum at least mujhe to batade thi ke tum Armaan se pyaar karti ho

Ridz – sorry di, per yeh baat toh Armaan ko bhi nahin pata tha

Anjali – matlab, toh Armaan ne tumse kaha tha ke who tumse pyaar karta hai?

Ridz – nahin di, actually usne mujhe sun liya tha, jab mein uske bare baat kar rahin thi, apne aap se

Anjali – oh, acha, papa ya mom ko pata hai?

Riddhima – nahin di, per aap unse kuch mat kahe ga

Anjali – don't worry, mein kuch nahin kahoongi, chalo mujhe neend bohot arahin hai, good night

Next morning, Sanjeevani

Armaan and Riddhima in the locker room, Armaan gives ridz a rose

Riddhima – aeye nahin, flirting karna shoroo

Armaan – tum nahin jaanti key eh, ek phool meine kabse sambhal kar rakha hai

Ridz – (smiles) Armaan mujhe tumse kuch poochna hai

Armaan – poocho

Riddhima – Tumhare zindagi mein koi aur larki hai kya?

Armaan – nahin, tum mujh per shuck kar rahin ho, kyun?

Riddhima – actually mere khwab mein ayaa tha, ke tum kisi aur larki ke saath…

Armaan – Oye Hoye, ab tum mere khwab bhi dekhti ho

Riddhima – Armaaan…

All the rest of the interns come in

Anjali – tum dono yahaan, hum tumhara kitni der se intezaar karahe the cafeteria mein

Muskaan – choro choro ab yeh dono toh apni dunya mein lost hai, kyun Riddhima

Armaan quietly hold Ridz's hand

Riddhima – (whispers)Armaan mera haath choro

Armaan – nahin, kyun

Ridz – Armaaaaaan

Nikki – tum dono kya chapar chapar kar rahe ho?

Riddhima – kuch nahin, (whispers Armaan mera haath choro)

Anjali hears – Armaan tum Ridz ki baat sunte kyun nahin ho, who keh rahin hai ke haath choro toh choro

All laugh

Nikki – Riddhima tum ise door rahon toh acha hai, yeh hai hi aisa

Riddhima – jaanti hoon

Rahul – haan haan, tumhe obviously Armaan ke baare sab kuch jaanti ho

After duties, Armaan and Riddhima at the staircase

Armaan – chalo ab hum saath hai toh, kyun nahin ek date?

Ridz – date? Chalo theek hai, dekhti hoon ke Dr. Armaan Malik kitne romantic hai

Armaan – kal theek 5:00 pm Raining Garden mein main tumhara intezaar karoonga

Just then a guy comes in – Riddhima, bohot dino baad hamari muleqaat hui hai.

Riddhima turns, has a horrified expression on her face

Armaan – Yeh kaun hai?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~To be continued ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys...should i continue? or leave it??
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This story is moved to th FF section...it's the same title though :)

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