Valentine's night - night of heartbreak

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Posted: 15 years ago
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One year ago, two hearts came together. They didn't realise it at the time. They called it friendship. A renewal, a new beginning of a friendship that had started with hesitant trust on one side, with a lie on the other. Until the lie was exposed, that fragile friendship broke, and both wondered why it had become so important in so short a time. He then moved heaven and earth to get it back, she nursed her hurt without understanding why it hurt so much, till they both gave in to the pull of their souls and hearts and came back together. Friendship, they called it. One year ago.

So much happened in the next year. Friends became best friends, then soulmates, then each other's support and understanding. She being the more mature and introspective, realised her feelings first, but hid them. Because he wanted no more than her friendship. So she gave him that, always, unflinchingly, constantly, until that friendship became the rock of his life. And when he in turn realised that, they could give their friendship a new name.
Love.

Best friends turned lovers - life was idyllic. Life was complete. They needed nothing more. In spite of their widely different backgrounds, in spite of their differing views in life and what they wanted out of it, one thing they both knew. Their lives were complete only with each other, and empty without each other. Love, trust, belonging in equal measure on both sides. That was all they wanted, all they needed.

Or was it? For her, love meant committment, living by the rules of society and her own family believed in, living within the lines drawn for society since man became a social animal. She didn't question those rules, they would apply in her own life when the time came and would set the seal on her love and committment. And for a giddy three days, she thought that time was coming soon, that the seal would be set on the day for lovers, Valentines day. And like a bird, her heart soared, she dreamed dreams and waited for them to be realised on Valentine's day.

For him, love was everything. Love was his committment. He loved her, she loved him and that was enough. The world and its rules didn't matter - those rules weren't set in stone and were fragile and imperfect. He didn't need them. Those rules hadn't been enough to keep his world intact, they had shattered it into pieces when he was very small and he simply didn't believe in them any more. What he believed in was a soulmate to whom he could bare his soul, to whom he could show himself with all his flaws and receive her unconditional love ... she was his only belief, his only need, and her love and his, their only committment.

Valentine's day. Her dreams crashed against his beliefs ... and broke. On a night when lovers come together, his words of love put miles between them. Long before that bullet broke her body, her heart had broken in grieving for her dreams.
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mads thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I . AM . SPEECHLESS .
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well said... 👏 and m happy the CVs had a date wid reality..as the track shown waa quite real...lot of people go through such things in life..and each one is entitled to their belief systems..watever be the circumstances..some make compromises of their beliefs...and some move on... in this track ofcourse we know wats to come...

brilliant piece of acting by sanaya 👏 👏 she made a lot of girls relive their heartbreak and pain....LOVE YOU SANAYA
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautifully written diya! cant add anything else to it! you've described sajans journey perfectly!
Sajan have had a loong and painful journey, well especially gunjan, poor thing is always going through one heartbreak to another, todays was about emtional aswell as physical pain, I really hope sajan recover from this in their own special way, I dont know how but I hope it doesnt end with marriage being the solution...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW! very well written 👏
you described the entire situation so perfectly!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Diya thats really well said, Valentine's night it was a heartbreak for a couple and more closely meeting of hearts for another, its about giving up and in your everything to the one you love, that is what i felt for MN and i felt really sad for SG, i liked Samrat today.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Diyaaaaaaaa!
That was BEAUTIFUL. Just too beautiful!
I haven't been able to catch up with all the episodes I've missed - I'm catching up as I type...But I did see the end of the Valentine's episode, and I was stunned.
Mohit and Sanaya have taken us along this turbulent journey and have been simply amazing as Samrat and Gunjan...Their beliefs and emotions really came to the forefront today, and I was left speechless then...Now, after reading this, I'm still in awe of this Valentine's Night. I simply MUST catch up with everything quickly!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u expressed it so well
I am completely speechless

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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautifully described!!! 👏
Loved it loved it!!!
I am just so curious of what is yet to come....i just hope that Samrat doesn't misunderstand and blame this on Adhiraj!!!

I am just shell shocked because they left us hanging horribly!!! How can they just end the show on her fallin to the floor..and then show us nothing after that??? 🤢
Anyways just loved the way you put their love, life, and relationship in writing, it was truly amazing!

👏

Apart from that....Sanaya and Mohit did an outstanding job as Gunjan and Samrat...their expressions their verbal expressions....just amazing!!! I love both couples infact.....they four did an outstanding job....my words just can't describe how well they have played their roles....i am actually proud to be MJHT fan...because the actors make this show so great!!!😳⭐️
Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 15 years ago
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DiyaS, I completely agree with you and you have analysed the sajan's situation in a beatiful manner. I am yet to come out of the situation of yesterday's episode. Really I felt very bad for sajan, especially gunjan.

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