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Posted: 15 years ago
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hello frndz dis lulu here n dis is ma first creation in fb n its on arti..its an os..m not a gud writer...dis is da potray of ma feelings i had on watching da 300 epi celebration..hope u won kill me if u don lyk it..

do leave ur precious comments aftr reading it n guys padne ke baad muje CG se mat nikaalna haan..ROFL
at da set .....in da vanity van
R:(she's in a bad mood)arjun maine tumse ye pehle bi kahaan tha..i dont lyk all dis...
A: par rati..maine toh bas yunhi tumhe.......
R: dekho hum dono jaante hai ki hum ek doosre ke liye kya feel karte hain....aur main nahi chahti ki humaare mom aur dad yeh sab media ke zariye jaane... tumhe aise nahi karna chaahiye tha....sab kya sochenge????
she walks away angrily...arjun tries 2 stop her but she doesn't...she's not ready 2 talk 2 him.
A: (2 himself) lagta hai sach mein naaraaz hai..
m: hii arjun...toh tum aarahe ho na aaj party mein?
a: haan ....par
jus den rati cums 2 mohit n says
r: mohit ....hum aaj party ke liye saath chalen..?
m: haan sure par tum toh arjun ke
interupting him
r: main abi busy hoon muje shot dene jaana hai ....byee..shaam ko milte hain
m 2 a: yeh rati ko kya hua...guys tumlogon mein ladaayi hui kya? is evry thing alryt?
a: no...tumne dekha na maine usse camere ke saamne
m: oh..toh isiliye naraaz hai...its ok dude..vo jaldi maan jaayegi..
a: hmm....lets hope 4 da best..shaam ko milte hain
at da party.
evry1 wer luking so cute espclly rati n ab
a to m: bohut koshish kiya yaar par nahi maan rahi
m: vo rahi rati sannaya ke paas jao jaa kar baath karke dekhlo...ek aakhri baar
a: haan..main dekhta hoon
m: all da best dude
a: thanx
arjun tries 2 talk 2 rati but she doesn't take notice of him..she asks sanaya 2 excuse her n goes away....arjun is all upset...sanaya is confused ...she doesnot noe wht had really happend b/w da duo..she goes 2 mohit n asks abt it..(guys remembr da scene of da party wer mohit is whispering sumthing in sanaya's ears vry seriously....i donno how 2 upload pics here so pls 4giv me 4 da flaws)..
s: toh ab kya karein?
m: idea!!!
a: kya...
m: main batata hoon..ao
mohit goes 2 rati
m: rati , vo sanaya was searching 4 u...she needs sumthing..
r: wer is she?
m: vo vahaan us room main
r: room! yahaan? ok
rati goes 2 da room ...she finds nobody der so she turns 2 go but stops seeing a "school boy" in chekshirt kneeling down touching his ears with a red water bottle round his neck..n a scool bag.
he bowed his head .....n in a vry passionate voice said
M SORRY..
dis was all enuff 4 rati...she smiled
he lukd up n smiled flashing his cute dimple...
he got up
rati hit him on his shoulders n dey shared a tight hug..
😊(u cud c arjun offering sumthing in his bottle 2 rati..remembr)
dey njoyd da party aftr dat...dey danced 2geda...n did alot of masti
it was tym 2 leave
m to r: rati chalo main tumhe drop kar deta hoon..v r going 2 da same place na..
r: nai..matlab wo...main(luking at arjun)
a 2 m: nai mohit tum jao..main usse drop kar doonga..
m: muje pata tha..main toh bas yunhi..
bye...
a n r: byee
arjun drops rati home aftr a romantic drive ...
r: byee..
a:byee
(she smiles n turns to leave but arjun stoppd her by catching her hand .she faces him n says )
a: m really sry....ab aisa nai hoga..
rati kisses his dimple n says....
r: its okk.. byee..kal milte hain
dats all guys...xpecting all eggs, tomatoes n sandals :P
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice os dear.........
keep it up..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Lulu....Umm nice OS..:))
But hun you gotta post all OS....Ff's in the Fan Fiction corner...:))
Not in the CC section!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aranya

Hey Lulu....Umm nice OS..:))

But hun you gotta post all OS....Ff's in the Fan Fiction corner...:))
Not in the CC section!

oops i din noe dat..
thanx 4 da comment hunny
exams ke liye preparations kaise chal rahe hain?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rose.mn

Very nice os dear.........
keep it up..............

thanx yaar...i thot koi bi yeh padne waala nahi hai..
but really...thank u
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice do write more loved it 2 de core
luv
Fiza
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank u ...mayurian-artian n nidheya 4 reading dz ........

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