os----current trck(pyaar ki ahemiyat)

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Hi, my sweet friends........................me back wid my os. It's been a long time i haven't writen ne
So, thought of writin 1-------------------this is on the current trck of 2day i.e. 12th feb n valentines
So, the story goes like this gunjan by mistakely thinks that samrat is proposing her for marriage and she says yes. Samrat shocked to hear this. Now his dilemma----------wo sure shot shaadi k liye taiyaar nhi hai magar ab kya, kaise wo gunjan se kahega k yeh sab sach nhi hai! yani k wo use propose nhi kar raha tha.
Agar gunjan se sach chupaye to problem aur agar bataye to uska dil tut jayega!!!..............He was there wid benji, n raj in the canteen. they were discussing about this incident .............that samrat sholud tell gunjan k yeh uska vehem hai..................wo actual mein use propose nhi kar raha tha
aur kya lagta hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...........................................gunjan yeh sun leti hai, n silently leaves the place.
....................gunjan's POv:
samrat main kabhi tumhe kisi uljhan mein nhi dalungi, tum chinta mat karo. kal main nhi aaungi valentines baal mein. tumhe koi problem nhi hogi. u don't need to propose me.............
gunjan apne kamre mein baith ke yehi sab soch rhi thi, tabhi diya aati hai uday k saat. n assuming her lost in samrat's dream...............they pokes her............
g: ouch
d: kiye gunjan abhi se samrat k sapno mein kho gayi kya?
g: (hiding the reality) wo...............wo
u: gunjan it's not fair. kal k baad tum bhi nupur ki tarha humse dur chali jaogi (n makes a baby face)
gunjan feels like crying..............but alas she can't show her feelings. she comes n hugs both diya n uday, "main tum logo ko chor ke kahin nhi jaungi................."
nxt day.............everybody is getting ready for the ball, so diya n uday. they comes to gunji's room, finding her sitted on the bed in her normal attire........................
d: yeh kya gunjan, tum abhi tak taiyaar nhi hui
g: wo diya...............mujhe jaane ka mann nhi hai
u: d:..........kya?
g: wo.............
u: samjha............don worry main huna tumhara bhai
diya slaps him on his shoulder
u:ouch!
d: gunjan, magar kyu?...............................(findin her quite) ok samjhi tum nervous ho rhi ho............k aaj jab sammy tumhe sabke samne propose karega to tum kya kahogi
coming beside her, n putting her hand on gunji's shooulder, "bas apni ankhen band karke aaj jo kahan wohi kahe dena.............
u: ha!!
d: exactly.......................ha. ab chalo ready ho jao...............ok main tumhe taiyaar karti hu
n she forcibly gunjan ko taiyaar karti hai.....................
she was wearing a strapless white coloured salwaar with red sotes lined at the border (plz imagine it)
g: diya, main yeh ......................plz........................
d: bas tum kuch nhi kahogi......................u r simply looking stunnig. aaj to sammy marne wala hai...............
g: diya, yeh kya bol rhi ho tum?
d: i mean...................waise nhi, mera matlab hai, tumpar marne wala hai.................
then they goes to the ball...................
isi beech wo gunde pahauch jaate hai college .....................they already have taken entry n is roaming around. suddenly they bumps onto somebody.............n the person looks up probably to say sorry but stops in the midway..................it's samrat.
s: tum? (getting angry) tum yahan kaise
gunda: kyun kahan tha na.................main yahan aaunga. lo aa gaya
s: tumhe yahan aane diya kisne?
gunda: koi mujhe roke...................bachchu koi maikalal aaj tak payda nhi hua jai...............jo mere samne kahada ho sake samjhe..................................
s: thik hai to fir tumhari yeh galat faymi bhi aaj dur kar deta hu
but b4 he takes ne action some one calls him n as he turns to ans they escapes. samrat goes in search of them. in the meantime gunjan arrives with diya n uday. everybody jaws drop down at gunji's first glance. ladkiyon ki baat chodo aaj to ladke bhi apne apne sar phorne lage the diwaar pad yeh soch ke "main kyun nhi................kash..............kash gunjan meri gf hoti. kyun, kyun maine samrat se pahele use propose nhi kiya.........."...................dat too infront of their respective gf's!!!!!!!!!!!!!
d: kyun maine kahan tha na...................in sabki yeh halat hai, socho sammy ka kya reaction hone wala hai!!!
mayur comes to them
n: gunjan!!!!!!! by god aaj kya lag rhi hai tu, tune ddlj k simran ko bhi maat de di? hai kisi ki nazar na lage (sayin this she puts kajal behind gunji's ear)
m:waise simran to yahan hai, par hamara raj kahan hai?????????
su: bhai.....................idhar hi kahin hoga (comin to them)
d: ok guys u enjoy main thodi preparations dekhke aati hu
n she leaves wid uday. after sometime mayur too leaves then suhani on adiraj's call. gunjan finding herself alone loiters here n there................................in her heart wish to meet samrat, tho she is afraid...................
she goes out in the garden area.......................while walking she hears some noise. out of curiosity she follows the direction of noise n to her dismay -----------------samrat finding with two three boys..............she recognises one of them to be that eve-teaser. b4 she is able to understand nething the guy takes out his gun n points it to samrat
gunjan was standing at a distance on the same side of samrat..........................she just runs n as the guy presses his trigger..........................the bullet comes out.......................samrat only felt a push n he is on the ground......................he turns n "CHASHMISHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"
it's gunjan standing in his place her salwaar drenched in bloo. she looses her balance n feels down. sarat rans to her.............................by this time the goons ran away
s: (holding gunjan in his arms) chashmish.......................chashmish main tumhe kuch nhi hone dunga.....................main abhi........................
he was going to call others, but gunjan stops him holding his collar
g: samrat...................plz..........plz mujhe chodke mat jao
s:tumhe kuch nhi hoga chashmish...................main tumhe kuch nhi hone dunga
samrat has almost lost his control, n to some extent starts blaberring like a psycho patient
g: main jaanti hu, tum shaadi mein bharosa nhi rakhte ho..............aur is zanjeer mein apne aapko bandhna nhi chahate................koi baat nhi, is janam mein na sahi kisi aur janm mein main tumhari girl friend se wife zarur ban jaungi....................i.........................i love u.........................sa.....................she loses her consciousness
s: chashmish...................chashmish..................aakhe kholo.................ankhen kholo chashmish...................................he starts shaking her vigorously. getting no response from her side he screams out loud. hearing the outburst all comes out...............................
they takes gunjan to hospital......................the whole gang is present
nupur n diya crying like nething while suhani trying to pacify them. benji n uday totally speechless. they r shattered completely. mayank n raj talking with the doctor.....................................n samrat.....................................................he was standing like a statue outside gunjan's ward looking at her through the glass door................................
the only diffrence b/w him n gunjan was she was lying on bed while he was standing, both were dead .........................somewhat
doctor: ji, hume patient ka jald se jald operation karna hai, so kuch formalities hai jo pure karne parenge..................aap mese uska kareebi rishtedaar koi hai
su: ha, yeh uski didi hai (pointing to nupz)
dc:thik hai aap mere saat aayiye. nupur follows him to his cabin
by now suhani hac controlled diya, n is looking for samrat..................she finds him
su: bhai................(no response) bhai..................(again no response)...................she shakes him, but in vain
suhani frantically runs to benji, "benji wo..............bhai"
mayank n raj too present now................
r: kya baat hai suhani
su: raj...............raj...........wo bhai wo ..............kuch kahe nhi raha hai
m: kya matlab?
they goes to samrat....................the door is open n gunjan is taken to the operation theatre....................................instead of following samrat stands there, looking at gunjan's body ......................................he has no expressions on his face.........no tears in his eyes
n: (pressin mayank's shoulder looking at samrat) mayank.......................
m: samrat............................
everybody looks at each others face......................they r horrified.
it's clear samrat is still in shock..............n is not able to overcome it.
d: (very softly) mayank kuch karo...............
su: bhai................bhai plz kuch bolo.............bhai gunjan, gunjan ka operation hone jaa raha hai....................tumhari chashmish bhai.................wo tumhari chashmish hai
shayad, aaj agar bhagwaan bhi aa jaye to bhi samrat ko thik karna na mumkin hai
b: adhiraj.................sam ko ho kya gaya hai..............
u: ha , yeh kuch bol kyuin nhi raha
r: bolna nhi...................use rulana parega
d: rulana
m: ha guys, adhiraj thik kahe raha hai..............................samrat jis condition mein hai use rulana bahaut zaruri hai............warna kuch bhi ho sakta hai, he can become psychotic as well
r: ha, use is sadme se bahar lana bahaut zaruri hai, aur yeh kaam tum kar sakti ho nupur
n: (shocked)..............main,
m: main jaanta hu nupur k tum par abhi kya beet rhi hai.................magar yeh mat bhulo agar samrat ko kuch ho gaya to gunjan bhi zinda nhi rahegi...........kisi aur k liye nhi apni bahen k kahtir samrat ko rulao nupur....................use rulao, uske andaar chal rahe tufaan ko bahar laao............
nupur k liye shayad 24hrs library mein bathke kitabein parna shayad zyaada aasan hota isse................lekin aaj use yeh karna hi parega................apni bahen k khatir, apne apno k khatir
she approaches samrat n makes him sit on a bench, near to the operation thatre................she starts reminding him about the time he had spent wid gunjan............
n: samrat yaad hai hamari wo welcome party...................kis tarha darr k marein gunjan ne jako ko dhakka mar diya tha..................aur fir blind folding khelte khelte khud hi pool mein gir gayi......................................fir dusre din wo tumhara bhavesh se samrat banna................usne to sapne mein bhi nhi socha tha ki bhavesh ek itna handsome ladka hoga.........waise sach bolu to use shayad samrat se zyaada bhavesh hi pasand hai................(while talking all these she tries to laugh but in turn ters starts rolling down he eyes)...............................wo talent parade, really u r a genious samrat................jo kaam maine nhi kar payi wo, tumne karke dikha diya, use stage par gawaya, sabke samne................us din kitni khush thi wo (her voice gets cholked as she recollects the incident).....................tum dono dost bane, dosti tuti................lekin tum nhi. by god maine tumhe ahmedabad jaane se pahele kahan tha use tangh na karne k liye, tum ho k use apne best friend bana lye!!!!!!!....................wo bhi aise k wo pagli dosti k bajaye tumpar mar miti.......................
she went on talking but there'sno response from samrat........................at the end not able to control herself nupur ran away from there...................she comes out of the hospital followed by mayank............................
m: nupur, nupur....................kya hua tum is tarha bahar kyun chali aayi
n: (still crying..........buring her head in his chest) i'm sorry mayank.........mujhe se nhi hoga, main haar gayi mayank main haar gayi.
while consoling nupur mayank's eye falls on a shop on the opposite side of the road. he pulls her away n points his finger indicating something out ther in the display of it................
d: suhani ab kya........................sammy to kuch kahe hi nhi raha hai!!!
b4 nething more is said mayur arrives
su: achcha hua tum dono aa gaye.....................bhai abh bhi waise hi baitha hai.............
nupur goes to samrat, still sitting...................sits on her knees in front of him, holds his hand n puts sumthin on his palm--------------------------it's a dancing couple,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,just the same one which he had once gifted her
this was what mayank showed nupur in the display of that shop
...........................this is the first time in past 4 hrs we find some movement in samrat.................his eyes moves n he lookes at the dancing couple
memories starts flashing in front of his eyes------------------------the first time he gifted gunjan some flower as bhavesh.......................then the red roses on 1st april...................the flower rain on rose day.......................his confession in moreana...................their first date.....................last date in farm house.......................gunjan's voice "ha...........main shaadi k liye taiyaar hu......."
he started shiverring................he looked at nupur n broke into tears. yes he cried out at last. nupur stood up. all came n sat beside samrat.
s: (holoding nupz hands, as if pleading) nupur tum to chashmish ki bahen hona...............uski sabse achchi friend, then plz plz nupur use bolona mere paas wapas aa jane k liye
.................................main nhi ji paunga uske bina........wo tumhari baat zarur manegi, tum uski best friend hona..........(then looking at mayank) mayank, samjhaona nupur ko, wo mujh se naaraz hai, isiliye nhi maan rhi hai, but believe me.............main itna bhi bura nhi hu...........main chashmish ko bahaut khush rakh khunga.............plz mayank samjhaona nupur ko chashmish se jaake baat kare
n,m: smrat................samrat hamari baat............................
samrat paid no heed to their words n started looking here n there searching for some1...........chashmish! chashmish kahan hai?
b4 nebody answers, the doctor arrives n says that the operation is over n it's successful within 5-6 she will be back to sense
s: doctor kya main use dekh sakta hu
dc: sure, lekin ward mein shift karne k baad..............but dhyaan rahe awwaz mat karna, aur ek ek karke aap sabhi usse mil sakte hai
n: ji nhi dctr, hum gunjan ko bahar se hi dekh lenge, samrat hi andjayega uske paas............abhi use humse zyaada samrat ki zarurat hai
samrat looks at her, unable to believe................this is the same nupur who was advicing gunjan to stay away fromhim just a few days back n now here she is backing off..........................
nupur nods her head as if saying ha samrat bjaao apne chashmish k paas..............koi nhi cheenega use tumse
after she is shifted he goes n sits beside her...................as he looks at her unconcious body her last few words starts bizzing near his ears................."tum shaadi mein bharosa nhi rakhte ho..............aur is zanjeer mein apne aapko bandhna nhi chahate................koi baat nhi, is janam mein na sahi kisi aur janm mein main tumhari girl friend se wife zarur ban jaungi....................i.........................i love u......................."
he was staring at her..................his eyes appeared to be calm like water.................he was not at all blinking.................tears statrs pourong out drop by drop.......................................
it was morning......................samrat still sitting in the same position, dekhke aisa lagta hai jaise saari raat nhi soya hai, bas apni chashmish ko ghur raha hai.......................
...............after a while gunjan starts crinkling her eyes, use hosh mein aate dekh samrat wahi baithe baithe doctor ko bulata hai...............ab uski halat kuch aisa hai, k wo kisi bhi kimat par gunjan ko apne nazron se dur hi hone de sakta.....................doctor comes n checks her pulse
by now the gang arrives, ........................slowly gunjan opens her eyes..............she looks up to find everybody standing and staring at her. she looks around and as she tries to get up, somebody stops her
"abhi aap bahaut kamzor hai, uthne ki koshish mat kijiye:................she looks and from the appaerence she under stanads that he is a doctor....................she then lloks at nupz in puzzle. "di main...............yahan................kaise?"
n: gunjan wo kal raat...................................
gunjan : kal raat..................aur use dheerey dheerey sab kuch yaad aa jati hai
dc: u r very lucky, jitna khoon bahe chuka tha, bachne k chances bahaut kam the............but still. u should thank to god...................not only god, apke in doston ko bhi.................n specially him. kal jaad apko operation theatre mein hum le jaa rahe the meri nazar in par padi thi.................he was totally speechless
n: ha gunjan, kal uski halat itni kahrab ho gayi thi..............hum sab darr gaye the kahi samrat ko kuch na ho jaye......................ek paththat ki murat ban gaya tha wo
dc: kal raat bhi yeh yahan se bilkul nhi hile...................sari raat yahin baithe rahe aapke samne................u r very lucky that he loves u so much
hearing all these samrat looks down as he feels embarassed. the doctor leaves. after sometime others to bids goodbye, thinking they should spent sometime together............................however samrat stops them
s:ek minute guys, mujhe kuch kahena hai...............(turning to gunjan) tumse chashmish.
everybody starts looking at each other.................
s: i know day b4 yesterday tak main sirf tumse pyaar karta tha................bahaut bahaut pyaar. shayad itna pyaar maine kabhi pane aapse bhi nhi kiya hoga. par mujhe nhi pata tha tum mere zindegi mein kitni important ho....................kal pata chala ......................jab tum mere bahon mein khoon se lipti hui behosh pari thi...................tab mujhe realise hua chashmish tum mere zindegi ga hissa nhi meri zindegi ho.................us waqt mujhe aisa mehsoos hua jaise mera bhagwaan mujhse ruth gaya ho................mujhe chor kar jaa raha ho..............mujhe nhi pata tha bhagwan ka dusra naam samrat ki zindegi mein chashmish hai..................
g: samr...........aat
s: aaj tak main shayad hi kisi se jealous feel kiya ho....................par kal, ,,,,,,,,,,,kal hua tha jab mayakn aur nupur ko ek saat dekha, dekha kaise mayank uska saat de raha tha, aur wo mayank ka...................jab mayank use kahe rah tha........."hum dono pati patni hai, ek dusre ka saat nhi denge to fir kisa denge.............."................mano kisine mere dil ko challi kar raha ho.............
kal saari raat yahan baith kar tumhe dekhta raha aur bas ek hi sawal karta raha pane aap se..................aakhir kyun kyun main itna unlucky hu?..................kyun main itna akela hu.................tab koi mujhse kahan............kyunki mere paas meri chashmish nhi hai, mujhe sambhalne k liye....................(coming n sitting in front of her).................bolo na chashmish kya tum dogi mera saat hamesha hamesha k liye.....................puri zindegi bhaar
gunjan, unable to understand the meaning of what he was trying to say...................
s: chashmish , aaj pata chala hai mujhe tumhari ahemiyaat meri zin degi mein.................tum sirf mera pyaar meri girf friend nhi ho.................balki sab kuch ho, mera nindh, meri chain,,,,,,,,,,,,mere har saans mein tum ho, dil ki har dhadkan ka naam tum ho............ab insaan bina saan liye kaise jiye?.................to kya tum apne is stupid samrat ko zinda dekhna chahati ho??????? kya tum use tumhe apna kahene ka haq dogi?
KYA TUM MUJH SE SHAADI KAROGI CHASHMISH.................................WILL U MARRY ME??????
.........................................while sayin this he sits on his knees on the follr just beside her bed. she completely shocked......................loses all her verbal pwer, just nods her head
everybody starts clapping n samrat atkes out a ring he was wearing in his finger n put in in gunjan's middle finger (i mean the 1 meant for wearin engagement ring)....................then he gets up sits beside her.........................cups her face kissing her forehead n finaaly giving a tight hug
others simply starts clapping.........................the doctor too joins them.................he was outside hearin the convo😉
so, hope u all will like it.................plz do comnt after readin n if not possible to comnt then press the like button
n ya mujhe pata hai mere sarein readers abhi puchenge kab main apne ffs update karne wali hu...............wel bahaut jald..............bas thoda aur intezaar😉

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omg finnie thats awesome...all this we r gonna see in many epis but u did that in just one....its simply amazing n fantabulous dear...u totally rock!!!! 👍🏼 n sam he made me cry again.....n thats what i am fearing the most..when in real all these things will occur...it will be not possible 4 me to stop tears.but for u.....
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that was brilliant thank u for the pm it was such an amazing one shot thanks once again i loved on how u based it on the current track i hope it turns like ur ff because i LOVED it
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heya
awesome
i totally loved it
stupedously amazing
i felt like crying out
thanks for the pm
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This was AWESOMEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you make me cry too much in ur os and ss's
it was mindblowing esp the proposal : )
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wowow tht was soo dam cool OS
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Wow Yaar Zabardast!!!
Kaash Aisa Sach mein Hojae!!
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oh my god!!!...that was awesome girl!!👏👏👏....i was crying the entire time i was reading it...wow!!...i loved it!!
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee dear...
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i have no words to expressss.....justttt awesome!!!!!!!!

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