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Hello people,
This is my first topic ever! How do you think the current YuNa track, with Yuvi revealing everything to Naina will turn out? Please feel free to post your version of how you wish the scene come together. Here's mine:
Yuvi invites Naina to a fancy place
Yuvi: Naina, this is our second official date...but I hope its not our last.
Naina: Yuvi! Why are you saying that? Please dont say that!
Yuvi: I love you beyond anything you can every imagine...and I want more than anything for our relationship to last lifetimes. I still remember, Tamanna's mother telling us that foundation for ever-lasting relationships are based on trust. It was maybe because I love you so much, that I was scared of telling you the truth about myself. But your dedicated love and utmost belief has moved me so much, that I now have enough faith in our love to overcome the fear of losing you.
Yuvi spoke the last sentence with an air of confidence that was so typical of Yuvi...even Naina noticed that tense in his voice that was there for the past week (ever since Raj came) was gone...and he was back...or was he?...Only Yuvi knew, that his outer portrayal was so contrasting to the conflict going on inside his heart. But, he did not let fear radiate outside...the raw truth was that he would not survive if Naina left him...this was D-day for him. He held Naina by her shoulders gently, more for suppport than reassurance and poured his heart out. He did not realize when the outer wall of false confidence came crumbling down. The next thing he knew, he was in Naina's arms. Her hands patted his hair with so much care and affection. She brought his head down to her face and when she spoke, her voice trembled, reflecting the state of her heart after listenting to his story.
Naina: Yuvi! My love for you is pure and unconditional. I love you for who you are and always will. I feel grateful that I can share your pain with you and provide you some relief. I am upset only about one thing, you did not trust my love enough before to share this with me earlier...it must have hurt you so much to keep all this pain within (she said with tears in her eyes).
Yuvi saw Naina's love in the form of tears in her eyes, moved by how much she still cared about him. He wiped the tears from her eyes and embraced her tightly. After what seemed like ages before they broke apart, without delay, Yuvi popped her the question.
Yuvi: Naina, marry me, please.
Naina: Yuvi...
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Well, of course Naina agreed (sorry, I kinda ran out of my romantic quota for the day)...and they lived happily ever after. 😛
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Ok folks, give me your feedback on my little OS here and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do also post your version of how the revelation will come along.
- SB 😊
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