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@RKDramebaaz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: arman_karan
hi

so sorry for being late

i won't give explanation.......well as this part

it's nice ,cool with lots of attitude

armaan and car race looks interesting

thanks for pm
will wait for next update

Heyy
Howr u?
Its ok about the late cmment.
m happy that u atleast cmmented..!
Thnnxxx..!
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@RKDramebaaz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#242

Hey guyz here is my Part 6..!

Tam & Avi goes to search for Ridzi...
On this side...Armaan and Adi are with DEVILS....

Lets go to Avi and Tam First..
They were now on in the hallway of their highschool...which was empty as the classes has already started..! But they were allowed to go around as it was their first day.
Tam- Pata nahi kaha gai hogi...What will she do..? She doesnt even know the way around here...
Avi- Dont worry Tamanna we will find her out..
Tam- But avinash she doesnt know anything about this school..!
Avi- I know we all are new but you have to understand you cant panic like this...!
Tam- I guess you are right...but now where would she be?
Avi- Koi aisi jagah hai joh use bahot achhi lagti ho?
tam- hmmm...yes...she will be on terrace...lets go check there! but where is it..?
Avi- lets ask someone around..
He went to a man sweeping the floor there.
Avi- Hi..woh aap bata sakte hai ki terrace kaha hai?
Sw- Ji..yaha se sidhe jaakar baaye mud jaana waha pe aapko sidi(stairs) dikhay denge..wahi par upar chale jaana.
Avi- Shukriya..
Sw- No problem
Avi and Tam were surprised how can he speak english.
But guys i guess they didn't knew...EAST OR WEST INDIA IS THE BEST..!
So they went where the sweeper told him to.
And their she was. Leaning on the white railing of the terrace.
Tam- Ridzi..yaha kya kar rahi hai tu?Tujhe pata hai sab kitne pareshan hai?specially Adi..
Rid- Tam calm down..woh waha niche mujhe kuchh achha nahi lag raha tha..toh..
Tam- Toh tum kisiko bataye bina hi agayi?
Rid- achha meri maa sholly bas? ...Yeh kaun hai?
(looking at avi)
Tam - Oh oops..! Yeh Avinash hai. new student just like us...iska bhai bhi aaya hai...
Rid- (flashing a really swet smile) Hii..! I am Riddhima you can call me Ridzi..
Avi- Hi...and you can call me Avi too..!
They smiled at each other and then they started to go back to their friends.
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On this side,,.
Dev- Are you sure tum logo ko race karni hai?
Adi- Kya hua? bache ko dar kag raha hai?
Both Adi and Armaan laughed and devils got as angry as ever..!
Dev- Thik hai toh next sunday, subah 9 baje death valley ke paas we will race..!!
Ar- ok..
Luc- but kisi bet ke bina race karne mein kya mazaa?
Adi and Armaan smirked..
Eric- why dont we do this..jo hara woh saamne waala jo kahega woh karega.....
Ar- this is too common yaar...
Vicky-Toh jo jita yeh ladki(pointing to kar) uske group mein rahegi..
Adi flared up at this- you cheap..
But Armaan stopped him..
Ar- hey mind you...This race is between three boys from our side and three from your Devils group..!
Sam- Ok then joh haara use school ko ek party deni hongi..agar tum haare toh tumhe hamare liye specially DEVILS ke liye Party deni hogi..Aur hum haare toh hum tumhe Welcome Party denge..!
Avi-Adi looked at each other and chuckled...
AA- DEAL..!!!!!!!
After this DEVILS went away...
Just then avi tam and ridzi came there...
When Riddhima and armaan looked at each other
Armaan - TUM?
Ridzi-YOU?
Ar - TUM aur YOU ka meaning hai...
Ridzi- Shut up! what the hell are you doing here?
Ar- Armaan naam ke logo ko padhne ki permission nahi hai kya?
Adi - hey guyz...tum log ladh kyu rahe ho?
Rid- adi tum ise jaante nahi ho
Adi- Ridzi mein use janta hu..yeh Armaan Singh hai..Avi ka bhai..!
Ridzi ooked at both of them unbelievingly...
Ri- Yeh langoor Avi bhai hai?
Ar- hey mind your tongue...
Ri- Langoor ko langoor nahi toh kya Prince charming bulaungi...
Ar- Waise toh sab bulate hai tum bhi bula sakti ho Basket...
Ri- Prince my My foot...Aur tumne Abhi mujhe kya bulaya?
Ar- Behri ho kya.??? BAKSET?
Ri- Dont call me that...
Ar- Basket basket basket..
Ri- Tumna..
Ar- bahot handsome hu..i know..batabe ki zaryrat nahi hai..!
Ri- ughhh...
Others are still enjoying their fight when Suddenly..
" Yeh kya ho raha hai yaha?"

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So here was my Part..
I will Update CUPID PLAYED ITS ROLE..! now
I will do alternate...
Do comment guys..
and Press the LIKE button..!

Luv
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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#243

reserved!!

*edited*

short part.. =(
but its all good...
as long as you updated/ 😆
i loved one specific thing in your part though..
i mean the whole part was awsome..
but one part that i absolutely LOVED...

when you said..

"EAST OR WEST.. INDIA IS THE BEST"

thats sooo true yaar!!
i LOOVVVEEE indiaa....
i wish i could go back...

anyways..
otherwise..
the armaan and ridzy convo was funny too
langoor and basket... 😆😆😆

anyways.. im gonna be waiting for the nxt part of this...
make it long this timee 😉
lol..

luv,
HiNaL

btw... im first to comment... YAAAYYY 😳

Edited by basket_101 - 15 years ago

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Mary/ Penname: Zoe

@KrazyRedMary

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#244

HEY
YIPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I AM SECOND WHICH IS NOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT SO BAD
ANYWAYS IT WAS AWESOME
BUT ARMAAN AUR RIDDHIMA KAB MILA ( AGAR TUM BATA CHOKI HO TU WAPIS BATA DANA BECAUSE I COMPLETLY FORGOT IT)
YAAR MERE CHOTA SAY BRAIN MEIN ITNI SAARI BAATA CHALTI HAI KA KYA BATAO
OK BACK TO THE TOPIC
LOVE IT
I AM SPEECHLESS DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY
I WILL KEEP READING AND U KEEP UPLOADING
AUR AGLI BAAR MEIN PHELE SYA HI RES KARLOGE
ANYWAYS I AM SAD
LUV U
UR MARY

Edited by armaankashridz - 15 years ago

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@RKDramebaaz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: basket_101
reserved!!

*edited*

short part.. =(
but its all good...
as long as you updated/ 😆
i loved one specific thing in your part though..
i mean the whole part was awsome..
but one part that i absolutely LOVED...

when you said..

"EAST OR WEST.. INDIA IS THE BEST"

thats sooo true yaar!!
i LOOVVVEEE indiaa....
i wish i could go back...

anyways..
otherwise..
the armaan and ridzy convo was funny too
langoor and basket... 😆😆😆

anyways.. im gonna be waiting for the nxt part of this...
make it long this timee 😉
lol..

luv,
HiNaL

btw... im first to comment... YAAAYYY 😳

Thnxx Cutie
I know I miss INDIA ALOT too..!
And I will try my best to update my next post soon...!!

love ya too
Doll
Sorry i dont have trophie like Mary...!!!

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Dhruvika

@dhruvikaluvsKSG

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#246

hey prachi

nice part

loved it

i dont get y whenever they meet whether in serial or ff for the first time or second they start to fight but its really gud to see their cute banter always n the way they described each other as langoor n basket is her name but langoor...............lol it was cool

cont soon n thx for pm

luv

aana

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@RKDramebaaz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: dhruvikagarg
hey prachi
nice part

loved it

i dont get y whenever they meet whether in serial or ff for the first time or second they start to fight but its really gud to see their cute banter always n the way they described each other as langoor n basket is her name but langoor...............lol it was cool

cont soon n thx for pm

luv

aana

Heyy
thnxx
actually i really miss KASH fyts alot..
n so i thot of makin them fight..
dont wrry...
i wont make them fyt for long but
for a really looooooooonnnnnnggggg tymm
sry cant help it..!
as AR ki yahi khasiyat hai..!
Luv
prats

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Dhruvika

@dhruvikaluvsKSG

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: Prachi173

Heyy
thnxx
actually i really miss KASH fyts alot..
n so i thot of makin them fight..
dont wrry...
i wont make them fyt for long but
for a really looooooooonnnnnnggggg tymm
sry cant help it..!
as AR ki yahi khasiyat hai..!
Luv
prats

i know n i love it too