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Guys hope you like this 1 hour special i enjoyed it a lot...
this update is longer than usual as it has ateast 7 parts some portion are too many dialogues and others are only action...
Last epi
:-Ansh & Shubh send Yashoda with money to Madhukar...
:-Arjun sees Yashoda taking the money when unknowingly Gayatri scares
Yashoda she drops the money which she was hiding in the pooja platter..
:-Ansh to keep an eye on Arjun guards his room...
:-Shubh also checking on Ansh as to know whether Arjun is in his room...
:-Arjun after seeing Yashoda with the money asks Mamaji to follow Yashoda
:-Mamaji follows and sees Yashoda giving money to Madhukar...
:-Arjun escapes from his room playing music...
:-Ansh thinks Arjun is still in his room listening to music...
Swarg 6th Feb 1 hour special
Continuity scenes...no scene breaks only parts
Part 1
Ansh comes to Shubh asks whether Yashoda has called..
Shubh says not yet & calls Yashoda...
Yashoda takes the call & Shubh asks did she give money to Madhukar...
Yashoda says yes...tells Shubh to talk to Madhukar...
Madhukar says yes he's got his money but there is a problem Arjun is in his place
Shubh says he will just call him back in sometime...
Shubh says Madhukar is saying Arjun has gone to his place...
Ansh says he was keeping an eye on him all the time how did it happen..
Shubh tells Ansh to check..he runs to Arjun's room...
Madhukar is wondering why isn't Shubh calling him and calls his helper Gopi and tells him that take Suhani out from there by any excuse and come out i will ask Shubh to come there and take Suhani...
Gopi is speechless as Arjun has gun pointed towards him...
Arjun snatches Gopi's cellphone and tells Madhukar it is Arjun...
shouts that now he will not spare as he's cheated, at last you have shown your real face...asks him to bring the money...
Madhukar says he is not shown his real face but he had cheated him instead when he kept all the money...tells he has only 2
crores but you have 10 crores so i am leaving...
Arjun says he did not really understand what he asked him to do now you will come with the money or else i will inform the police about this Suhani kidnapping fiasco he will never be able to hide as police will always follow him...
Madhukar keeps the call scared and calls Shubh that Arjun is very dangerous and says Arjun is really ready to do anything he's threatening me that he will tell the police about him...
Shubh says Madhukar just give me your address...
Madhukar tells him the place...
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Part 2
Arjun is very angry and Suhani asks Arjun why is he doing this to them as we are one family... and his Shubh brother loves him...
Arjun says he will never believe in his family ever as only Yashoda was the one but she also loves Shubh her step mother more that him how can he trust people who have always given more importance to Shubh...he is a handicap but he has always lived a life of a handicap now he has always had to beg for everything and that he's never got anything that he should get...Arjun threatens Suhani that what he's never got easily from SNT Shubh and Yashoda now he will get that by his strength he will not spare anyone who betrays him...points his
gun on Suhani & Gopi...
Suddenly Arjun hears a voice of can trumbling down and looks up at staircase asks who's there he asks and points gun.. says will shoot you...
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Part 3
Arjun points gun and tells no one will move from here...
Yashoda comes down from the stares & is shocked to see Arjun pointing gun at her...she sees Suhani they hug each other...Suhani cries...
Yashoda calms her down..
Yashoda asks Suhani to come with her but Arjun stops them...
Yashoda and Suhani keeps looking at Arjun...
Yashoda shouts that what is he doing how can he not be shameful after doing wrong to his own brother and bhabhi...how can he she is ashamed to see him like this...it would have been good if he had dies when he was born...& she curses that day when he was born...
Arjun shouts that yes he is bad but he also ashamed to be born to her as a son he is a Ravan...he is fed up of her & son Shubh and the matter of fact he hates everyone her Shubh and SNT...
Yashoda slaps Arjun asks her what is he saying???
Arjun warns Yashoda not to come in his way as he doesn't have problem with her but only with Shubh who's an enemy...
Yashoda says this only the last thing that is left for him even she wants to see how a son can kill his own mother...
Suhani pleads Yashoda not to provoke Arjun...
Arjun gives a final warning and fires but Suhani holds Arjun's hand and diverts his gun pointing on the roof...
Arjun and Suhani are restling with each other and Yashoda also tries to help Suhani but suddenly there is a gun shot!!!!!!!!!!!
Suhani Arjun & Yashoda all are tensed finally Yashoda falls on the ground...
Suhani shouts and tells Yashoda nothing will happen to her..
Arjun is tensed but doesn't really realize he has killed his own
mother....
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Part 4
Arjun shamelessly leave Yashoda in pool of blood Suhani weeps badly with fear o losing Yashoda...
Arjun is about to run but Madukar comes and Arjun points the gun and asks Madhukar to give the money...
Madhukar is giving the money but suddenly hits Arjun with his bag...
Madhukar and Arjun have a fight Gopi also tries to save Madhukar but he gets a blow by Arjun and he falls...
fight gets nasty and Suhani is waking Yashoda from falling unconscious....
Arjun badly hits Madhukar..
Suhani keeps crying helplessly...
Yashoda is slowly succumbing in the pain...
Gopi tries to hit Arjun with a rod but Arjun hits him Gopi's head is full blood..
Madhukar tries to kill Arjun with his dagger but he's unable to restle Arjun...
Arjun finally stabs Madhukar & kills him...
Suhani shouts and wants to save Yashoda...
Arjun looks at Suhani and comes closer...stars to drag Suhani with him leaving Yashoda helpless...
Yashoda suddenly gets up and stops Arjun...
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Part 5
Yashoda was bleeding but gets up and points the gun at Arjun...
threatens Arjun to leave Suhani or else she will kill him...
Arjun tries to emotionally blackmail her that she cannot kill her own son..
Yashoda says she can afford to loose her son but not her house'srespect...
Arjun says she can kill him but cannot kill Suhani... keeps a knife on Suhani's neck...
Yashoda fires the gun and Arjun gets shot on his arm...
Arjun gets a shocker... Suhani is out of Arjun's grip...tries to run towards Yashoda but she asks Suhani to run for her life...
Suhani firstly hesitates but runs away...
Arjun snatches gun from Yashoda who's bleeding badly runs to catch Suhani...
Suhani runs away and Arjun follows her...
Shubh and Ansh reach Madhukar's place and see Madhukar and Gopi..
Yashoda calls Shubh's name and Ansh & Shubh are dead shocked..
Shubh says Ansh to lift Amma but Yashoda refuses and says Arjun is gone to follow Suhani asks him to save her as her time is up...
Shubh cries and says no amma we will take you to hospital nothing will happen...
Yashoda says no she has done many wrong things so she's got her punishment she starts to choke...
Ansh runs to bring water...
Shubh cries seeing Yashoda nearing death...
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Part 6
Arjun is following Suhani...
Suhani covers herself up with sarees pallu and hides in a temple...
Arjun comes bleeding and stops near a thelawala {street wendor} takes the red cloth and ties...as the wendor asks why is he taking stuff for free but sees him bleeding & lets him go...Arjun looks here and there but doesn;t see Suhani as her head and face is covered...
Suhani bumps into a woman...
Woman asks Suhani she's looking tired and also got hurt marks is she in some problem...
Suhani says she had an accident there's no problem... & asks woman her name she says her name is Rani...
Rani asks Suhani to pray with her as her problems will vanish...
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Part 7 Last part
Suhani comes out of the temple is scared as Arjun might be somewhere near....
Suhani prays backround chants playing {Om bhuur Bhuas swaha}
Arjun comes to the temple looks here and there and sees Suhani praying stops.. looks at her from a little distance...
Rani asks Suhani why is she scared and asks her to come with her to circles of the temple (Parikrama)...
Suhani and Rani are done with their prayers and Rani asks Suhani...
Rani gives a thread to her and asks her to wish and tie the thread to a tree to pray...Rani tells Suhani if she doesn;t mind she can take her to a doctor... after that she has to rest for a while...
Suhani says lets go... she starts taking circles of the temple...
Arjun stands and only sees from far away...
Suhani is taking circles and suddenly Arjun comes infront and Suhani gets scared...
They both look at each other Arjun is fiercfully staring...Suhani has no way to escape...
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Monday Precap: Ansh comes to temple looking for Suhani.. meets Rani co-incidently...asks he needs help...Rani says who is he.. he says his name is Ansh and he's looking for his Bhabhi Suhani...Rani says Suhani... Precap ends there...
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All together I rate it a 4/5 simply because 45 minutes that 5 parts were amazing but last 6 & 7 part were dull.... so i rate it excellent but Arjun was simply gr8...Yashoda's death was justified....Shubh and Ansh were wasting time i really felt if they had come right on time...that did not feel right and yes Suhani was really looking weak as if she was really kidnapped lol but fair job she did but still the last part was a little lame... suddenly Arjun finding Suhani...Verdict:End could have been more better...
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this update is longer than usual as it has ateast 7 parts some portion are too many dialogues and others are only action...
Last epi
:-Ansh & Shubh send Yashoda with money to Madhukar...
:-Arjun sees Yashoda taking the money when unknowingly Gayatri scares
Yashoda she drops the money which she was hiding in the pooja platter..
:-Ansh to keep an eye on Arjun guards his room...
:-Shubh also checking on Ansh as to know whether Arjun is in his room...
:-Arjun after seeing Yashoda with the money asks Mamaji to follow Yashoda
:-Mamaji follows and sees Yashoda giving money to Madhukar...
:-Arjun escapes from his room playing music...
:-Ansh thinks Arjun is still in his room listening to music...
Swarg 6th Feb 1 hour special
Continuity scenes...no scene breaks only parts
Part 1
Ansh comes to Shubh asks whether Yashoda has called..
Shubh says not yet & calls Yashoda...
Yashoda takes the call & Shubh asks did she give money to Madhukar...
Yashoda says yes...tells Shubh to talk to Madhukar...
Madhukar says yes he's got his money but there is a problem Arjun is in his place
Shubh says he will just call him back in sometime...
Shubh says Madhukar is saying Arjun has gone to his place...
Ansh says he was keeping an eye on him all the time how did it happen..
Shubh tells Ansh to check..he runs to Arjun's room...
Madhukar is wondering why isn't Shubh calling him and calls his helper Gopi and tells him that take Suhani out from there by any excuse and come out i will ask Shubh to come there and take Suhani...
Gopi is speechless as Arjun has gun pointed towards him...
Arjun snatches Gopi's cellphone and tells Madhukar it is Arjun...
shouts that now he will not spare as he's cheated, at last you have shown your real face...asks him to bring the money...
Madhukar says he is not shown his real face but he had cheated him instead when he kept all the money...tells he has only 2
crores but you have 10 crores so i am leaving...
Arjun says he did not really understand what he asked him to do now you will come with the money or else i will inform the police about this Suhani kidnapping fiasco he will never be able to hide as police will always follow him...
Madhukar keeps the call scared and calls Shubh that Arjun is very dangerous and says Arjun is really ready to do anything he's threatening me that he will tell the police about him...
Shubh says Madhukar just give me your address...
Madhukar tells him the place...
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Part 2
Arjun is very angry and Suhani asks Arjun why is he doing this to them as we are one family... and his Shubh brother loves him...
Arjun says he will never believe in his family ever as only Yashoda was the one but she also loves Shubh her step mother more that him how can he trust people who have always given more importance to Shubh...he is a handicap but he has always lived a life of a handicap now he has always had to beg for everything and that he's never got anything that he should get...Arjun threatens Suhani that what he's never got easily from SNT Shubh and Yashoda now he will get that by his strength he will not spare anyone who betrays him...points his
gun on Suhani & Gopi...
Suddenly Arjun hears a voice of can trumbling down and looks up at staircase asks who's there he asks and points gun.. says will shoot you...
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Part 3
Arjun points gun and tells no one will move from here...
Yashoda comes down from the stares & is shocked to see Arjun pointing gun at her...she sees Suhani they hug each other...Suhani cries...
Yashoda calms her down..
Yashoda asks Suhani to come with her but Arjun stops them...
Yashoda and Suhani keeps looking at Arjun...
Yashoda shouts that what is he doing how can he not be shameful after doing wrong to his own brother and bhabhi...how can he she is ashamed to see him like this...it would have been good if he had dies when he was born...& she curses that day when he was born...
Arjun shouts that yes he is bad but he also ashamed to be born to her as a son he is a Ravan...he is fed up of her & son Shubh and the matter of fact he hates everyone her Shubh and SNT...
Yashoda slaps Arjun asks her what is he saying???
Arjun warns Yashoda not to come in his way as he doesn't have problem with her but only with Shubh who's an enemy...
Yashoda says this only the last thing that is left for him even she wants to see how a son can kill his own mother...
Suhani pleads Yashoda not to provoke Arjun...
Arjun gives a final warning and fires but Suhani holds Arjun's hand and diverts his gun pointing on the roof...
Arjun and Suhani are restling with each other and Yashoda also tries to help Suhani but suddenly there is a gun shot!!!!!!!!!!!
Suhani Arjun & Yashoda all are tensed finally Yashoda falls on the ground...
Suhani shouts and tells Yashoda nothing will happen to her..
Arjun is tensed but doesn't really realize he has killed his own
mother....
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Part 4
Arjun shamelessly leave Yashoda in pool of blood Suhani weeps badly with fear o losing Yashoda...
Arjun is about to run but Madukar comes and Arjun points the gun and asks Madhukar to give the money...
Madhukar is giving the money but suddenly hits Arjun with his bag...
Madhukar and Arjun have a fight Gopi also tries to save Madhukar but he gets a blow by Arjun and he falls...
fight gets nasty and Suhani is waking Yashoda from falling unconscious....
Arjun badly hits Madhukar..
Suhani keeps crying helplessly...
Yashoda is slowly succumbing in the pain...
Gopi tries to hit Arjun with a rod but Arjun hits him Gopi's head is full blood..
Madhukar tries to kill Arjun with his dagger but he's unable to restle Arjun...
Arjun finally stabs Madhukar & kills him...
Suhani shouts and wants to save Yashoda...
Arjun looks at Suhani and comes closer...stars to drag Suhani with him leaving Yashoda helpless...
Yashoda suddenly gets up and stops Arjun...
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Part 5
Yashoda was bleeding but gets up and points the gun at Arjun...
threatens Arjun to leave Suhani or else she will kill him...
Arjun tries to emotionally blackmail her that she cannot kill her own son..
Yashoda says she can afford to loose her son but not her house'srespect...
Arjun says she can kill him but cannot kill Suhani... keeps a knife on Suhani's neck...
Yashoda fires the gun and Arjun gets shot on his arm...
Arjun gets a shocker... Suhani is out of Arjun's grip...tries to run towards Yashoda but she asks Suhani to run for her life...
Suhani firstly hesitates but runs away...
Arjun snatches gun from Yashoda who's bleeding badly runs to catch Suhani...
Suhani runs away and Arjun follows her...
Shubh and Ansh reach Madhukar's place and see Madhukar and Gopi..
Yashoda calls Shubh's name and Ansh & Shubh are dead shocked..
Shubh says Ansh to lift Amma but Yashoda refuses and says Arjun is gone to follow Suhani asks him to save her as her time is up...
Shubh cries and says no amma we will take you to hospital nothing will happen...
Yashoda says no she has done many wrong things so she's got her punishment she starts to choke...
Ansh runs to bring water...
Shubh cries seeing Yashoda nearing death...
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Part 6
Arjun is following Suhani...
Suhani covers herself up with sarees pallu and hides in a temple...
Arjun comes bleeding and stops near a thelawala {street wendor} takes the red cloth and ties...as the wendor asks why is he taking stuff for free but sees him bleeding & lets him go...Arjun looks here and there but doesn;t see Suhani as her head and face is covered...
Suhani bumps into a woman...
Woman asks Suhani she's looking tired and also got hurt marks is she in some problem...
Suhani says she had an accident there's no problem... & asks woman her name she says her name is Rani...
Rani asks Suhani to pray with her as her problems will vanish...
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Part 7 Last part
Suhani comes out of the temple is scared as Arjun might be somewhere near....
Suhani prays backround chants playing {Om bhuur Bhuas swaha}
Arjun comes to the temple looks here and there and sees Suhani praying stops.. looks at her from a little distance...
Rani asks Suhani why is she scared and asks her to come with her to circles of the temple (Parikrama)...
Suhani and Rani are done with their prayers and Rani asks Suhani...
Rani gives a thread to her and asks her to wish and tie the thread to a tree to pray...Rani tells Suhani if she doesn;t mind she can take her to a doctor... after that she has to rest for a while...
Suhani says lets go... she starts taking circles of the temple...
Arjun stands and only sees from far away...
Suhani is taking circles and suddenly Arjun comes infront and Suhani gets scared...
They both look at each other Arjun is fiercfully staring...Suhani has no way to escape...
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Monday Precap: Ansh comes to temple looking for Suhani.. meets Rani co-incidently...asks he needs help...Rani says who is he.. he says his name is Ansh and he's looking for his Bhabhi Suhani...Rani says Suhani... Precap ends there...
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All together I rate it a 4/5 simply because 45 minutes that 5 parts were amazing but last 6 & 7 part were dull.... so i rate it excellent but Arjun was simply gr8...Yashoda's death was justified....Shubh and Ansh were wasting time i really felt if they had come right on time...that did not feel right and yes Suhani was really looking weak as if she was really kidnapped lol but fair job she did but still the last part was a little lame... suddenly Arjun finding Suhani...Verdict:End could have been more better...
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