If The Show had went on.... (My Opinion)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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So I've been thinking... if the show would not be wrapped up so soon, maybe the track could have been different. If the CV's really wanted to add PTC in there then okay fine, BUT, this is the way I think would've been better:

When the Gujrals went Bankrupt and Damini gave Prithvi the property transfer papers, transferring Gujral mansion to the Saxenas, something could've happened to veggie in the hospital where she needed extra care or something where they would need more money. Because Damini would feel bad, she'd tell Prithvi that he could sell any of their property he wants to save their mom. Prithvi would disagree with her but she would argue back, saying his mother needs help right now and that would have developed more respect and love for Damini in Prithvi's eyes😳😳 and the PTC would have been shocked!! They wanted the mansion so badly na? Thinking it's all theirs? Well too bad!!😡 Because Prithivi would sell all the luxury and they'd all have to live in poverty....for a while😕. ( Though I would hate to throw my beloved characters out on the street and in such an impoverished situation, especially with Avni's situation, but there's definitely an upside! keep reading on......)

While they are all poor and having a hard time adjusting to a small apartment (have to give them somewhere to live!), the saxena brothers help out all the girls and we get cute couple scenes of all of them!!😃 PTC look at this and get VERY jealous as they are staying with the fantastic 6...hoping to break up their relationships!😡

HOWEVERRRR😉..... one day they are all at the hospital and get good news, veggie won't be veggie any longer because her health is improving!! Yayyy!!😃😃😃 (LNMDJ sounds like a happy show and there have been too many deaths already, plus veggie staying veggie or dying is too sad, so now something happy should happen,like veggie getting better😊) Everyone gets the news and is very happy, forgetting their gham for a while. Our 6 lovely couples are out of the hospital room and PTC are there, near Suman/Soumen (don't know how to spell it, but either way, she's not a vegetable anymore😕) and they're plotting how to ruin the couples lives!!!😲😲😲 Suman hears all of this as she can listen and since her brain is beginning to function correctly again, she gets shocked! How could her own sister want to break up her sons' relationships with their wives? She loves her daughter in laws, well...damini in particular since damini visited the hospital the most but she knows her sons are happily married and NOTHING and NO ONE can come in between their relationships!!! With this motivation in mind, she knows someone needs to warn her sons and no one knows this but her! So she begins internally battling for life (well, to get better since she already has her life).

Couple of days pass and now weeks and PTC are succeeding in their plans😭 Yet still, each time the guys try to think that the girls are at fault, they just can't believe it! Especially Prithvi! After the huge sacrifice Damini made, how could she ever go against him in any way??? (As you can probably see, I am a total Pridaholic😳) They have a feeling something is going on but don't know what...and they can't accuse PTC without proof, so they try to believe what PTC say anyway...

Fast forward to the day Suman gets better:

The doctor calls the struggling family and says Suman is in much better condition and is asking to see her beten and family. The family heads over to the hospital and everyone is excited to see Suman sitting up when all of a sudden the first thing she does is point to PTC and reveal their secrets and dirty plans to break up the couples!!! (Way to go Suman!! At least now she's useful in the show😊😊) The guys get shocked and Suman says she knows what she is saying and she heard everything that day when PTC were here and she yells at Mausi🤢 and together, the 3 Saxena bros kick the PTC out of the hospital and thus out of their lives!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏 (WOOT WOOTTTT😃😃😃) Then the girls take aashirwaad from their mother in law and she hugs them.

The couples get back together with all the boys offering cute apologies.

Few months later, Savni baby is born!!!!!!!!!!!!😳 Suman has now been home for months and Prida have been working their butt off to get the Gujral empire back again. They get a couple of investors to put in huge amounts of money, Varun works his charm as he is a business specialist and BOOM!! You have the Gujral empire back!!!! Meanwhile Savni is in the hospital admiring their baby and worrying about it's uncertain future. When Avni is brought home, she is brought to the Gujral mansion and both her and Sameer are confused. The couples come along with Suman and introduce the good news of them getting their home back since they've been working so hard for months and just now they finally got their money and stuff back. Everyone is very excited and all the couples admire the baby, Prida hold baby Savni in their arms together and look at each other....an expectant look in Prithvi's eyes while he looks at Damini who shys away😆 and then Varun and Roshni play with the baby, very happy looking at one another.

Suman looks at a happy Varun and Roshni and says that enough is enough and they should get married already!!! They have a big dhamakedar wedding!! And on the morning of this wedding is when Damini finds out that she is pregnant!!!!!!😃😃😃 Prithvi is extremely happy and this news is shared to all at the wedding!!!

Leap of 3 years:
Savni child is playing with Prida's child (in a large garden) with their grandmother (she must look like a VERY young grandmother😕) proudly beaming at them and then a little farther away sit the lovely 6, Savni holding one another and smiling at the beautiful seen in front of them, Prida doing the same, Varun and Roshni doing the same except one hand of Varun's is around Roshni's shoulder and the other hand is on her big round tummy😉😉😉 All couples look at the beautiful scene of their children then look at Roshni and Varun and all smile😃😃😃

The End


Whew...that was a long post, but I had to get it out there, I've been thinking about it and I know that this is the only place where I can share it, but this would've been my ideal ending😃😃😃

What do you all think?

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Edited by indigal07 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Man wish you had been the one in charge of the show.......you have rendered me speechless with how eloquently you put forth what you wanted.......if they had taken this route they would have made the existing fan base happy as well as maybe their new "gharelu" fan base.

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Will write more later
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ooooooooo.. I so loved this ...👏

If Only ... the "powers-to-be" hadn't been in a hurry to kill the veggie... at least she could have been useful...

loved all the scenes that you painted ....

aaahhhhhhhhhh... so many missed opportunities by the CVs ..

-- Mru
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Posted: 15 years ago
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What are YOU doing here ?? You should be seated right there as the head of the creative team ... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Every detail that you've provided is so realistic and plausible .... why cant the CV's take a cue from you?? 😛
In this way we would have seen some mores scenes and the purpose of paying veggie to just stare at the ceiling would look a bit believable considering the PTC being exposed and welcoming the granddaughters !! 👍🏼
Terrific job Indy !
Rach
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh wow this was soo soo good!!!👏👏 I would have loved to see something like this!! Hai a useful Veggie, i wish!! Maybe they can still incorporate some of this, you know get that little leap in at the end😍 and the Varni marriage and the babies,awww!! Just hoping they don't let us down completely!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏👏..good yaar..............kash aise he end hota😕...i lovd that prida holding savni baby and varni playing wid them.😊😊..👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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jus superb...fabulous......keep up the gud wrk!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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No works to describe your story!

Amazing, fabulous, mind blowing, and infinite⭐️stars for your work!

The show should have gone on and on.....😉


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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwww i luvd it
wish the cvs would hav taken ideas from u
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved your post!..and i wish u were a part of the CVS..u would have stopped a disaster from happening..

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