poetry yuna: wats love? birdee dance

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Was just thinking abt yuna………..and wonderin wat is love to dem. they are passionate, seductive ,attractive infact all the words that pick the lines of deep.

Bright skies, smiles all so naina and the opposite offcourse , yuvi.

Wonder wat love wud be to dem……….

A valley , I guess toooo deep to find wats in!

At times I feel these two are having a birdie dance; the puffin of hand so very yuvi

The whole elbow move, naina plzz

The down den up moves, typical yuna style, and den the merry go round, hand in hand…….m thinking

All that has taken place so far in their lives is actually the bride dance

Ok but seriously, wat is love to dem

Wat is love,

A warmth of freshness, or chill of fear.

Or a raised eyebrow with moments unclear

Together they dream a perfect life,

Still they doubt it, calling it a lie????

To him: the first dew drop, in his cold winter nights,

He imagines a growth of green shoots after a million lives!

To her: the last word of existence that saves smiles,

She believes dat saviours don't live separate lives!

To him: the first ray of hope in a crashed sky,

He proclaims her the mystery he dreamt thru years of trial!

To her: a beautiful river singin songs of only laughter,

She thinks a mirrow that has no shadow is happiness forever!

To him: the proof of truth,

That goodness is not only god but human!

To her: the proof of love……only LOVE,

A Dream dat seems so true!

And to them: A covenant sealed with emotions swept in the sea of the rainbow speaking the shades of their lives………..

And to us: a mystery we try try to conclude with a million tries

………. Josephina viegas

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Posted: 15 years ago
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And to them: A covenant sealed with emotions swept in the sea of the rainbow speaking the shades of their lives………..

And to us: a mystery we try try to conclude with a million tries


👏..... Beautiful! You have actually shown how Yuvster and Naina stand on different sides and yet stand united for an uncertain future.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jo... . 🤗
This is beautiful..👏 I loved every bit of it !! Especially the ending. You are a true talent Girl.. dont ever stop writing!
You RoCk GiRl!!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy jo..i m supriya i just loved ur poem gr8 interpretation of their feeling abt everthing...👏.👏they r so contrast but yet thay r together....LOVED TH FOLL LINES:
And to them: A covenant sealed with emotions swept in the sea of the rainbow speaking the shades of their lives………..

And to us: a mystery we try try to conclude with a million tries


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pocahontas

And to them: A covenant sealed with emotions swept in the sea of the rainbow speaking the shades of their lives'''..

And to us: a mystery we try try to conclude with a million tries


👏..... Beautiful! You have actually shown how Yuvster and Naina stand on different sides and yet stand united for an uncertain future.

absolutely a future scared to predict the itself,hopfully the wish fairy has sumtin grt in store for dem
n thanks dear
Edited by josephina_vegas - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ MJ : thanks dear, glad u guys liked it. n no i wont stop writin.

@supriya: thaank u

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome lines.. n the opening 'birdie dance'.. lovely imagination..

He imagines a growth of green shoots after a million lives!

touchy one...

opposite poles attract each other n here yuvi naina the contrasting natures hav joined hands for an eternal bonding... n let the divine celestial beings bless them so..

i still remember ur arrows of cupid..
do write more.. ur work is simply marvelous..


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Posted: 15 years ago
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u knw wht dear we actually go on n on givin trials on dem n result ............... dis is jus wht's goin in der soul plzzzzzzzzzzz do write u jus hav flow of wrds wid emotions............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Arzoo & Tushtih(is dat ur name gal? nice one): thanks sweeties
n ya u rembr the cupid, cool...........

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