FF:~ Tum miley(ph)[updt part 05/pg 03]

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Posted: 15 years ago
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~*~curtain raiser~*~


A girl of 26, wearing professional suit, standing at the press meet..

Press:so mam this is ur 4 award in 5 yrs..what you have to say about it??

Girl:nothing but hardworks'hard work really pays off..

Journalist:so mam heights going for a merger with juneja group of hotels..IS IT TRUE..

Girl:yes ..thats true..

Journalist:so mam when r u planning to get married??

Girl:no personal questions please..

Journalist:have u ever decided for any dream man??

Girl:no comments!!thats all for today..

The girl leaves..

Journalist:toh yeh business woman of the year..MS HEER MANN..the heights ke MD..inhoney 5 saal main itni mehnat ki hai ki ab unke company India no.1 companay hai..yeh 4 time that jab inhey business woman of the year ka award mila hai..

Heer in car..heer is sitting with girl of 26

Heer is doing something on laptop

Heer:anita..what are the meetings for today??


Anita:mam aaj JGI ke md MR .JUNEJA se aapka project meeting hai..

Heer:meeting kab hai??

Anita:mam within a hour..

Heer:driver humey 15 mins main office pahunchna hai..




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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear well i loved ur ff there but it seemed like ages u updated m happy u started it again i think in desh forum dts have closed it as tpics older than 90 days are closed automatically

let it be its good that u pmed me so that i can keep up the track i hope u l do the same in future

so m in as a reader of urs tum miley here

tc
love aishwarya gayen
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its good u started another thread
hope to recieve ur pm regarding update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hiiiii
so you've started here again.....
i really loved this ff on kis desh forum...
actually the dev team is closing any topic older than 90 days so i guess that's why they closed it....
waiting for the new parts now!
continue soon!
and thnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome
please update asap
add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing start dear...I loved ur ff in the desh forum...update soon...and thanks for the PM...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hai shab thax for ur pm
nice start hope u come wid some gr8 parts best of luck
take care
bye me waiting for the nxt part very desperately
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you all..


thanks for all ur support...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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~*~part 1~*~

Starts with

A guy in his room

Shirtless..

His well built body is shown..

Then his choclate brown eyes were shown..

His cell rings..

Guy:hello??

Other side:prem.

Prem;ohh rahul..howz u brother..its been dayz we spoke..

The two guys chat for some time

Prem takes his shirt..

Goes down..

Takes blessings from his mom

Prem:mom mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai..

Gaya3:jaldi se nashta karle..maine tere favourite.aloo ke paranthey banaye hai..

Prem:mom I love you..

Prem have his breakfast..

Prem:oops mom mujhe late ho rahi hai..

Prem leaves..

Next at the heights..

Heer is waiting for mr.juneja in her board room..

Heer:its been more than 3 mins ..he's still not here..

ani :ma'm maybe he is on his way..

heer:anita..

anita didn't answer..because she knows heer doesn't like waiting..she likes work on time..

they wait for few more mins..

heer:that's its..we cant wait anymore..

just then someone gets in the board room

prem:sorry guys..for being late..

heer:do you have any idea ..we have been waiting for u from last 7 mins 38 seconds..

some board member:I think we should start with the presentation..

prem strats with the presentation..the graphs etc etc..

everyone is impressed with the presentation for the new resort..

which was to be the first project after the merger of THE HEIGHTS and

JGI..

Everyone compliements to the presentation..

Meeting was over..everyone left..except prem,heer..

Prem:so how was the presentation??

Heer:impressive..but I cannot tolerate people being late at work..or the people who doesn't have time value

Nd she leaves..

Prem(himself): she sounds like my school teacher..

Heer is in her cabin..

Someone knocks..

Heer:yess come in..

Prem comes in..

Heer:yes???

Prem:we need o talk about the project..

Heer:have ur seat..

prem takes hi seat..

prem:we need to discuss about the place nd ..

heer interrupts.

Heer:before you start let me clear..here everyone works with punctuality nd discipline'nd I would appreciate..if.u follow these rules..

Prem:okay miss heer..

Heer:miss maan is okay..

Prem:oaky miss maan..

They continue with their discussions

After finishing..

Anita comes in..

Anita:excuse me mam..

Heer:yes anita???

Anita:mam there a call for u..

Heer:excuse me mr.juneja

Heer takes the call..

Heer:hello

Heer:why cant you be there??

Heer:okay let me check appointments for the day..

Heer:anita 'any important meeting or appointments for the day???

Anita:no mam..

Heer:okay ill be there..

Heers cuts the call..

Heer:anita ask the driver to be ready..

Anita:yes mam..anita leaves..

Heer:sorry mr.juneja..can we continue it tomorrow???

Prem:its okay miss maan..

Heer leaves in a huff..

Heer at some nursery school..

Just then teji comes..

Heer:maa aap yahan ??toh mujhe kyun bulaay??

Teji:main kya karti beta krishi zidd kar rahi thi..

Just then a little girls comes running towards heer..

Girl:you are late mummam..


hope u all like it..


plzzz do comment..

Edited by sweetshab - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great part.....
loved the school teacher remark....😆
loving heer's spirit and feisty character.....
so heer has a child.....
wonder what happens now....
continue soon!
and thanks for the pm

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