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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sana866

fabulas update dear

awesome part

thanks dear for loving the update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Awesome job sweety! love the FF!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Lipsa_mjht

Awesome job sweety! love the FF!

thanks dear for loving the ff.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
HIIIIIIIII RAKHI HOW R U?
LOVELY UPDATE
TOOOOOOOO GOOOOD
MINDBLOWING
SUPERBBBBBBB
OUT OF THIS WORLD
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
EAGARLY

LOVE
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
hi rakhi........how r u?
I really like the way u portrayed the characters 👏 👏 👏
i read all the parts in one go and really like the story.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
its different and very sweet😊 😊 😊
plz continue soon
luv preet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
thanks dear for loving the update😳.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIIII RAKHI HOW R U?
LOVELY UPDATE
TOOOOOOOO GOOOOD
MINDBLOWING
SUPERBBBBBBB
OUT OF THIS WORLD
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
EAGARLY

LOVE
DEEPA

thanks dear for loving the update.I'll update soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: preet09

hi rakhi........how r u?

hi preet,

I really like the way u portrayed the characters 👏 👏 👏
i read all the parts in one go and really like the story.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
thanks dear for loving the characters and the story.

its different and very sweet😊 😊 😊
plz continue soon
I'll update soon dear.

luv preet

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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Part5:-

Sanyo:-kahi nehi jayenge aap.

Prithvi:-Par?.

Sanyo:-Priya beti come with me, then to prithvi, aapke liye koibahar aaye hain

Prithvi:-mere liye? then prithvi goes to outside.

Here Sanyo's room, Priya said ma, mujhe uncle ke paas jana hain.

Sanyo: - no? sit here?.

Here outside living room prithvi saw no body is there. He saw Pratha reading news paper.

Prithvi:-except Pratha nobody is here, But Sanyogita said that someone is waiting for me but who?Pratha?

Pratha:-Bro, don't talk with urself.If u talking like this and someone saw u they said u r fall in love

Prithvi:-Pratha, stop ?

Pratha:-Yea,I also told u same thing

Prithvi:-pratha,

Pratha:-yes bro?.

Prithvi:-pratha.

Pratha:-What bro,I know my name is Pratha tell something else.

Prithvi: - stop this, iha kyuon bulaye thi mujhe?

Pratha:-kaun mein?

Prithvi:-ha?.

Pratha:-nehi toh?

Prithvi: - phir koi aaya tha kaya iha mujhse milne?

Pratha:-no?

Prithvi:-then?

Pratha:-What happen bro?Anything wrong?

Prithvi:-no,oh..nothing?. then he goes from there.

Pratha:-but, I think something related to Sanyogita. hummm . let's see .

Then she get up and goes to meet Sanyo.

Here in Sanyo's room, Priya:-no ma, I'll go there.

Sanyo:-no Priya. Stop arguing with me?

Priya:-no, no?I'll go.

Sanyo: - go and sit there stop arguing, I said last time.

Priya:-no. no. no?.

Before Pratha could say anything to Priya or Sanyo, Sanyo already slapped Priya and said stop Priya. ek baar bolne se nehi hota. Itni zid kyuon kar rehe ho?pehele toh nehi karte the. Last time I said this to u?.

Priya crying loudly. Pratha goes and hugged her and said stop crying dear?

Priya sobbing and said ma,

Sanyo looking at her and realize what she did. She bends and said Priya but Priya more crying and hugged more tightly Pratha.

Here in the prithvi's room, prithvi sit his chair and thinking about Sanyogita then he get up and goes to Sanyo's room and found Priya is crying.

Prithvi:-what happen?

After heard prithvi's sound Priya is running towards prithvi and hugged him and crying in his arms.

Prithvi: - what happen?

Priya: - ma, scold me and slapped me?

Prithvi is looking at Sanyo and said don't cry beta, and taking Priya with him.

Sanyo feels guilty and said Pratha, mein usse marna nehi chathi ,mein toh baas.

Pratha:- tumahara aur bhaiya ka jhagra hua hain na? aur oh bhi mujhe leke, don't worry bhaiya thora jada pareshan ho jate hain,, I guess he scold u and u take it seriously. Are bhaiya aise hain, aise toh bahut shy, aur shant but when it's related to me. So, relax and go and talk with him.

Sanyo stand there but Pratha again said go Sanyo.

Here in outside garden, prithvi sit in the wooden bench and talking with Priya, try to divert her mind and stop her crying. But Priya is crying badly.And keep saying ma slapped me.sob? sob?

Sanyo came there and saw it and said Priya.Hearing Sanyo's voice, Priya hugged prithvi and said ,pls don't hit me.

Sanyo sit besides prithvi and said no dear, I'll not hit u. pls look at me.

Prithvi:-Priya, see, ur ma calling u?

Priya look at Sanyo and Sanyo said come here dear?

Priya look at prithvi and then to Sanyo and then goes to Sanyo's arms and again start crying.

Sanyo hugged her and said shhh. Don't cry beta. I'm sorry. Ma hit u , sorry, ur mom is little disturb today and u know na ur ma loves u most.If u angry then ur ma also crying.

Priya; - no ma u will not cry. Pls mom. and hugged her and said Priya loves most in this world and Priya will not disobey u.

Prithvi smiling to see them happy and he try to leave from there but Sanyo said sir, I want to talk to u also.

Prithvi sit there then Sanyo told Priya that everyone will go to picnic next Sunday.

Priya is very happy and said wow, then bahut maja aayega.

Sanyo and prithvi smiles and said ha bahut maaja aayega.

Sanyo to prithvi:-oh,I'm sorry ?but prithvi stop her and said no now,

Then Sanyo going to kitchen for cooking and prithvi and Priya playing with each other. After some time Pratha and Capt. Verma also join them.

Prithvi:-Pratha go inside and take some u r not fine.

Pratha:-Bro, I'm ok.

Prithvi:-no, go inside and take some rest.

Pratha:-pls bro?

Prithvi:-no? go inside. Here Capt. Verma smiling and Pratha saw this and said stop laughing,

Then angrily goes from there.

Here, Sanyo saw her angrily goes inside to her room and wondered .

Sanyo goes there and asked what happen?

Pratha:-don't ask me, bro became mad. He thinks I'm little kid.

Sanyo:-So?

Pratha:-What, so? Don't u see bro's behavior became little

Sanyo:-not little full correct, now take some rest Pratha. Prithvi?I mean Sir is absolutely right.

Pratha's mouth wide open and just nodded in positive.

Sanyo feels embarrassed and excuse herself and going from there. She said to herself Sanyo, what happen to u, u calling him prithvi but why? Oh no if Pratha tell this to?Oh God , no,I have to rectify my mistake now but now, no if Pratha thinks something ,no mujhe normal rehena hoga, mein bhi na.

Then she busy with her work.

At night, prithvi to Sanyo, Mrs. Singh pls sit here. I have to talk with u.

Sanyo sit in the sofa and said yes sir.

Prithvi:-first u stop calling me sir. It's look like I'm principal or something?

Sanyo smiles slightly and asked innocently then,

Prithvi looks confused now and asked then matlab?

Sanyo:-oh aapne abhi kaha na aapko sir na kahu then kaya keheke bulau

Prithvi smiles and said then, humm big problem and pause for something and look at Sanyo who looks more worried now .

Prithvi in his mind, Sanyo u r innocent and very sweet then said are aap itne pareshan mat hoiye, aap mujhe mere naam se call kar sakte hain?

Hearing this Sanyo remember after noon incident and said kaya?

Prithvi:-Kyuon kaya hua, mere naam lene se kaya problem hain?

Sanyo:-oh actually mein aapke naam kaise le sakti hoon?

Prithvi:-kyuon mere naam lene se kaya problem hain,aap kyuon nehi le sakte mere naam

Sanyo:-oh.

Prithvi:-ha, boliye,I'm lisenting.

Sanyo:-I don't know?.

Prithvi:-what?

Sanyo thinks kaya bole aab oh then prithvi said kaya hua, aapne bola nehi?

Sanyo in her mind kaya bolu mein then try to divert his mind and said aapko kuch kehen tha na?

Prithvi:-oh yes,I forgot , actually. Priya ka school admission ke baarein mein , If u said yes then I'll talk to one of the school and admit her there.

Sanyo:-thanks but she already ?

Prithvi:-I know but I think now she has to move from there and u also, that life is past and don't look back .If u look back again and again then it's creates lots of problem.

Sanyo looks confused.

Prithvi:- take ur time and then think of it.

Sanyo nodded positively then said ok, I need ti think about this, if u don't mind then can I leave now, it's very late.

Prithvi:-ok u can go?

Sanyo nodded and goes from there.

Prithvi also go from there.

Here at Sanyo's room, Sanyo lay on the bed and thinking about prithvi's word.

Sanyo's P.O.V:-Prithvi is right but is that right if I'm taking his help. No, it's not right.but what about priya's future?kaya karu, kaunsa way lene chaiye?kuch samajh mein nehi aaraha hain?.

Here at prithvi's room prithvi close his eyes but his mind thinking about priya and Sanyo and their safety and future.

Next day morning, prithvi wake up as usual early and taking his shower quickly. After this when he go for breakfast saw Sanyogita already there and said Good morning.

Prithvi smiles and said morning.itni subha?

Sanyo:-ha oh kuch school ka pending work tha isliye?.aur ha, aapse kuch puchna hain,

Prithvi pull the chair and sit there and said yes , u can ask anything to me?

Sanyogita smiles and said , promise me that ap gussa neho honge.

Prithvi smiles and said ok?.

Sanyo:- pls don't inform about me to my uncle Prithvi,I request u,pls.

Prithvi hold her hand and said don't worry,I'll not inform him.If not told me this then also I'lll not tell to him.

Sanyo:-thanks.

Prithvi:-no?

Sanyo looks more confused and asked no?

Prithvi:-No thanks and no sorry in friendship.

Sanyo smiles and nodded .

Here pratha come and said good morning to both and said me feels still sleeping.

Sanyo:- toh tum uthe kyon?

Pratha:-aap dono ka baat sunke.

Sanyo:-Oh,I'm sorry.I didn't?

Prithvi:-Pratha, stop joking and Sanyogita, don't say sorry to her. She is joking.Ok both of u complete ur breakfast,I'll go.Bye. take care.

Sanyo smiles and said bye,

Pratha:- Sanyo, tumne breakfast kar lia.

Sanyo;- no

Pratha:-good.chalo hum dono karte hain?.

Precap:-One call received Sanyo and stood there shocked?.

Pratha and Capt. Verma argue with each other.

Prithvi feels something for Sanyo.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
Updated next part .pls read it and comment it.ur comments inspired me lots.
sorry for late updating.
Allmy slient readers pls press the liked button also.

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