A Cinderella Story(Mayur FF)Part-6 Pg-32 updated!! - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ghtk1

wowww awesome prerna..plzz continue soon..dont 4get to pm me.🤗loved the starting..

thanx a lot dear!!!.......keep reading!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part
after the character sketch i must say it was a very different from others
just want to read more
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys i really sorry......i couldn't update for so long!!!!.......but thanx a lot for waiting for me!!.....actually i got too busy with my clg. work that i couldn't get time to write any updates!!!.....and after the exams i got too busy rather too lazy to sleep all day!!......anyways finally i got time to update!!!.....do read and comment guys!!!.....there is mayank's entry in this part and a big secret revealed!!!!

Recap:- nupur's father dies in the earthquake. dia becomes the owner of all his property and the diner. she treats nupur as a servant. 10 yrs later characters are introduced.....nupur works in her step mother's cafe....but shilpa sends her to her college....

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Part-3

Nupur stops her car in front of uday's house....to pick him for the college.....he was her best and only buddy in the college!!!

She blows the horn of the car and shouts to his father who was cleaning his car....

N: hey u're looking good Mr. Kapoor!!

Mr. K: tell me something new dear!!

N: lol!!!........

Just then uday came out frm the house wearing a red coloured loose pant 2 inches short from below revealing his socks, a red coloured loose t-shirt and a red cap, a lots of chains hanging in his neck, a wrist band, goggles and a bag hung on his shoulder.....he held a writing pad in his hand........reciting rather trying to learn something!!

U: anything is possible if u just believe....anything is poss...anything is possible if u..........

Mr. K: hey son....so when r u returning in the evening?

U: yeah!!...a a ....5 o' clock....dad tell mom!!!

Mr. K: knock up there!!

U: hey dad!!! when u see me going to college in someone else's (looking towards nupur)..no offence to u dear seriously!!......(to his dad)....someone else's car....don't u feel sorry for me???

Mr. K: No i feel sorry for the three cars which we got for u that u tore off!!

U(frustratingly twisting his mouth) : okay!!

He sat in the car!!!

Nupur was looking at him with a shock!!!

N: Uday....umm....ah what r u wearing??

U: this is my sloop dizzle look!!!

N: i cannot ride u to the college like that!!

U: nupsi....i am a method actor okay!....and this is a part of my training!!!....

N(grabbing his cap to remove it): i know that but look at this!!!......(looking towards the cap)....

U (irritably): all right!!! 'll take 2.....

And he jumped out of the car to change!!!

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At the college.....

ON AIR...

CJ: good morning princeston!!! Well the day is very normal as always....Prof Rothman again meeting badluck with his briefcase......michael busy flirting with girls.....and the coming haloween dance is something exciting to go through!!!....u can dress up like something u r not for a change!!!..i mean....

Suddenly a teacher jumped in between her speech and held her hand on her heart....and began reciting the pledge making cj also to do so!!.....

CJ: to the flag of united states of America and to the republic......(i'm sorry for it if i'm wrong and someone frm there is reading it).....

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Nupur entered the parking lot....which was almost full.....she was about to park when suddenly sheena pulled in her car and parked it at the only empty place!!.....sheena was there along with 2 of her friends....

Nupur sighed.....

SH n her friends( together shouting out loud at nupur n uday) : u can still do it!!!!!

U: well if it isn't sheena then many ladies will have to keep waiting!!!.....sheena wants me so badly!!

N: but u've never even talked to her before!!

U: i've talked to her...okay!!....in my mind....let me tell u....i my mind.....she wants me so bad!!!

N: Uday u can do so much better than sheena, even in ur mind!!

Uday making a sad face!!

U: hey a car there is moving away!!

Nupur accelerated her car to grab that place but suddenly frm the opposite direction pulled in a big black car......both had almost crashed into each other had not nupur put the brakes!!!!

Her car stopped with a jerk......the black car backed and perfectly fitted in the available space!!....

N: c'mon!!!!

Samrat and benji came out of the car and started laughing!!!.........nupur held her head and started trying to start her car again!!!.......then Mayank Sharma cam out of the black car frm the other door!!! And locked the car with the remote!!.....nupur looked up and saw him coming and standing in front of the car!!!.....

Just then sheena frm the other side came shouting!!

SH: hey mayank!!!

All three af them approached the three men!!

Nupur made a face with a pout!!!

N: huh!.....i swear...people like sheena and mayank are genetically programmed to find each other...how come so much ego be in a relationship!!!...

U: well what matters is what they say bout u!!

N(saddened) : huh! They don't even know i exist!!!

Suddenly sheena's one of the friends saw nupur n uday!!....and said to sheena!!

1st frnd: eww!! See a geek at 3 o 'clock!!

Mayank turned to see!!

SH: the whitestone is only for cool people...no geeks!!!

All except mayank were laughing at their own jokes!!!.....mayank neither used to involve in their fun.....nor did he enjoy it!! He was making absurd faces!!! Actually he never used to enjoy their company!!!......he only used to come to college for the attendance.....and with a hope to meet "his" girl which was definitely not sheena!!!.....he was never interested in her!!!.....it was just a matter of image for him...he was a famous soccer player...and sheena was the diva of the clg.....n sheena wanted to be with mayank!!!

S: hey diner girl!! Can we get a toast and omelette for the breakfast!! Thank u!

U (looked at nupur): and u thought they don't even know u existed!!!......

N (with a sad look): right!!.........

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Sheena was walking rather piercing through the crowd in the corridor....all were looking and waving a hi to her and she was just moving ahead in stubbornness and attitude!!!.......

annie and vatty were also among those.....

A n V: hii sheena!!!

Sheena gave a slant smile and kept on moving!!!

SH: i don't know y v tolerate them!!

Her friends: yeah right!!

They crossed past nupur and uday....who emerged frm the crowd to an empty place!!.....taking a sigh of relief...both looking back and pondering over the attitude that girl has!!!!

Both go and bang into a guy....chako....

C: oh! Good gracious!!...hey nupur.....u r looking absolutely stunning as usual....

N: oh thank u chako!

C: oh i need to go back to my galaxy!!!

He walked off talking into a walkie talkie!!.....

C: hey hello can u hear me!!....hello!!

U: poor guy!!

N: at least he is happy!!

U: happy?? Fantasy is a different world!

N: sometimes fantasies are better than real world!!

Suddenly nupur's cell buzzed!!

She took it out to find a text message!!

Suddenly her face lit up!!!

U( peeping): speaking of fantasy??!!!

Nupur looked at him with a " will u stop it" look!!!! Smiling widely.....she couldn't hide her happiness!!!

N: i'll see u later uday!!

U(smiling): yeah yeah!! Ur secret admirer....go talk to him!!!!

Smiling widely she went away frm there.....and sat on a stone bench­­ circular in shape......all around a big circular garden in college campus!!!!

The text message:- PRINCESTONGIRL818, WHERE HAVE U BEEN? WE HAVEN'T TALKED IN AGES!

Nupur replied- WE TALKED THIS MORNING!

Msg- I CAN'T STOP THINKING BOUT U! WHAT'S ON UR MIND RIGHT NOW?

N: U FIRST!

Msg- I'M THINKING PROF ROTHMAN'S DISSECTED ONE 2 MANY FROGS!

Nupur looked in front to find prof. Rothman eating an apple and throwing away some of the bitten apple from his mouth!!!!! She laughed!!!

Then she again looked around.....she saw two guys smsing frm the mobile!!.....but then shooed away her thought of them being the sender!!!

Msg- GRIBIT GRIBIT!

She laughed!! Then replied!!

N: LOL!

Msg- I WANT TO HEAR UR LAUGH. WHEN CAN WE FINALLY MEET?

She typed some msg. and sent it.....the bell rang and she switched off the cell and went for the class!!!

There at the opposite side of the same circular bench sat mayank with a cell in his hand....he received a text mssg !!!

Msg- SOON!!!

Disappointed....he closed his cell's lid and sighed!!!......

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Okay!!! That's all for today!!!!...........i hope to update the next part soon!!!....and this time i mean it!!.......i'll definitely update soon!!!.......thanx for reading!!!.......do comment!!!!

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Edited by prerna_agrawal - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Its been a long time prerna :)

I m looking fwd to the next update :)

this one was so nice :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: myownarea

Its been a long time prerna :)

I m looking fwd to the next update :)

this one was so nice :)

ya dear.....not only long.....very long time!!!!
thanx for ur comments dear!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey love this part very much
you updated soooo soon
lol
just kidding
par sachi mein
love it loadzzzzz
can't wait to read more
abb do update very very soon
love ya loadzzz
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
really nice prena dear thansk 4 pm asap
Posted: 15 years ago
fab updt!! loved it totally!!
can't wait to read more!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
prerna

its sooooooooooooooooooooo nice and outstanding update yaar

maine socha ke tum iss ff ke bare me bhool hi gayi

pls dont b late yaar. update the next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
i've been waiting long for this!
lovely update
continue soon!

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