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Posted: 19 years ago
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Guyz thnkx for ur comments I am gonna write the 4th part now I hope u guyz will like it cuz it is the party part and it will be long….i guess:


PART 4:


In the Khanna house every1 is decorating the house except for Angad, Kripa, Josh, and Aaliya…….2day there will also be a special announcement while every1 is having fun Kripa and Aaliya go for shopping….


K: Aaliya shopping ke liye chale?

Aa: chalo…wait let's call the boyz too

K: no Aaliya plz plz plz no…..

Aaliya makes a puppy face and says: pleaseeeeeeeee

K: ok baba

Aa: ANGADDDDDDD….JOSSSSHHHHHHHHHH….CHALO HUM SHOPPING KEY LIYE JA RAHE HAI….<<<She screams……do one thing Josh u take me and Angad u take Kripa for shopping!

A-K 2gether:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Aa and J 2gether: YES AND THT IS FINAL!

Josh and Aaliya leave and so do Angad and Kripa……<<<(as usual thy will fight)

A: tumhari waja se hum ek sath ja rahe hai…..

K: excuse me..

A: excused

K: shut up!

A: you better!

K: mein Bandar se baat karke apna time kyon waste kar rahi hoon

A: kyon ki tum khud ek bandari ho

K: Angad stop calling me bandari….and drive slowly

A: meri marzi mein kaise drive karu actually I guess mein high speed pe kar deta hoon(and he actually does)

Kripa is screaming her head out: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHH…..(And she holds Angad's arm and closes her eyes….and when Angad notices tht Kripa is holding his hand he looks at Kripa passionately and lovingly…but thn comes back to reality and says):

A: KRIPA…..KRIPA GET OFF MY ARM!

Kripa notices wat she was doing and says: SORRY !

A: well it's not ok (and suddenly the car breaks down) dekha na MS. KRIPA SHARMA tumhara kamal….no be quiet and don't disturb me!

K: disturb toh mein karoungi

A: toh phir gari bhi nahin theek ho gi

K: so we will catch a taxi and go

A: shut up and zip ur mouth u tape recorder

K: apna naam lena band karo

A: well guess wat mein tumhara naam le raha tha

K: plz Khuda ke vaste shut up

The car gets fixed and Angad says: Shut up baad mein ab chalo shopping karne ….time nahin hai

K: BLAH BLAH BLAH!

Guyz so sorry but the party will come soon the next part is definitely the party…soooooo…sry!
😊 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
can you lower the font please?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
awesome fan fic! continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
just read the part!!! awesome job! continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
guyz i am kinda sick so will continue later plz dun mind
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i loved that part! It was funny! Cant wait for u to cont!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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get well soon! and wen u do...CONTINUE!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok guyz I got a bit better so I thought of continuing my fan-fic I hope you guyz like the 5th part:
PART 5:

Both Angad and Kripa went to the shopping mall and started choosing clothes for themselves and finally after 4 hrs thy finished shopping and got themselves HOT clothes...Kripa got a really sexy saari…and Angad got a really hot sherwaani ……both went to their houses and Kripa fount tht her family is not their except thy are at the Khanna's ……… so Naina told Angad to go to the Sharma's house while they talk secretly….Angad went through the hallway and knocked on Kripa's door she was fixing her saari and said:

K: kaun hai?

A: Angad

K: sorry not allowed

As soon as Angad found tht the door was opened he opened it and saw Kripa in the beautiful saari with wet hair rolling down her neck…Angad was jst mesmerized by her beauty and innocence and says:

A: Kripa u look beautiful!

K: did I just hear wat u said Angad?

Angad bak in reality: wat wat wat did I say?

K: tht I look beautiful

A: hell ,tum ek bhootni lag rahi ho….mom se bhi zyaada

Kripa just runs to hit him when she trips the door closes Angad held her in his arms and they fell on the bed…..Angad went closer and closer to her …they just stared into each other's eyes really deeply he went closer and closer to her and Kripa for the first didn't feel uncomfortable….Angad came really close to her and lightly kissed her neck and Kripa embraced himself for a second thn both of thm came bak to reality and pushed each other and the whole time without knowing their families watched them and decided something which will be announced in the party they both Angad and Kripa say sorry to each other and the party starts Josh and Aaliya are the most one's enjoying when they see Angad and Kripa glancing at each other….soon every1 starts to dance and Josh and Aaliya force Angad and Kripa to dance luckily a really slow and romantic song was playing and Angad held Kripa from her waist and Kripa put her arms around Angad's neck and thy look at each other passionately… and thn suddenly there is a person sayin tht the Khanna's and the Sharma's are goin to announce something really special every1 stood there surprisingly wondering wat it is…suddenly Naina spoke:

N: after knowing the Sharma's really well we have decided something really special tht instead of becoming family friends…….hum rishtedar(relatives) ban na chate hai aur hum ne yeh decision liya hai ke Mr. Sharma ki baiti(daughter) Kripa Sharma ki jald se jald Dilip Khanna ke bete(son) Angad Khanna ki bewi ban ne wali hai!

Every1 was shocked especially Angad and Kripa tht thy are goin to get married!
Then suddenly Kripa's mom comes on the stage and says:

Km: yehi nahin balke hum Aaliya ko apne ghar ki bahu bana ne lage hai…….Aaliya just blushed and Josh was on top of the world….

Guyz tht was all I could write I hope u guyz liked it……on having a really bad fever I felt bad tht I wasn't continuing my fan-fic and I hope to continue soon too!


sry was sick and will cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hope u get betta soon u take ur time tht was a rly gud part
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
guyz my skool is starting soon so i wont be able to continue tht soon so plz dont mind plz plz plz..... 🤔

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