Love Me Sab Chalta Hai - Part III

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi Guys!

Love Me Sab Chalta Hai ka third part is here. Umeed hai ye bhi aapko acha lagega.

Recap: Karan Sujal ke saath college aane se mana kar deta hai. Kashish ka college me pehla din hai aur uski Sujal se mulaaqat ho jaati hai.Nandini-Kashish aur Sujal-Karan canteen me baithe baatein kar rahe hain. Nandini ki mummy ki tabiyat kharaab hone ki wajah se use jaana padta hai. Kashish ko class me seat na hone ki wajah se Sujal ke saath baithna padta hai aur vo hairaan hokar khadi ho jaati hai jab Sujal use apni friendship offer karta hai.

Kashish ke achanak khade ho jaane par sab use ghoor-ghoor ke dekhne lagte hain. Actually Sujal ka uski taraf friendship ka haath badhaana uski ek imagination hoti hai.

Sujal (In his mind): Ise daure padte hain kya?

Kashish: Sorry sir. (She moves out of the class and the lecturer continues with his lecture)

Kashish is sitting in the college garden and talking to herself.

Kashish: Ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai. Mai us idiot Sujal ke bare me kyon soch rahi hoon. Kya mai us se friendship karna chahti hoon? No, never. Vo to baat karne ke layak bhi nahin hai, friendship to bahut dur ki baat hai. Lekin, ek, sirf ek experience ke sahare mai uske character ko rate bhi to nahin kar sakti. Shayad vo ek bahut acha ladka ho. Lekin vo jaisa bhi ho, mai kyon soch rahi hoon uske bare me? Errrrrrrrr…..Kashish, calm down. Hota hai kabhi-kabhi.

Till then, the lecture was over. Sujal came towards Kashish.

Sujal: Kya hota hai kabhi-kabhi?

Kashish: Tum! Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Sujal: Lecture over ho gaya tha to maine socha ki aapki tabiyat pooch loon.

Kashish: What do you mean? Tumhe kya lagta hai mai pagal hoon?

Just then Karan interrupts from behind.

Karan: Kyon aapko koi shak hai?

Kashish: What?????????

Karan: O madam! Agar ye tumse kuch keh nahin raha hai to iska matlab tum kuch bhi bologi ise. Hame aapke paagalpan ka raaz nahin jaan na, Ok, Tata, Bye-Bye. Chal Sujal.

Sujal: Tujhe beech me bolne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Karan: Chup-chap chal, mujhe faltoo bakwaas sun ne ki aadat nahin hai.

Just then Nandini enters the college aur uski takkar Karan se ho jaati hai.

Karan: Bas isi namooni ki kami thi. Vaise Ms.Nandy, Chaar ankhon se bhi dikhayi nahin deta hai kya?

Nandini: Sorry.

Karan: Sor…….

Sujal (Interrupting): Karan hame late ho raha hai chalte hain yahan se. Chal, chal naa…..

Kashish: Ye dono ladke…..

Nandini: Dono nahin sirf Karan. Sujal to use yahan se le gaya varna pata nahin kya-kya bakwaas karta vo.

Kashish: Aur tu chup-chap sun leti?

Nandini: Haan kyonki mai us jaise flirt ke muh nahin lagna chahti. Tu bhi us se dur hi rehna. Vo kya hai naa, har khoobsurat ladki par nazar rehti hai uski.

Kashish: Meri jooti bhi us jaise aawara se baat na kare.

Nandini: Teri jooti vaise bhi kisi se baat nahin karti hai. Khair, on a serious note, tu ghar jaa, mai Library ki ye books lauta kar aati hoon.

Kashish: Daai-ma ki tabiyat theek hai ab?

Nandini: Haan bas thoda sa chakkar aa gaya tha. Dawai de di hai. Kal tak theek ho jayengi.

Sujal and Karan are going home on the bike. Karan is driving.

Sujal: Karan! Kal….kal….

Karan: Kya kal?

Sujal: Kal, teri mumma ka phone aaya tha.

Karan: To?

Sujal: To vo keh rahi thi ki…………dekh Karan, apni family se alag rehna aise achi baat nahin hai na!

Karan: Aur mujhe Pandit Sujalacharya ke pravachan sun ne ka koi shauk nahin hai.

Sujal: Shut-Up! Mai pravachan nahin de raha hoon. Sirf tujhe samjha raha hoon ki tere gharwale bhi to…………

Karan: Dekh Sujal! Agar mere tere saath rehna se tujhe koi problem hai to bol, mai aaj hi chala jaaonga, par agar sirf mumma ke kehne par tu mujhe vahan, us jail me bhejna chahta hai to mai kabhi nahin jaaonga. Vaise bhi vahan Meethi (Karan's younger sister) ke siva mujhe koi yaad nahin karta. Ek min! Ek min! Mumma ne tujhe kuch bura-bhala to nahin kaha?

Sujal: Nah…Nahin to? Maine tujhse aisa kuch kaha kya?

Karan: Tu to kabhi bhi kuch nahin kehta hai, chahe mumma kuch bhi keh de. Tujhe meri kasam sach bol.

Sujal: Tu baat-baat par kasam mat diya kar, samjha!

Karan: Mujhe mera jawab mil gaya.

They reach their house and Sujal gets off the bike.

Sujal: Tu andar nahin aayega? Ab kahan jaa raha hai?

Karan: Ek adhoora kaam niptaane jaana hai. (He drives off)

Sujal: Lejaana hoga kisi girlfriend ko date par…..ek min..…Kahin ye apni mummy se jhgda karne to nahin………Oh Shit! Karan ruk…….. (But he had escaped).

Kashish reached her house, still thinking about Sujal. Her mother i.e. Mrs. Singhania comes up to her.

Mrs. Singhania: Kaisa raha college ka pehla din?

Kashish: Theek tha.

Mrs. Singhania: Acha nahin tha? Koi naye dost bane?

Kashish (She is reminded of Sujal): Sujal……

Mrs. Singhania: Sujal??????? Tumhara naya dost hai? Naam to bahut acha hai.

Kashish: Nahin mumma, vo to Nandini ka dost hai.

Mrs. Singhania: To phir koi middle-class chap hi hoga.

Kashish: Mumma please! Middle class society me bhi to insaan hi rehte hain, jaanwar to nahin. Maine aapko pehle bhi kaha tha ki mere saamne at least aise behave na kiya karein.

Mrs. Singhania: Dekho Kashish! Tumhe baad me na pachtaana pade isliye mai tumhe pehle hi saavdhan kar deti hoon. Kisi bhi middle-class insaan se dosti, especially pyaar mat kar baithna. Tumhaare papa us ladke ke saath-saath tumhe bhi jaan se maar daalenge. I hope you remember Samay's case (Kashish's elder brother who is no more in this world). Aur haan ………

Kashish: Iske aage aur kuch mat kehna mumma, mai seh nahin paaongi.

Mrs. Singhania: Kashish mujhe tumpar poora bharosa hai. I believe you'll never let me down. Bye beta, mujhe Kitty-Party ke liye der ho rahi hai.

Kashish goes to her room angrily, bangs the door and lies down on the bed crying. She takes out the photo of her Samay Bhaiya from the drawer, and started talking to it.

Kashish: Kyon Bhaiya! Kyon chale gaye apni Kashish ko akela chodkar? Aaj mumma ke muh se itne dino baad aapka naam suna bhi to itna rudely. Aur aapne in logon ki izzat bachaane ke liye suicide kar li? Kyon bhaiya kyon? Were they worth it? Mai bahut akeli pad gayi hoon bhaiya. I need you! I desperately need you.😭😭😭

I hope you will like this one too.

Waiting for your comments as always.

With love to all Rajeevians and Aamnaians

Garima

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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool ..hey im the first one to comment...heehe😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful part ..... waiting for u to post the next part soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great going garima 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yes nice stories....how many parts r there goin to be???
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Posted: 19 years ago
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continue soon cant wait 4 ur next part ur stories very interesting 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks to all of u
Next part will be posted by today evening or tomorrow
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good but fan fictions r suposed to be posted in the fan fic section not in the forum....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey..Great..Plz..write more sooon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great going..u r a great writer...tell u what...come to the Fanfiction forum...the id of the forum is 94..otherwise the mods will close ur story here cuz it is not allowed!!!! 😃 😃 😃

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