short story : HUM HO GAYE AAP KE (PART-3 complted) - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
It was so awesome
Loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey
Both parts were great
Cant wait to read more
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx a lot for all of ur lovely comments...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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(pls,see in page 2 for the first scene of third part😛)
3RD PART
yug : u dont know vrinda,how much happy i'm right now...
vrinda : let me go yug..............
yug : but i have to talk to u.
vrinda : talk to me later...let me go now......
yug : its very important...
vrinda : ok tell me. what u want to say...
yug : (pretending to think ) at first let me eat ...i'm so hungry now....u sit here.
he grabed her shoulder and sat her down in the bed....yug took the dish and started eating....it wasnt a lie...he was realy very hungry....he was staring at vrinda while eating......yug knew she was nervous...so he showed no exitement and avoided the topic of her saari........
he looked at vrinda suddenly......
yug : tumne khaya ?
vrinda was very nervous as he asked her that question.....she looked down and didnt answer....
yug was amazed....omg...she didnt eat...becoz he didnt eat !!!! vrinda was in a very strange mood...she never thought she will do those kind of things....like to wear this saari at midnight only to make yug happy.....bring food for him......cant eat thinkinh yug is hungry...........and she dared to come in his room...and now sitting with him in his bed....she tried her best to hide her feelings always...even after she confessed her love for yug,she never did anything which can make them a real love couple...then what happened to her today ? she wasnt in herself ....and she was doing all this without thinking properly what she is doing...but she knew she has to be advanced.....and some moments come in everyone's life when one cant help........yug could feel vrinda's nervousness..and he knew how strange it is for her but yug felt happy that she atleast doing something for her love though she wants to hide it always...he took a spoon of kheer and offered vrinda to have it.........
vrinda : what are u doing yug ! i've eaten just now..........(vrinda lied)
yug : oh....realy ??? i know very well that...but dont u know my mom says, if u eat infront of anyone without feeding her then u'll have pain in ur stomach..so,u've to eat it becoz i dont want to have pain in my stomach (he ordered )
oh...this boy is realy impossible,vrinda thought.and when she looked at his eyes she couldnt help and just gave in....she let him to feed her!!!!
yug saw a lill bit of kheer at vrinda's lower lip...actualy the whole circumstances was soooooo dreamy....otherwise yug would had think a lot before doing this but in that time he removed the kheer from her lip without thinking for a second...vrinda just shivvered while feeling yug's feather touch on her lips.....and same was for yug...he felt his heartbeat just stopped for a while when he touched her soft lip....vrinda couldnt breath properly as yug's face came closer to her face...
(background music : sason ko sason mein dhalne do jara....dheeme si dhadkan ko badhne do jara.....aha ha aha la la la la la la.....lamho ki gujarish hain yeh,paas aa jaye.....hum.....hum tum.....tum....hum tum....)
the moment was not more than few seconds but it did a lot into these two people's heart.....vrinda just jumped from the bed and ran towards the window......
yug came to her slowly .he brought his face very very close to her neck from back and whispered in her ear...
yug : do u know what important thing i wanted to say u ???
yess,she knew..she knew...but she couldnt say a single word in that closeness of yug,,,she was feeling his breath on her neck which was intoxicating her soooo badly..
yug : look at the moon vrinda
vrinda looked...gentle breeze was blowing..and the sky was soooooooooo beautiful with a full moon....
yug : dont u think the moon is feeling shame seeing u...i think it didt know someone can be more more and more beautiful than her...
vrinda's cheek turned red which made her more beautiful.........
yug : thank u vrinda....thanx a lot......and i'm so sorry i became angry with u.....how can i forget whats going on through u becoz of your father's news and ur mother's behaviour....
vrinda's eyes welled up.........and yug continued whispering....
yug : but trust me vrinda..i'll make everything allright....i promise...just have lill faith on me.....i'll take u to ur father......

vrinda couldnt control herself after that.......she swiftly turned back and hugged yug.....while she felt her all sorrow were being washed away in yug's warmth....yug slowly kept his hand on vrinda's head to comfort her.......some moment passed...these two angle were lost in themselves........yug closed his eyes...he wanted to stop this moment...and stay forever like this.....kash yeh pal yehi tham jaye........
(akhon mein humko utar ne do jara....bahon mein humko bighalne do jara......lamho ki gujarish hain yeh...paas aa jaye...hum...hum tum.....tum.....hum tum.....)
yug was enjoying vrinda in his arms while they heared a sound which was coming from the kitchen. vrinda pushed yug away from her and became so scaered...

vrinda : i've to go now....there must be some body awake...
yug : (smiling )hahaha....i know who is this...
vrinda : what ???
yug : ur great brother,mr.teji is looking for food in the kitchen....hahaha
they both brust out laughing.........yug looked at vrinda when she was laughing......how pretty the girl is......!!!!
yug : always smile like this..........i will do anything to make u smile..
vrinda : kyun ? dont u say how bad i look when i smile ?(vrinda showed false anger )
yug:(laughing ) nooooooo.....but u know u realy look like a ghost when u cry....so,always keep smiling......
they both stared at each other.......and the moon was likely to stare at these two love bird and bleesing them with her moonlight.....
(the end)
Edited by urmee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
omg I jus luvd it⭐️ 5 stars

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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx abru..luv u...i just tried to make it a very simple like the real old show..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
That was very sweet
Nice job

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