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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow

its damn good
this chinky is so sweet
hope they soon meet at the interview
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sorry friends for keeping you waiting... I am really really busy these days.. Thank you for your warm comments and will get to them for a while but let me post the update first... will be waiting for your comments again...😃


Part 3


Present

Gayatri gave a hearty laugh as Preet paused for a moment. He was shocked to witness his mother almost rolling on the floor.

"Phir Kya Hua???", Gayatri questioned Preet after stifling laugh.

"You still interested?", Preet shot.

'Obviously Beta.. kya ladki hai… mere bete ko chup kara diya.. I like her", Gayatri gave a dreamy smile while imagining the girl in discussion.

"Back to ground lady", Preet's voice let her back to reality. " Abhi Safar pein chale?", he winked.

"Safar???", Gayatri questioned.

"Ha Safar", Preet grinned.

***Safar***

"Wow Golu .. you never told me you changed your car?", the girl's voice enthusiastic as Prem hit the accelerator in a grumpy mood.

"Sorry.. never got chance", Prem sounded defeated as there was no way this girl was letting him speak more than one or half broken sentences.

"arrey yaar!! Why sorry.. we are friends na…", she hit his arm lightly and Prem looked at her emotionless.

"Waise… why are you driving slow?. take left", she instructed and Prem followed robotically.

" I don't know na.. where to drop you.. that's why…", an honest answer but with a tone of frustration.

" Bas itni si baat?", she wondered. " Here let me help you.."

… and she continued…

".. phir kya huwa na… I was angry on that idiot.. take right…. Tumko to pata hai.. panipuris are my favourite…. Yes!! Take this turn… arrey maine to uski haddi tod di.. take right… stop stop stop aa gayi.", finally she stopped her instruction cum blabbering which irritated Prem to that extend he even did not realized when he reached his 'chinkey's' destination.

As soon as the car stopped, she flew out of the car waving goodbyes and thank you s and ran inside the building.

Prem huffed in relief. " Chalo jaan chuti.. kitna bakti hai.. deemag kharab kar diya.".

He was about to ignite the engine to reach his office when he looked properly the place where his car stood parked. It was parked in front of the "Juneja Corps", his company and that irritating Chinkey got inside the very building.

"Interesting", Prem wondered and went inside.

Present

"..You mean to say the girl is an employer and Prem didn't knew her at all??", Gayatri wondered as she passed the bowl of cornflakes to Preet.

"Na ma!!! Bhai knows all his employees by their faces and names. She was new and…"

"… was opting for the post of Prem's secretary right?", Gayatri completed the sentence.

"Smart Girl!", Preet commented and Gayatri bowed down in gratitude.

"To interview mein kya hua?", she questioned.

"Interview???", Preet repeated.

**Interview**

Prem Juneja entered his building. Took a lift to 6th floor, his block . Walking upto his receptionist he saw a bunch of girls seated in the waiting lounge with thick files in their hand which he presumed to be their resumes and qualifications. But that's not what caught his eye. A girl in particular made his gaze and motion fixed. The same girl from the cafe. The same Chinkey girl, who almost ripped his head out by her useless blabbers ,was blabbering again but to herself. Her eyes closed and her hands joined as if in deep prayer and was softly murmuring prayers to one and above.

Prem again felt light and different by her sight. There she sat praying unaware of anything or him staring her and here he stood confused, wondering why he was not feeling any anger within him by the sight of this girl.

"Miss Chinkey???", Prem involuntarily spoke up and froze as the girl opened her eyes. Prem slapped himself in his mind for having less resistance over his mouth. He didn't want to call her, but he did and he didn't know why.

She fluttered her eyes opened as she heard a familiar voice calling her. Yes, it wasn't her name but she knew she was being called. She studied the figure calling her and she jumped up straight recognizing the man. The cafe guy. Whom she had made pay her breakfast and drive her to the interview. But what was he doing here? She wanted to ask and opened her mouth but he spoke instead.

"…In my cabin Miss… you have an interview", he smirked and entered the cabin and then it hit her.

"O god! O god ! O god!!!, this is Prem Juneja !!! ", she dreaded and with slow and heavy steps reached for his door.



Well... a cliffhanger😆.. dont know when will the next update be.. but it will be for sure😛


Waiting for your response...😳


Luv ya all


Priyo😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
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awesome update
the whole part was sooo sweet
wait for next
luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Awesome update. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
omg........i can't belive heer just did that............heer is in for a treat of her life right?..........do continue soon............do pm me when u do...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
can u pm me when u update pls and thank u
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
hi
i jst read the 3 chapters to ur SS, nd i think its awesome
really lykd the chinky golu scene it was jkz,

cnt wait fr more
do continue soon

btw cn u plz add me to ur PM list? it'll be very much appreciated as thts the only way i can keep track of FFs nd SSs 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

Excellent update. continue soon. can you pm me when you update. thanks.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
it is amazing............want to read moreeeee...plz update soon

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