Fanfic: Kunal and Shamoli ke ajab kahani!! - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
gud wrkk jst raed the intro.. keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
very nice, plz continue.  I so want Kunal with Shamoli.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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 Episode starts with Karishma announces that couples should slow dance..." Sir main ab chalthi hoon kafi kaam hai aur kantha thai ko meri madaat ke zaroorat hogi" As shamoli starts to leave Kunal grabs her arm" Kantha Thai aur tumhari behan sambal laigi, mera saath ek dance bhi nahi karo gi? This is an order" ( background music plays: Koi chehra nigaahon pe chhaane laga Koi ab roz aankhon mein aane laga Aayi rut jo nayi jaage armaan kai Mausam koi ghazal jaise gaane laga Oh aisa lagta hai jaise nasha hone ko hai Aisa lagta hai hosh mera khone ko hai) " Sir mujhe ab janay do please bohot kaam hain aaj Sia maam ke engagment hai"" Theek hai jao, Shamoli mera liya ek cup chai mil sakthi hai?" " of course Sir abhi laykay athi hoon" Shamoli leaves and Veeru see's her " Yeh thiki mirch aisay lagthi hai jaisa isiy ke engagement hai "" eh driver yahaan karaay karaay kya dekh raha ho?? chal kaam kar" " Ey Kya samajhe thi ho appna app ko? saree paan ka tum ameer tu nahi hojathi tumhari okath kya hai pool gayi kya?? yaad kardo tum hai?" "Tu kya yaad karwaya ga driver main tu outhouse main rathiy hoon  AC aur achcha khanna kathi hoon, ja baat kartha hai Driver kahin ka" Shamoli leaves a very angry Veeru... " Aaj yeh kya huwa kyun main Sir ko nahi bole payi? mujhe achcha lagtha hai jub Kunal Sir mujhe sai kuch maangay ya kuch poochay yeh pyaar hai ya kuch aur? kya hai yeh ehsaas jho mera dil main hai pehle tu kabhi nahi tha ab kyun sub kuch achcha lag tha hain, Unki de huwi saree paan kaar achcha kyun laga?, Kya Kunal Sir mera baara main soch thay hai ka nahi?" " Shamoli kya soch rahi ho chai banao Kunal Sir ka liya" Kantha Thai app bhi nahi Shamoli main Sir kaliya chai banaythi hoon" Jeeji main theek hoon aur Sir ko sirf meri chai pasaand hai" " Aaj main bohot kush hoon Sia Beti ke engagement hai everyone enjoy the party" " Jaaytji that was soo sweet of you, ab hum tilak ke rasm shoro karay" everyone is watching karisma and her husband go and put Tilak on Sia but Kunal watching this gets upset and leaves " Sir aap ke chai"" mujhe nahi chaiya" " Sir ek baat kahoon app bilkool achchay nahi lagtha udaas kya huwa sir app wahaan Sia maam ka saath kushi main shamal hoona chaiya magaar app yahaan akhelay?"" Kuch baatien aisi hothi hai jho waqt sai karni yeh phir ke jathi hai aur maina yeh dono nahi ke na maina waqt siir apni shaadi ke aur na maina waqt  sir apni family banayi."...... epi ends on Shamoli's face
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

very nice! please continue..

 
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
well done! i really apreciate your efforts