Fanfic: Kunal and Shamoli ke ajab kahani!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys im new to this side of the forum been a quite reader now i'm writing a fanfic on my two favs Kunal and Shamoli im just loving both of them... I'll start with the fanfic and hope that you all like it and encourage me to keep up with the good work....
 
It's night and Kunal Mehra is in his room working on a case when Shamoli knocks on the door " Sir Kya main adhaar a sakthi hoon?" "Yes, come in, Kya chathi ho?" "Sir main sirf yeh kahna chathi hoon ka mujhe manzoor hai outhouse main rehnay ka liya aur sirf chabbi lehnay ayi hoon" Achcha yeh baat hai good good, dil se nahi socha good, chabbi table par hain uta lo" "Theek hain main chal thi hoon" "Ek second rokko Shamoli mujhe ek cup chai bana do"" Ji sir" Shamoli leaves with a smile on her face and goes to make Kunal Sir some Chai" Sir app ke chai"" Thanks" just before Shamoli leave she slips and Kunal goes and holds her. they look at one another with  a gaze (background music plays: nainon ki mat maaniyo re nainon ki mat suniyo naina thag lenge ) "Mujhe chor do Sir main theek hoon, main ab jathi hoon" Okay you may go, hmmm ajeeb hai jab yeh athi hai kuch na kuch hotha kyun hai". "Driver mujhe mera samaan chaiya " Veeru looks at Shomali with anger "eh driver kis ko bola?? "Driver ho tu driver he bolo gi saab tu nahi jo hai vho hi bola' she gives a smirk and leaves a very angry Veeru.." Saali kya samajh thi hai app na app ko koi heroine hai yeh phir kisi president ke beti" ja outhouse ke ac ka paas jao mujhe tumhari zaroraat nahi hai" it's morning and Kantha thay calls for Shamoli to make chai for Kunal Sir" Aye Mirchi Saab kaliya Chai banao aur day do" Theek hai Kantha thay main abhi jakar banathi hoon who kya yaad karangay ka😉... She leaves and goes and gives Kunal Sir chai....
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Asherkibiwi thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice ff.............plz continue........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice ..
Continue plzzz...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Episode starts with Shamoli telling kanthay thai that she's gonna
make chai for Kunal sir...
"Kantha thai yeh dekho Kunal sir yeh chai hamesha yaad karanga aur hamesha yehi chai maangay gay...." Achcha Achcha jao Kunal Sir ko day Ao" " Sir Can i come in" Yeah come in"  Sir chai.... Sir main aaj jaldi ja sakthi hoon?" Haan theek hain kaam katham kar ka chali jao" Achanak light band ho jathi hai aur Kunal Sir gaberathay hain aur shor machanay lagthay hai..." Sir main yahaan hoon gab raiyah nahi main abhi candle lakay athi hoon" Nahi Shamoli Mujhe akela na Choro please" theek hain Kunal Sir  main yahaa rathi hoon  app ka saath yahaa ek candle hai. Main abhi jalaathi hoon" the candle is lit and both are looking into each others eyes (background music plays: nainon ki mat maaniyo re nainon ki mat suniyo naina thag lenge  Thag lenge thag lenge..naina raat ko chalte chalte swargan mein le jaave) Ek dosray ka aankho main kohay sa doono jub light ajathi hain aur phir Kunal Sir ka haath candle pay lag jathi hai" Sir app theek tu ho ek second main first aid kit lakay athi hoon" Nahi iski Koi zaroorat nahi tum ja sakthi ho, aur haan kisi ko hamari is light janay wali baat kisi koi patha nahi chal ni chahiya samajhe kayi" " Ji Sir koi baat nahi, Main chalthi hoon... Na jaana mera saath kya ho raha hain jub bhi main Kunal Sir ka saath hothi hoon tu hamesha yeh kuch kyun hotha hai" It starts to rain and she gets all wet" yeh lo ab baraash bhi hona lagi😕" *beep beep* Oye Shamoli" Sir App yahaan?"Kyun nahi a saktha?? baraash par rahi hain main tum hai drop kardoo?" Nahi Sir app kyun takleef kar raha ho main chalhi jathi hoon" "theek hain driver ghar chalo main bhi baraash ka mazaa lay loon"" Sir yeh" "shut up tum kho kis na bolne ko kaha?? Nahi na tu Chalo" ( background music :Ho aisa lagta hai jo na hua hone ko hai Aisa lagta hai ab dil mera khone ko hai Varna dil kyon dhadakta Saansein kyon ruktiMere neendein kyon ud jaati)" Sir main ab Chalthi hoon Ghar agaya hain main Veeru ko Kathi hoon ka app ko ghar chor day" Nahi shamoli main chala jatha hoon theek hain take care bye" both look at one another and leave their seperate way ..." yeh Kya ho Raha hain mera saath kyun mujhe achcha laga jub Sir mera saath thay? phele aisa tu kabhi nahi howa tu ab??" Ek nokarani kaliya main baraash main gaya kyun? why?? kyun jub yeh insist karthi main maan jantha hoon? kyun jub saath hothi hain tu achcha lagtha hai? kyun yahi ek lardkhi meri aankhon main dekh kar baat karthi hai?".....
 
do they both love each other? or do they just care for one another??? wait and read... please do comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww, thanks dear well if I can't get dem together on TV I can at least get dem together in here, so thank u so much and Continue soon....pretty please
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Posted: 14 years ago
Epi starts of where kunal is talking to himself: Ek nokarani kaliya main baraash main gaya kyun? why?? kyun jub yeh insist karthi main maan jantha hoon? kyun jub saath hothi hain tu achcha lagtha hai? kyun yahi ek lardkhi meri aankhon main dekh kar baat karthi hai?"....." bhaiya app ko sardi lag jayagi main app ko ghar chor tha hoon" Veeru koi baat nahi main chala jatha hoon""Nahi bhaiya chalo "Shamoli looking at Kunal Sir with a smile and twinkle in her eyes ( background music :Ho aisa lagta hai jo na hua hone ko hai Aisa lagta hai ab dil mera khone ko hai Varna dil kyon dhadakta Saansein kyon rukti Mere neendein kyon ud jaati) next moring...."Karishma vho shamoli ayi kya? " Jaaytji mujhe kya maloom ka who mahrani ayi hain ka nahi, jub dil kartha athi hai jub nahi tu nahi athi"" anyways forget it maina aaj ek party raki hai sia ke engagment party theek hai"" Sir app na yaad kiya?" Haan aaj maina ek party raki hai aur tum ko achay kaperay pan na hogay humari standard ke!""Ji Sir magaar mera paas nahi hai?" Mujhe maloom tha ka tum yehi kaho ge yeh lo kaperay maina pasand ke hai haan aggar tumhai nahi pasaand tu yeh lo paisay"" Nahi Sir mujhe pasaand hai paisay app rak lo main yeh pan loongi"" wow itni achi saree Sir na diya gold aur pink colour ka, kitna maaynga hogay kum sa kum ek lakh ka hoga" Ey kis ka chori ke kya itna maanga saree kaha sai churaya?""Ey Driver maina chori nahi ke kya sir na mujhe diya okay samjay aur Shamoli kisi cheez ke chori nahi karthi aggar koi dayga main tu layloongi, aur waisa aaj party hai isliya aaj shamoli Driver sai baat nahi karthi bohot kaam hai"" Saali appna app ko kya samajh thi maharani ja tum jaisi hazaar mil jayanga"" Aaj main Kunal Mehra appni Sia beti ke engagment ke kushi yeh party de hain everbody enjoy the party"  Shamoli enters  the hall and is looking stunning in the pink and gold saree.." Kunal Sir," Kunal looks at her and is just gazing at her" Shamoli tum is main kitni achchi lag rahi ho" Karishma announces that couples should slow dance..." Sir main ab chalthi hoon kafi kaam hai aur kantha thai ko meri madaat ke zaroorat hogi" As shamoli starts to leave Kunal grabs her arm" Kantha Thai aur tumhari behan sambal laigi, mera saath ek dance bhi nahi karo gi? This is an order" ( background music plays: Koi chehra nigaahon pe chhaane laga Koi ab roz aankhon mein aane laga Aayi rut jo nayi jaage armaan kai Mausam koi ghazal jaise gaane laga Oh aisa lagta hai jaise nasha hone ko hai Aisa lagta hai hosh mera khone ko hai).....epi ends
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG that was gr8....like as much as i like veeru and shamoli.... i want shamoli to be with kunal...bt with seeing any rape scences....anywayz gr8 ff  and plz count soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

very nice

please continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
great one plz continue
i like kunal and shamoli very much
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes i like kunal and shamoli jodi very much