my naksh ff(part 4 edited completely)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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well hello friends thank u so much for giving sweet response well my ff is totally dedicated to all naksh fans and specially lathika and nasco.my ff will start from pallus dilema .i will use some short form for (bhabhi maa as bm to weird gayatri maa(gm) daddajee(dj)and raj banna as(rb)
part 1
akshara in a happy mood returns home unaware of the situation that gm and bm are waiting for her.bm ask the reason why she was without a pallu outside.akshara was shocked her face falls down she says nothing a tear falls down.gm gave her a last warning that she does not want to hear any complains.bm says that it is because of her that dj didn't had his dinner and is very upset and even he didn't drank milk.gm says to come and have dinner akshara says that she had dinner at her mom's house.gm very well and with her weird expression says ok then go and have sleep akshara says how can i sleep as i have to look around house bm says that they will manage go and have sleep.akshara slowly goes to her room and sits on bed.she saw naitik photo on the table picks up and says that i wish u were hear and would have helped me.akshara then thinks to phone varsha and disclose this matter but then she thought that that she should not disturb her.suddenly her phone rings its naitik she thought to tell him but then she thought that he is not hear so she should not bother him.she picks the phone.she says hello suddenly naitik says "lagta hai kissi ko meri yaad bilkul nahi aa rahi hai aur kissi ko meri judaai pasand aa rahi hai."akshara in surprise says what?? naitik says "haan bilkul meri dulhania mujhe bhool gayi gayi hai.warna woh mera phone jaroor uthati ab woh tarap meri biwi mein nahi reh gaya jo meri biwi ko shaadi se pehle hotithi par main ek baat apni pyaari aur bholi si patni ko yeh kehna chaahonga ki koi unhe yaad karein naa karein par unke pyaar mein paagal munna ko uski munni ki yaad aa rahi hai.yeh romeo tarap raha hai apni juliet ko gale lagane"akshara says "aisa kuch nahi hai .main varsha aur shaurya dadu ke saath movie dekhne gayi thi iss liye shayad main ne apka phone nahi uthapayi"naitik says oh i see then he says"waah akshara aapki toh lottery nikal gayi movie not bad at all.akshara says not very good.naitik ask why?akshara was about to say then naitik says so somebody was missing me.akshara laughs then naitik says fine then he ask akshara whose company she likes?akshara saya"ismein bhi koi puchne wali baat hai?naitik smiles then she says varsha!😆😆naitik face falls down.he says fine and says he is tired gud night.akshara understand this then she says that u did not let me to complete my sentence i was about to say that varsha gives me a gud company but no one can match her real life heroes company she then say i luv u a lot and she says nobody can acquire the place which u have in my heart.my heart beats only for u and i will make sure that place is not acquired by anyone else.naitik becomes happy hearing this then he also says her that i luv u a lot and nobody will ocuppy ur place in my heart too.they both smile to each other then naitik says i am missing u a lot and if dj would have given u permission then i would have made our life more special here.as soon i will complete my project in reward i would ask dj to allow us to go out as i m pretty sure that he will give u the permission after all u are everyones fav bahu as no complains against u .akshara face falls down she says ok naitik gud night.naitik again says i luv u and both goes for the sleep.
well this is part 1 i hope u enjoyed it as i was enjoying myself writing this well there are lots more in this but thats all for today.[note.i have edited the spelling mistake and i am sorry for the inconvenience]
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice......very nice.........keeping aside some spelling mistakes here and there, the concept was good..................and I liked the convo b/w Naksh............keep it up and update whenever u get time!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was a cute part😳!good work👍🏼,do continue writing😍!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was definetly nice....liked d convo b/w naksh....it needs lil editin other thn tht it was rlly nice....
cont soon dear.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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is it my name you mentioned up there?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnx for dedicating the ff to me!!
sorry yaar!!i culdn't chek it before.
im a little cramped now with project work practicals and other school stuff.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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well friends thank u for u'r response.i m glad that u"ll liked first part of the ff. today i will write part 2 and at about 7 in the evening i ll write part 3 also.in my school i got 4 period free so utilised the time in writing part 2 and half of part 3.tomorrow i 'll post 2 part more.her comes part 2

part 2
the next morning in singhanias house-
while coming from her bedroom gm went to nakshs room.she decided that if akshara won't have wake up then she is not only going to scold akshara but she will complain this to rajshri too.bm also thought the same way.but they both were surprised to see that akshara was reciting doha.bm &gm were surprised to see her because they felt may be akshara wont wake up early as she was late yesterday.dj was silent in a bad mood only he came to puja but when he heard the ramcharitmanas dohas from akshara he felt very refreshing his all anger vanished.akshara's voice was very revealing the whole singhania house felt refreshing.dj sat beside akshara rb also joined him.gm and bm too sat beside.after akshara completed dj says"bahoo thare mooh se bhajan sunne ko man karat hai" akshara becomes happy.she sang the bhajan.when akshara brings aarti to dj he says"bahoo thare kanth mein maa saraswati niwas karti hain.bahoot hi chokho bahu mili hai mare ko".dj had seen how akshara was feeling guilt so he decided to forgive him.dj says"i am very happy and lucky that i got bahu like you"gm &bm surprisingly looked towards dj.he further says"it is because of u only that today munna has understood his responsibility and he joined our business other wise he said he wanted to do job"rb says akshara u r not my bahoo only but u r my daughter.gm & bm are really shocked as why both dj&rb are praising akshara only when yesterday only she had break the rule.dj says"when first shankhri tai had brought u'r rishta that time only i had decided that u will be my bahoo.u"l only be munna's dulhan.he says u r my bahoo so i don't want to hear any complain from anybody.u should keep this in u'r mind after all u r u r the best bahoo i like very few people and u'r one of those.bahoo ab tujhe is khandan ko aage barahana hai to tujhe is ghar ki har rasm riwajoon ka khaal rakhna hai.chal ab kal ki baat bhool ja aur ab hamare liye khana banao aaj ham apni bahoo ke haath ka khana khayenge.then from the back mohit says haan bhabhi jaldi khana banaiye kyunki ab jab yahan naitik nahi hai to apne is devar ko hi khana khilaiye aakhir saiyaan nahi to devar hi sahi.dj gives him an angry look then he says raj banna munshijee se hissab dekhna hai as soon dj and rb leaves gm an d bm also laeve then rashmi says bhabhi aaj aap superwoman ki tarah khana banana kyunki yeh sarphara mohit aaj khoob khayega.mohit says kyun tere naitik daada ko hi haak hai bhabhi ke haath ka khane ka.then from the back suddenly a voice comes jee haan.mohit says naitik he hugs him then naitik says kyun jab main yahan nahi tha to tu meri biwi se flirt kar raha tha.meriiii biwi ke haath ka khane ka pehla hak sirf mere paas hai baad mein kiss aur ka.naitik then look at akshara who is really surprise to see naitik.
now i stop here at 7 in the evening i "ll post part 3 so pls reply and give u'r suggestion as i really need u'r support.bye
Edited by shiraja - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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read the first two parts ...they were awesome..vvery nice ff....eagerly waiting for part 3😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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itz was rllllllly gd yar....
jst needs a lil editin.....
gr8 job!!!!!!!!
cont. soon dear....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very good!Keep it up, dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'm glad that you have edited the part well this time..................Even I make mistakes while typing fast.................Good job! 👏 👍🏼

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