~*~Prida Romantic Scene Thread~*~ - Page 35

Niki - Nice work! Keep it up!

Sistu - As I started reading I didn't know how I felt about the scene 'cos it deviates so much from the storyline so far - that is, it changed their past as we know it. I liked that despite a vastly different storyline you kept the characters - their behavior, feelings, emotions - intact. But your words drew me in, and by the end I wanted more!! Please continue!

superbly written sistu....wonderful.....plzz continue soon..

Awesome FF sistu ...... loved the fact that Balaraj is alive and Pri and Damz have started off on a right note !!!!!!!

@honey: tnx for liking it. I m gald u found it pure. U knw right now the serial is surrounded by revenge bhoot so i wanted to write something light.

@Sistu-very interesting scene...please update soon!

Its d continuation of yesterday's scene[11.11.09].. Wer pri is coming n assuring Ila dat evrythng wil b alrite n nw dat he is a family member .. n .avni is his responsibility..

Then....he sez to ila "aapko abb aaram ki zaroorat hai"..n luks at damz indicating her to take her 2 bed.. Ila is reluctant at 1st.. Bt then yields as pri gvs her a ' plzz tak some rest' kinda luk...damz then taks her mom 2 bed makes her lie dwn..sits by her side n assures her wth a nod dat evrythng is gonna b OK nw....

..Rosh n Varunr r still thr.. Pri then sez to varun..2 go hm nw..dat its quite late nw..n too rosh 2 go 2 her rum n asks her 2 tak sm rest too... Varun leaves...but rosh is reluctant ..n sez dat she wants 2 b wth her mama..then he tries cnvncng her dat her mom needs sm rest n she needs to b alone 4 smtym.. n she too was quite tired n needs sm rest..otherwise she wud fall sick.. N her gently keeps his hands on her head in a brotherly way...she then agrees halfheartedly..n pri then leads her to her rum..drops her there n wishes her her gudnite n retrns back..

Here damz is still tryn 2 cntrol her tears n tryn 2 cmfort Ila..pri then cms thr n sez damz slowly to go n chk on avni nw..n sez dat he wud b wth Ila till then... damz eyes convey dat she is thnkn hw grateful she is to hv hm as a husband n luks at hm lovingly... n he smiles faintly on seeing her..n then damz leaves..

In avni's rum: we see dat avni cried her soul out n has fallen asleep still a few tears flown out of her eyes...n mumbling smdng.. tears swell up in damz eyes as she sees her belovd angel like sis in dis state.. she goes near her n caresses her hair n then covers her up wth d sheet n leaves switchn off the lites knwng dat her sis is gonna hv tough days ahead..

Here pri is lukn at ila who by nw has fallen asleep.. N thinks..wat his bro has done 2day n hw disgraceful he was feeling 2 hv a brothr like hm.. He really felt sad 4 d lady who was lying in 4nt of hm... he cud feel her pain.. Her trauma.. He cud nvr see any lady gettn insultd evr.. And here it was in public..n dat too bcoz of his own brothr.. He felt ashamed of hmslf dat he stood thr helpless 2day.. He nvr expctd his bro to do smdng like this evr in his life.. Nt even in his wildest dreamz...

Damz meanwhile cms n gvs a luk dat said "thnk u 4 being there prithvi.".n indicates dat nw she will take care of her mom..... He undrstood dat she needs 2 b near her mom at this moment n slowly leaves the rum.. Nt wthot lukn back at his beloved wife..n her tear stained eyes... his heart ached.. He cudnt bear it.. N worse ..he cudnt do anydng abt it....

At arnd 2am.. Pri cms 2 chk into ila 's rum as lite was still on.. He hadnt slept at all.. He was jus lukn out of the window n was thnkn hw wrng he had ben in trustn his bro.. N hw his journey wth this family had begun.. N wer it was leading to.. Here in da rum he sees dat damz has fallen asleep on the bedside wer she was sittn dwn...leaning on ila's feet... dat sight ... jus tore his heart apart.. To luk at damini.. His damini...the brave , strong headed damini..all heart brokn ,weak..crying herslf 2 sleep.. He cudnt even bear d thot dat once he relly wantd 2 see her brokn.. Nw he cudnt evn bear d slightest tears 4m her eyes'....he went near her..n slowly tried to carry her.. She was moaning as her sleep was gettn diturbd.. Bt then he gently succeeds to carry her in his arms.. he thn carries her like a feather to THEIR rum.. All thhru d way admiring her beautiful..bt tear stained face.... dat was a sight to behold.. His angel sleepn peacefully ion his arms.. He wud nvr let go of her..nvr Evr..

He then places her on their bed.. N tucks her up in d bed..as he was doing dat he felt an urge to kiss away her tears.. Bt he restricted hmslf.. N covered her up.. Bt as he was gng to leav' ....he jus cudnt resist anymre a gv a small peck on her foerehead'....a tear almst fell on her face..bt he was quick 2 wipe it away.. He cudnt let anythng disturb her sleep nw'... n then he promised.."I wnt let anybdy brng tears to ur eyes damini.. Nt sameer .. Not inder'... nt anybdy'.....nt even myself daminee.. I wil do anythng nw to see u smile.." n caressses her hair'...wen suddenly she strts mumbling.."avni'....tumhe kuch nahi hoga..main hoon na..ro mat''' .....jai.. Tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho'.." all the randmly.. He gets really worried n gently calls her name.. even wen shez deep in sleep..she still responds to his voice n sez.."prithvvviii" n snuggles up to his hand'...seeing her face at peace.. He decides to sit nxt 2 her the whole nite..so he sat besides her on the bed.. Slantng his head on d back board of the bed'...still caressing his precious possession..n there they lie'.... Finding cmfort in their beloved arms..till 2mrw..

Wen things wnt b d same again.....................

So guys.. I knw this is a drag.. Bt cudnt help postn it here.. I was feeln so sad abt ystrday ..dat I was imagining wat shud pri do 2 cmpensate his silence ystrday' n this came up.. So yaa.. Sry 4 putting up dis nonsense here !! Im rdy 4 all d rotten tomatoes !! :D..

N yaa..wil put up wedding nxt part In few days..

• LUV NIKI..

niki love u for awsome scene🤗