Hum aapke hain kaun?-fanfic - Page 3

PART-10...kavya loses his control:papa,how cud u ignore anjali?u 4got what he has dun 2 us?she is the reason why i'm here now.
dad:i no that,but our circumstance..
kavya:i don't want 2 hear anything.
dadi:kavya is rite.he shud'nt cheat anjali.
kavya reveals his luv 4 anjali 2 pammi.
pammi was very sad:its ok kavya.i understand.i'm fond of u,bcoz of ur true luv 4 anjali.but plz see me as ur gud friend.
kavya:i always saw u like that.still i'm.
pammi smiles:thank u kavya.so a gud friend shud help the friend when he is in need.rite?so i'll giv u sum money.ur debt will be over.
kavya was shocked.
pammi:don't be shocked kavya.4 this money only ur dad forced u 2 marry me.but i'm telling u that u don'r hav 2 marry me 4 this.its just a friend'd help.
he:thanks 4 ur big heart pammi.but i can't recieve it. pammi:thats ur complex kavya.if u don't pay money,u'll lose everything..then ho can u bring anjali 2 ur life?she'll suffer along with u.u want 2 see it? kavya:no..i won't allow her 2 suffer.
pammi:then u recieve this money.
kavya accepts her money.
anjali's mom nitya cumes 2 see kavya:slok is becoming really cruel.he won't allow 2 conduct this wedding.slok will not be there 4 2 days.b4 he cumes back plz take anjali away.
nitya cries.
kavya:tell anjali 2 get ready.i'll cum 2mrrow 2 take her home.
nitya becomes happy.
slok's mom finds it out & informs him.
anjali was getting ready.she hears the sound of a vehcle:kavya has cum.
but unfortunately it was not kavya,but slok.

Okay..i've got a mixed reaction..on the one hand i'm soo glad you got Kavya out of tht messy situation with Pammi and at the same time saving his family financially 😃..but then there is the saddness knowing tht just when Anjali was abt to have her happiness be complete 😭..Shlok returns to interfere!😕
You sure know how to create suspense Jas 😉..it's kind of lyk how Bajali makes one thing gd happen and lets something majorly bad happen the next!
Keep up the gd wrk! 😊

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bad shlok, why is he not good.
and pammi is nice wow 👏 👏 i am sure she'll turn negative 😉 . good job 👏

i just read all the parts today. wow good job, interesting story. my feeling abt the story so far
part1 i liked the way u characterised anjali
part2 oh what anjali is really a brat. cant she leave kavya alone
shlok is really mean, negative character i can't really see him like that. but still there shld be one.

on the other hand both nitya and pammi r sweet n kind makes me raise my eyebrow.

the story is really nice plz cont.

pART-11..slok shouts at anjali:what do u think of me?u thot u can easily fool me?let kavya cum.i'll kill him.i won't allow u 2 go with him.
anjali got scared.
he goes near bindhya:u thot u can save ur sister? bindhya:yes,she'll be saved.u cannot do anything.when i'm alive u won't get her.
slok:so that means i won't get anjali if u r alive..then i'll kill u.then i'll get anjali no.
slok beats bindhya heavily.anjali-nitya cud'nt save her. bindhya's situation was really dangerous.so anjali takes a knife & stabbed him.ppl were shocked.anjali screams. kavya reached.he did'nt understand anything.
anjali cries:i killed slok. kavya was shocked. anjali:if u had cum a little more earlier,this wud'nt hav happened.
kavya was really upset.
anjali:u go kavya.god does'nt like us living 2gether.u marry pammi.don't spoil our life.u go kavya..plz giv me ur fav violen.thats enuff 4 me 4 ur presense.but in jail i dunno whether they'll allow me 2 carry.go kavya...but plz don't say 'gud-bye'.i can't bear it.
kavya:anjali..
suddenly she falls into kavya's arms.
she:u shud not cum 2 see me 2 the jail.don't see me in that situation.sumtimes i won't be seen alive there. kavya:anjali,how can i liv without u?
he hugs her tightly.
kavya sees slok's hand moving slightly.
kavya:slok is not dead.we'll take him 2 the hospital. anjali:no let him die.otherwise he won't giv us piece. kavya:r u crazy?
bindhya:kavya,we'll take him 2 the hospital. anjali:u r mad.he'll kill u.
bindhya:i don't want him 2 die,not bcoz i luv him.bcoz if he dies,u'll be in jail.u'll miss a happy life.i won'yt u 2 be happy in kavya's hands.
anjali was touched by that. Slok gets hospitalized.he gets saved. slok opens his eyes. bindhya stares at him. slok:i tried 2 kill u.then also u saved me? bindhya:that's not bcoz of my luv.
slok becomes sad:i won't destroy anjali's life.let her go with kavya.anjali,i'll be ur old jeeju.u can trust me this time.
bindhya:i can't trust u. slok:i no that.but giv me chance..2day onwards i'll be ur faithful husband,i promise.
he catches bindhya's hand.she gets relieved. slok:anjali,thanku 4 teaching me a lesson.all these days i was not conscious.now with ur punishment i think i've a change.
kavya-anjali smile.
they get married & hav a happy life.
THE END.

👏 brilliant 👏 good job 👏
when will u post more..........i mean the next fanfic 😛

👏 Nice, swift finish! 😃 I was soo worried tht u had broken the cycle of happy endings and was really going to let Anji take the fall and live a miserable life in jail! 😕 Yet, Shlok even if he didnt deserve to be saved, was! 😛 It's hard to believe he changed so easily..but it is a gd way to end a story..leaving ur reader wiv hope! 😃