Nupur's sad poetry 4 mayank,written by me-Do read

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello friends,
After watching yesterday's epi I was really sad and moved.. Nupur aka rati's tears does it to me everytime... so the dormant poet in me kinda woke up and i wrote a poetry....here it goes... please friends do read and comment...


"Walking to Tears"


My heart cries and I cry too,
no one understands the pain of these unshed tears,
what is invisible is not understandable.
but is it easy to show whats deep within?
when u don't even notice what can be seen....

to the heart that loves ardently.
to the heart that craves u solely.
to the heart that wants u to be happy,
to the heart that never cries for itself lest it should discomfort others,
to the heart that never had the guts to respect its desires.
to that heart u can not,can never be faithful......

the gallons of unshed tears will remain stored in my bossom.
shall pain me,shall be a deterent to my breathing,
but shall never let you know anything lest you get baffled,
what havoc you have done,what havoc you have created.......

To the heart of man you are insensitive, to yourself you are faithful.
since when to my heart was it less than treason?
to accept the loss of love and life with sanity and reason.....




Fellow friends do comment and add ur 2 cents in the way of lines froma poetry and quotations that suit MN....i shall be gratified.....

thanx
rinky
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing Rinky !!!!!! 👏👏👏
but is it easy to show whats deep within?
when u dont even notice what can be seen....
These two lines r d best part of it....
U have potrayed nupur's feeling very beautifully....
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Originally posted by: Piya_2009

Amazing Rinky !!!!!! 👏👏👏



thoda details me toh boliye meri friend...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great Rinky...you poured out Nupur's heart...
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Originally posted by: -Rinky-



thoda details me toh boliye meri friend...

I have edited my comment....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Rinky... Very nice yaar... Tumhaare Dil kae poet ko humaesha awake rahnae do.. it can do wonders...
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Originally posted by: Anthara

Rinky... Very nice yaar... Tumhaare Dil kae poet ko humaesha awake rahnae do.. it can do wonders...




😃

thank u jee.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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My fav lines ,

the gallons of unshed tears will remain stored in my bossom.
shall pain me,shall be a deterent to my breathing,
but shall never let you know anything lest you get baffled,
what havoc you have done,what havoc you have created.......
Awesome rinky😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww.. Rinky ...u wrote that so well.

It really is very touching...!!

welldone! 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing Poem. Absolutely brilliant. Got no words to describe how beautiful it is. You penned down Nupur's feelings so beautifully. Amazing..👏

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