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Posted: 15 years ago
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She is tough, a fighter,
in the true sense of the word.
That's how she's held her own,
in a man's world...

She's waged countless wars,
and won them all with panache.
She fights with such fire that all
opposition is reduced to ash.

She thinks she is complete-
that she doesn't need a man.
Which is why she never knew,
when her love began...

Love crept on her unawares,
and now she's really unsure.
For the first time she hears someone,
knocking on her heart's door...

She's accustomed to winning,
giving in seems so difficult.
So she resists, but she can't ignore,
that her mind is in a tumult...

Someone's battered down her defences,
but she won't give in that easily.
If she just listens to her heart she'll know,
this defeat is sweeter than victory...

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About Damz... Not too bad, I hope?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Not bad?!! come off it, Diya!! it was soo beautiful!!

loves the last para..

Someone's battered down her defences,
but she won't give in that easily.
If she just listens to her heart she'll know,
this defeat is sweeter than victory...

WOW.. so well put!!
👏👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey diya.......not bad at all.......rather very good!..👍🏼
....dear u plz post your poem in PriDa Romantic scene thread, as it is a store house of all PriDa related stuff!....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bad, Diya? That was all kinds of awesome, babe ..😊 And you said it all about our Queenie's present dilemma, or quandary, or just her state of mind..And since Queenie is kinda coming home, it's going to get even more interesting..

Originally posted by: diya86

this defeat is sweeter than victory...



Lovely..And that is the most important issue, and the zenith of your work of art..Surrendering to someone is sweet misery at times, and in this case, Queenie will find victory in defeat..Kingie will himself surrender to her charms when he knows how she feels about him.. He won't find another way, he won't be able to resist, he won't have a choice..And that will be Queenie's gain, that will be their fairytale coming alive..

Anyways, I am just rambling..Well done, Diya..⭐️Keep them coming..It's absolute pleasure reading your work..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Mridhu
Thanks a lot! After today's awesomeness, I just feel nothing I write can ever match up to PriDa. But as long as y'all like it, I'm happy!
@ Krishy
Thank you! Oh and I'll post it on the PriDa thread... I kinda forgot we had one! oops...
@ Sarah
Thanks so much, babe! Love your replies!!! Means so much to me..

Surrendering to someone is sweet misery at times, and in this case, Queenie will find victory in defeat..Kingie will himself surrender to her charms when he knows how she feels about him.. He won't find another way, he won't be able to resist, he won't have a choice..And that will be Queenie's gain, that will be their fairytale coming alive..

OMG, Sarah!!! There's that poetic prose I love... That was soo beautiful!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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ohhhh wow!!!! gr8... today's day is really really magical... one good PriDa episode has brought so much of change in our heart and soul ... it has refreshened our minds and had given us the immense energy... thanks to the creatives for giving us such a mind-blowing PriDa episode which have once again awakened the sleepy Poet , the dreamer, the Prose writer in all of us... for so many days we were like fishes dying in drought because of lack of water and fighting for dear life... and today its like the fish have been transferred to a fresh flowing stream where it has found a new life... @ She thinks she is complete that she doesn't need a man.Which is why she never knew,when her love began... was pure gold, diamond, ruby, emberald and all other gems which are found on this very Earth... no matter how much Damini tries to put a brave front and tries to show that she is a strong woman... but in heart of hearts she is still a small innocent child who needs love, care and protection... that is the reason she always cringes to Pri's shirt so tightly .. by doing so she feels so safe and secure.. I did not mean to say that Damini is a weakling ... no... but somewhere she is tired of being a pillar of strength for her family, being a son to her family and playing a role which she is not... even she needs to be pampered, needs to be protected and its oh so beautifully done by our very own prince charming Prithvi Saxena... really PriDa rocks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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bad???!!!! its pure gold huny⭐️... keep doing it👍🏼🤗.... specially 4 prida😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tina, you are right, this epi has been like a breath of fresh air!!

@ Damz being like a small innocent child - I agree. Not just Damz, every human being is like that. Isn't that why we all dream of true love? No matter how strong we are, we all need someone who'll hold us when we're down, celebrate with us when we achieve something and encourage us to be the best we can... And for Damz, that person is Pri. I'm waiting for the day Pri will allow Damz to play that role in his life - when he'll cry with his head in her lap, when he'll forget all his worries and troubles in her arms, when he'll feel stronger knowing she's with him, when they don't just gaze at each other but turn to look at the world and face it hand-in-hand... *sigh* Oops, looks like I rambled again! Sorry...

Thanks for liking this and replying, babe!!
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Fibs, I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for replying... And my silly PriDa poems aren't going to stop anytime soon... Not till y'all get tired of them, in any case...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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BEAUTIFUL DIA!!!! so well put!!!!
I have another few lines, I read somewhere which go so perfectly with damz
"Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote no Throughfare,
But Love came laughing by,
and said I enter everywhere"
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Diya...if ever..i mean EVER you decide to publish your poetry.....will you consider......ummm no scratch that.....you will have to make me your publisher....i will make sure that each and every person buys your work and you will get the bestest of publishing results 😉


this was all things AMAZING!!! love ya loads for being such an awesome Poet!!🤗

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