My First Poem (My Love - My Life. . . ❤️)

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

mast hai yaar......agar reserved waalon ko hata do to i am the first one to comment......i loved it.....its awesome....

Originally posted by: Jiah.Angel

Hola guys!! This is Kanky!! 😊 I've written many FF's on MayUr as well as SaJan . . . but this is my first attempt on romantic poetry. 😳 You see, em just 13 so please excuse me if you find it a bit too insane,😕😆
Wow u're only 13??? u are sure talented girl😉

You're smile is so heavenly,
When you hold me tenderly,
I fly high,
I won't stop loving you,
Even if I try.
Awesome, its reli cute😳

I feel hurt when you cry,
I feel like bringing every happiness for you,
I'd never hate you,
Even if you do.

Life without you would be incomplete,
You are by my side, that's all I wash, I think u meant wish😆😆
For that gives me sheer bliss.

Moon is your face,
The dark night is your hair.
Don''t feel annoyed if I stare at you,
I'd never hate you,
Even if you do.

My love is unconditional,
With you my life is blissful,
You're here, I'm grateful.

I won't let go of you,
For you are my life. ❤️

OMG Kanky this was reli cute😳 and awesome👏👏
I luved it tooo much, reli nice, keep writing😉

👏How's it guys?? I hope you like it. Both appreciation and criticism are heartily welcome. 😳

Love,
Kanky