*||PYAAR HAI YA SAZAA||* Premeer OS*UPDATED PG 2

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Hi guyz here is Premeer One shot nd i want to tell one thng dat i cnt press *like* button becoz its nt working for me bt if u like it them plz hit da *like* button


<font size="1">"What do you think of yourself Ms Heer Maan? What do you think of yourself,Hun!?" Said Ash as she entered heer's room Whose anger was on cloud nine at that time

"What happend Ash Why r u mad at me???" said heer
"What happened??? I cnt belive dat you are asking me dat what happend dont you know???" ash said
"Look ash if you are talking about Prem then just cut it i dont want to discuss dat topic again in my life" A stubborn nd short tempered heer said
"But i want to discuss dat just answer one question Heer dat Why??? Why did you do dat??? Why Dammit Why???" said Ash
"Ash mein ny jo kia theek kia I dont want more pain" said Heer wid teary eyes seeing her tears Ash cool down nd said
"Pain!!! No heer he wants to give you happiness He....He loves you dammit He loves you!!!!"
"But I dont love him" said Heer
"Another lie You can lie to Prem my dear but not to me I know you Heer nd I know dat You also love him But i cnt understand dat why are you hidding your feelings Plz heer Plz dont do dat to yourself Heer it will give only pain nothing else" said Ash pleading
"Ash I said na I dont love him! Said Heer she was getting irritated
"Why Heer Why???" Ash said
"Becoz I cant Ash I cant love him I cant love anyone All men are same Ash all men are dogs" Heer said
"your Dad left Your mother doesnt mean dat evry man is like your dad Why are you punishing Prem for your Dadz mistake" said Ash widout realizing what she had said Heer was standing there like a statue "I....I am realy sorry I shouldnt hv said dat bt dat da truth Heer Prem is not anyone He is da one who loves you more dn anythng.... Da who will alwayz be wid you....,Da one who smiles when you smile who cry when you cry.... Da one who can see your pain behind your fake smile.... Da one who love dat Heer who is hidding behind this fake heer...dat innocent,painful,bubbly Heer nt this Heer who rude,happy,proud nd who pretends to be strong nd strickt in front of evryone Please Heer just give him one chance just break your silence just let him share your pain Woh tum sy tumhary ghumoon k siwa kuch nai maang raha Heer he just wants you I know You love him nd i also know dat you are hiding your fear behind your NO fear!! dat he will leave you alone with pain just like your dad But heer just give him a chance" Ash said nd left Heer's room Heer was standing there cofused she fell on her knees nd cried her heart out
"Yes Ash Fear!!! Dats da reason Fear!!! What if he will leave me??? What if he is just playing with my feelings??? You are right Ash I LOVE HIM BUT I DONT TRUST HIM" Heer said to herself still crying she remembered what had happened


<font size="4">Flashback</font>

"Ridz,Ash yeh tum log mujhy kahan ley kr ja rahe ho" heer said
"We are here"said Ridz as she stopped da car she gav her a blindfold nd said
"take this cover your eyez nd go straight" Ridz said
"But...." said heer
"just shut up nd do as we say GOO" Said Ash
"okay mam"said Heer
Heer covered her eyez nd went staright she heard dat da car drove away she was walking suddenly she felt a hand arround her face da touch of dat hand sent shiver down her spine Dat was Prem he startd directing her towards da destintation suddenly he stopped he left her waist nd stood in front of her He placed his hand on her cheek nd slowly he opend da blindfold She opend her eyez nd saw da most beautiful view of her life Dat place was fully decorated wid lights candles roses red nd white heart shapd baloons Suddenly her eyez fell on da most beautiful man in da universe His shaggy hair was now properly gelld He war wearing a black armaani suit instead of jeans nd t-shirt His lips nd his choclaty brown eyez Wait!!! His eyez He was not wearing glasses Heer was lost in those attractive eyez when he coughed to get her attention Heer came on earth nd said "Tum!! Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho aur" Prem put his hand on her mouth "Aaj mujhay bolny do heer" he removed his hand nd bend down on his knees nd continued "Heer mein tum say pyaar karta hoon I love You Aur mein janta hoon k tum bhi mujh say pyaar krti ho mein nai jaanta k mein tumsay kitna pyaar karta hoon magar itna jaanta hoon k tumhary bina ji nai sakta I Love You heer" Heer was standing there shockd thinking dat it must b a dream Prem get up nd took a ring out of his pocket He took her handz in his nd kissd her hand wid all his love nd when he was about to put da ring on heer's finger Heer snatchd her hand 4m him nd said "Yeh sab....Yeh....Pyaar....Mein tum say pyaar nai karti mein kisi say pyaar nai karti yeh sab naatak mein achi tarha jaanti hoon tumhara yeh jhoota pyaar...yeh sab ek dikhava hai" She ran away 4m there Prem was standing there with tears in his eyez nd ring in hs handz He was shell shockd all her words were running in his mind he was almost dead




Now Heer was still sitting on da floor Suddenly she got up nd decided to go to shiv mandir Her fav place 2 get da answers of her questions

Pyaar hai ya sazaa
Ay mere dil bata
Toot ta kuen nahin dard ka silsila
Yeh pyaar mein hoon kaisay kaisay imtihaan
Yeh pyaar likhay kaisi kaisi daastan



Here Prem was driving his car widout knowing where to go His coat was removd his tie was loosend his hais was messy again.... Her words were botherng hm "Mera...pyaar jhoota nai hai heer Sirf tumhi sy pyaar kiya hai mein ny sirf tumhi say pyaar Khety hain sacha pyaar zindagi mein sirf ek baar hota hai mein ny apny hissy ka pyaar kar liya ab dobaara nai kar paon ga" Prem said to himself
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Ya rabba
Dede koi jaan bhi agar dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na
Koi asar




I know its nt good bt i still
Hope you will like it Please do comment/critisize nd i hit da *like* button if you like it
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Very nice one shot
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that was good ..................do write a sequel.............
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of course i want a premeer union!!!!!!!!!!
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noce one shot...well written.....waiting for PH reunion!
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"What do you think of yourself Ms Heer Maan? What do you think of yourself,Hun!?" Said Ash as she entered heer's room Whose anger was on cloud nine at that time

"What happend Ash Why r u mad at me???" said heer
"What happened??? I cnt belive dat you are asking me dat what happend dont you know???" ash said
"Look ash if you are talking about Prem then just cut it i dont want to discuss dat topic again in my life" A stubborn nd short tempered heer said
"But i want to discuss dat just answer one question Heer dat Why??? Why did you do dat??? Why Dammit Why???" said Ash
"Ash mein ny jo kia theek kia I dont want more pain" said Heer wid teary eyes seeing her tears Ash cool down nd said
"Pain!!! No heer he wants to give you happiness He....He loves you dammit He loves you!!!!"
"But I dont love him" said Heer
"Another lie You can lie to Prem my dear but not to me I know you Heer nd I know dat You also love him But i cnt understand dat why are you hidding your feelings Plz heer Plz dont do dat to yourself Heer it will give only pain nothing else" said Ash pleading
"Ash I said na I dont love him! Said Heer she was getting irritated
"Why Heer Why???" Ash said
"Becoz I cant Ash I cant love him I cant love anyone All men are same Ash all men are dogs" Heer said
"your Dad left Your mother doesnt mean dat evry man is like your dad Why are you punishing Prem for your Dadz mistake" said Ash widout realizing what she had said Heer was standing there like a statue "I....I am realy sorry I shouldnt hv said dat bt dat da truth Heer Prem is not anyone He is da one who loves you more dn anythng.... Da who will alwayz be wid you....,Da one who smiles when you smile who cry when you cry.... Da one who can see your pain behind your fake smile.... Da one who love dat Heer who is hidding behind this fake heer...dat innocent,painful,bubbly Heer nt this Heer who rude,happy,proud nd who pretends to be strong nd strickt in front of evryone Please Heer just give him one chance just break your silence just let him share your pain Woh tum sy tumhary ghumoon k siwa kuch nai maang raha Heer he just wants you I know You love him nd i also know dat you are hiding your fear behind your NO fear!! dat he will leave you alone with pain just like your dad But heer just give him a chance" Ash said nd left Heer's room Heer was standing there cofused she fell on her knees nd cried her heart out
"Yes Ash Fear!!! Dats da reason Fear!!! What if he will leave me??? What if he is just playing with my feelings??? You are right Ash I LOVE HIM BUT I DONT TRUST HIM" Heer said to herself still crying she remembered what had happened


Flashback

"Ridz,Ash yeh tum log mujhy kahan ley kr ja rahe ho" heer said
"We are here"said Ridz as she stopped da car she gav her a blindfold nd said
"take this cover your eyez nd go straight" Ridz said
"But...." said heer
"just shut up nd do as we say GOO" Said Ash
"okay mam"said Heer
Heer covered her eyez nd went staright she heard dat da car drove away she was walking suddenly she felt a hand arround her face da touch of dat hand sent shiver down her spine Dat was Prem he startd directing her towards da destintation suddenly he stopped he left her waist nd stood in front of her He placed his hand on her cheek nd slowly he opend da blindfold She opend her eyez nd saw da most beautiful view of her life Dat place was fully decorated wid lights candles roses red nd white heart shapd baloons Suddenly her eyez fell on da most beautiful man in da universe His shaggy hair was now properly gelld He war wearing a black armaani suit instead of jeans nd t-shirt His lips nd his choclaty brown eyez Wait!!! His eyez He was not wearing glasses Heer was lost in those attractive eyez when he coughed to get her attention Heer came on earth nd said "Tum!! Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho aur" Prem put his hand on her mouth "Aaj mujhay bolny do heer" he removed his hand nd bend down on his knees nd continued "Heer mein tum say pyaar karta hoon I love You Aur mein janta hoon k tum bhi mujh say pyaar krti ho mein nai jaanta k mein tumsay kitna pyaar karta hoon magar itna jaanta hoon k tumhary bina ji nai sakta I Love You heer" Heer was standing there shockd thinking dat it must b a dream Prem get up nd took a ring out of his pocket He took her handz in his nd kissd her hand wid all his love nd when he was about to put da ring on heer's finger Heer snatchd her hand 4m him nd said "Yeh sab....Yeh....Pyaar....Mein tum say pyaar nai karti mein kisi say pyaar nai karti yeh sab naatak mein achi tarha jaanti hoon tumhara yeh jhoota pyaar...yeh sab ek dikhava hai" She ran away 4m there Prem was standing there with tears in his eyez nd ring in hs handz He was shell shockd all her words were running in his mind he was almost dead




Now Heer was still sitting on da floor Suddenly she got up nd decided to go to shiv mandir Her fav place 2 get da answers of her questions

Pyaar hai ya sazaa
Ay mere dil bata
Toot ta kuen nahin dard ka silsila
Yeh pyaar mein hoon kaisay kaisay imtihaan
Yeh pyaar likhay kaisi kaisi daastan



Here Prem was driving his car widout knowing where to go His coat was removd his tie was loosend his hais was messy again.... Her words were botherng hm "Mera...pyaar jhoota nai hai heer Sirf tumhi sy pyaar kiya hai mein ny sirf tumhi say pyaar Khety hain sacha pyaar zindagi mein sirf ek baar hota hai mein ny apny hissy ka pyaar kar liya ab dobaara nai kar paon ga" Prem said to himself



Ya rabba
Dede koi jaan bhi agar dilbar pe ho na dilbar pe ho na
Koi asar



Suddenly Prem's car slow down nd finally stopped "NO PETROL" nd Prem came on earth nd realizd dat he was at an unknown place Prem got out of the car Nd looked here nd there He realized dat there was no one to be asked for help He saw a place nearby dat was sumthing like an ancient fort His heart said dat he should go in He started walking towards dat place Soon came to know dat it was a sort of mandir He heard sum sobs bt he ignored them nd cotinue walking when he was at da mandir he was highly touchd by dat place He found da peace for which he was searching for Dat statue SHIV JI's statue SHIV JI !!!! Dat was SHIV MANDIR he was still away from da statue Da place was so peace ful His thoughts were disturbed by some sobs he lookd at da statue nd he found somthng new sumthng or sumone familiar same figure Same clothing Same voice VOICE!!! Yes its Heer "HEER!!!!" Prem whispered Yes Heer she was crying She was crying her heart out Prem cnt bear dat he wantd to go nd hug her at dat time but stopped when he listened her saying sumthng
"Mujhy kuch samajh nai aa raha hai Bhagwan mein kya karon Ash theek keh rahi thi Bohat dard hota hai bohat dard Aaj mein ny Prem ky pyaar ko nahin balky apne pyaar ko thukra diya Apny swarth k liye Prem ko dukh dia Apny dar ko chupany k liye Mein ny jhoot bola Jhoot bola k.... Kay mein.... Prem sy pyaar nai karti...."
Hearing this Prem was shockd,cofused but very happy for da first time he had a smile on his face when heer was crying Heer continued
"Mein Prem sy bohat pyaar karti hoon!!! Uskay bina ji nai sakti Par Agar us ny mujhay dhoka dia Mujhay chor dia to....jis tarha...jis tarha...Papa ny.... Daar lagta hai dar lagta hai agar mere sath ... Mere sath aisa hoa to....mein mamma ki tarha strong nai hoon....Ab aap hi bataiye mein kya karoon....."Now Prem was very happy nd just wantd to hug her nd cry But he controld himself becoz dat was not the right time Heer turned just then prem hide behind the pillar so dat Hees cnt c hm Heer went away 4m there
Prem came 4ward towards the Morti of SHIV JI "Aaj mein bohat khush hoon aaj mein qasam khata hon k jo bhi ho jae Heer khud apny pyaar ka izhaar kary gi Usy karna ho ga usay apna dar bhulana ho ga"


Morning 8:00am
Sanjeevni Hospital


Heer enterd the locker room as usual again wid a fake happiness on her face nd saw Ridhima,Armaan,Ash sitting there with sad faces Heer said "Hiiii" but got no answer "What happend???" Heer said again
"Why do you care???? Tum ny jo Prem k sath kia Jaanti ho vo kal raat kitna ro raha tha aur ab....vo pata nai kahan hai Ab to tumhain sukoon aa gaya ho ga na"Armaan said nd evryone left the locker room

Here heer was sitting on da bench Her face in her handz nd was crying "Kahaan ja sakta hai vo Armaan theek keh raha tha Its all my fault Par us idiot ko bata k jana chahiye tha na aisay kaisay....chala gaya" Heer said to herself


9:00am
All of them were standing there waiting for their senior Doctor who informs them about there duties
Here she was....She was Dr.Kulraaj
She arrived nd looked at evryone
"Where is Dr.Prem???" she said angrily
"Dunno Maam" said Ridhima
"Dr.Ridhima nd Dr.Armaan today you will assist Dr.Kiran in surgery Dr.Ashlesha Children ward Dr.Heer you and Dr.Prem will be in OPD nd let me know when he will come Now u all can leave"said Dr.Kulraaj

10:30am
"Yeh prem fon kuen nai utha raha Pata nai kahan hai" Heer thought nw she was realy very worried

"Heer!!! Heer!!!" ash said as she came in Crying
"Kya hoa Ash... Tu... Ro kuen rai hai" Heer said
"Heer vo....vo Prem"Ash said
"Prem...kya hoa Prem ko..... Vo theek to hai na....Bol na Ash"Heer said crying
"Heer!!! Prem....Prem is....Heer Prem is Dead Chal mere sath" Ash said
Heer didnt say any thng She was almost dead Ash take her to I.C.U Where Prem was lying on bed
Heer walkd 2wards him
"Yeh... Yeh nai hosakta Ash.....Yeh sab....Prem aisay kaisay..... Sab meri waja say hoa hai...Mein ny....khud..."


"Heer samabhal apny aap ko jo hona tha ho gya"Ash said
"Aisa nai ho sakta ash...Prem mujhay chor k nai ja sakta....Meri baat suny bina to bilkul nai...Suna tum nay tum meri baat suny bina nai ja sakty....Tumhain sunna hi hoga sunna ho ga Dammit k mein tum say Pyaar karti hn Pyaar.... Tum mujhy phir sy akela chor k nai ja sakty" Heer said she was standing beside Prem crying loudly

"NAHIN JAON GA" sumone said Prem said
"Prem!!!" heer said as he got up nd stand in front of her
"Prem!!! Tum...." she saw ash giggling along wid arman nd ridz "Yeh sab...tum logon ny....Aur Prem tum...." evryone stop laughing "You guyz are sick.... Nd Prem You...itna baara naatak I HATE YOU PREM I HATE YOU YEH SAB KRNY SY PEHLY EK BAAR BHI NAI SOCH K MUJH PER KYA BEETAY GI YOU IDIOT... I ...hate...I.... I LOVE YOU..." Heer said and hugged him tightly "I AM SORRY HEER PAR YEH KARNA ZAROORI THA APNA PYAAR PAANY KAY LIYE... I LOVE YOU TOO HEER I LOVE YOU TOO...HEER MEIN TUM SAY WAADA KARTA HOON K TUMHASA SAATH KABHI NAI CHORON GA" Prem said

"Enough is enough Doctors " Dr.Kulraaj said angrily Prem Heer broke apart dy were realy scard
"Bohat ho gaya..."
"Chill guyz darro mat i was just saying bohat ho gaya rona dhona ab Band bajay bajao"

Evryone let out a laugh nd Prem kissd Heer's forehead nd both of them rested their foreheads against each other
Edited by anoushay_kdmhmd - 15 years ago

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