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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanx sonu............Glad u enjoyed this part..........I miss Preet too...........😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanx sinak.............Glad u enjoyed this part..........yaa Prem knows his family well................😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanx Nitty2910 ................Glad u enjoyed this part..........yaa Prem knows his family well................😊Yaa even I wish the same...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Here's the last part...........Hope u like this one too.............plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do send in ur valuable comments...............😊

Prem says---Pichlii baar jo tumney jo Heer ke saath kiya tha...........merii jagah Meher ko khadaa karaa kar......tumhey kya lagaa iss baar bhi wahii karogey?............Badaa bhai main hoon betaa Preet.............I WILL AlWAYS BE A STEP AHEAD OF U!................

Everyone is all smiles and laughing............lekin this was not all............Prem had one more plan to execute.............afterall he was yet to complete his challenge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He looks up amidst all the rash with everyone around at Heer standing quietly and smiling.............PREM WINKS AT HEER............(yaa he winks............plzz behosh matt ho jaana iss scene ko imagine karkey)..............and Heer realises there was more in Prem's mind............

Its late in the night............Heer is in her room lying on the bed............tryning to sleep but she was not able to...........she remebers Prem wining at her...........she smiles and blushes as Prem heer water music plays in the background...........She says softly---Prem tum bhii naa............kuch bhi kar detey ho..............(well that's the reason we all love him soooooooooooooooooo much would be Mrs. Heer Prem Juneja)..................

Its then that she hears someone callin out her name ..........the voice was coming from somewhere close to the window of her room!............

Heer gets up all of a sudden realising it was Prem saying---Heer.............khidkii kholo!................

She runs upto the window an openeing it she finds Prem standing there..........flashing his innocent million dollar smile while Heer just watches him dumfounded............

She says---Prem tum neechey girr jaaogey...........kaisey aaye uppar tak?...........

She looks down and what she sees SHOCKS HER!.............Prem was on the top of a ladder jisska ek end Preet pakad kar khadaa tha aur doosra Harman!..............They both look up at Heer smiling mischieveously..............and call out to Heer----Bhabhi!............inhein plz andar aaney do............nahiin toh yeh hummein saarii raat nahiin sonney deingey!..............

Heer quickle gives Prem a hand and as he comes in through the window............he loses balance and falls on Heer.............the two lie on the floor..........quite close to each other.............

Heer says--Prem!.........tum..............

Prem was in a complete romantic mood and he doesn't let go off Heer...........saying---Yahaan toh baujii toh kya koi nahiin dekhegaa naa Heer..........phir............

Prem comes closer and closer to heer.............

Heer is all blushing she says---Prem...................when there is knock at the door!............

Prem quickly gets up and makes Heer get up too.............outside Meher says---bhabhi sab theek hai naa?

Heer says---haan...........haan Meher sab theek hai............tu sow jaa............theek hai...............

Prem and Heer look at each other and hear Meher's footsteps faint away.............

Heer says---Prem tum yahaa se jaao.......baujii aa gaye toh..............maa aa gayii toh..............

Prem was in no mood to leave he walks towards Heer saying after taking out the paayal in his hand---yaad hai Heer.............humaarii pehlii mulaakaaat kii yeh nishaanii.............humaarey pyar kii nishaanii............

Heer says hysterically---Prem tum samajh nahiin rahey ho..............koi aa gayaa naa toh................

Prem had reached Heer and he puts his other hand on Heer's lips to make her quiet.............he says softly----yaa hai.............mainney tumsey kahaa tha yeh woh kadii hai jo................(flashack is shown where Prem had made Heer wear the paayal on the first anniversary of their first meet)............jo humaarey kal koo aaj se jodtii hai!...............

Prem bends down on one leg and Heer puts her feet on it an Prem says making her wear the paayal---Lekinn aaj se yeh humaarey aaj ko.............humaarey aaney waaley kal se jodegii Heer.............woh aaney waala kal..........jismein sirf khushiyaan hii khushiyaan hongii............aur woh zindagii jissmein tum aur main ek saath...........ek doosrey ke paas rehkkar humaarii Chahat ke bhavishya ke sapney sajaayeinge aur unhein poora kareinge................(Kisna theme plays in the background)..............

Heer has tear in her eyes..............she sobs---I luv u Prem...............

Prem gets up..............embracing heer's face with his hands he says kissing her forehead----I luv u too.............falling in luv with u was the best thing ever happened to me..............

The two hug each other tight............in the background plays the song Milan jo likhyaa hai taqdeer mein..............

The screen blacks out and u seee Prem and Heer standing by the indow looking at the moonlit night...........when heer asks him--- Prem woh preet aur Harman?............

Prem replies----Main tabse unn donon ko tangg kar rahaa tha............baatein karkey...........oonche oonchey gaaney gaa ke............aakhir mein unhoney khud kahaa...............chaliye bhaiyaa hum donon aapko bhabhi ke paas choddd aatey hain.............kyunkii unsey miley binaa aako neend nahiin aayegii aur aap hummey bhi nahiin soney deingey phir kal se shaadii kii itnii taiyaariyaan hi karnii hai............

Heer was giggling and Prem smiles too.............as the two look at each other.............

Prem says---Achcha Heer abb main chaltaa hoon...............waise bhi kal se do din tak yeh mjhey tumse milney nahiin deingey isliye soch rahaa hoon Delhi hii hoo aaon.............business jo dekhnaa hai...............phir shaadi tak laut aaonga.............Bye...........

Prem is walking away to the door............u see Heer standing there stunned............as she remebers Prem saying the same thing last time too..........when he had said Alvida to her and gone...........then how his ghost had come to meet him and heer had hid her facesaying he couldn't see her.............and then the footage of Prem in that shop in Delhi.............Heer runs upto Prem and says turning him around crying---Tum...........TUM KAHEN NAHIIN JAAOGEY PREM!.............SUNAA TUMNEY MAIN ISS BAAR KAHEEN NAHIIN JAANE DOONGII TUMHEY!............

Prem sees heer all tears and it strikes him what had happened last time............he hugs Heer saying and consoling her---theek hai heer...........nahiin jaaongaa...........kaheen nahiin jaaongaa...........theek hai.............

He makes her lie down and Heer doesn't let go off Prem...........he to sits besides her and embracing her forehead with his hand he makes her sleep........... in the background plays Prem heer water music as u see Heer sleep soundly holding on to Prem's hand..............

Kaisa laga?😊

Jaldi bato.............😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it.
Awesome leo.
Finally preet and harman helped na?😆
Well written .
Keep it up man.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWww
that was soooooooo amazing! loved both the the parts.....
this was far better than what they showed today in the show......you're an awesome writer!👏👏
waiting for more.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it!! I was in giggles all the time.....😳

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