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Posted: 16 years ago
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I was just thinking that no one really writes fanfic on this forum, and you came up with this! This was beautiful, very believable and truly SPECTACULAR! Thanks for this post... I second Sarah, please please please keep writing for us!!!
Edited by diya86 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was sooo breathtakingly beautiful !!!!!!!⭐️
But......You know what I am not surprised at all .-----that piece on Sameer--Avni was just soooo profound.... and now this.
After reading this( again and again ...I must say ) I feel kind of scared to watch how all this will play out today. You have raised the bar sooo high that the creatives must do smt outstanding to better this.Keeping my fingers crossed that they can do justice to amazing viewers like you.
Please please keep writing more......and dont come up with any excuses....Ok ?
Prithvi under the shower.... high time we got one !!!😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG bubble this literally blew me away!! this was so awesome! now i hope the cv's read this and show us something like this in the show!! great job bubble 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was a beautiful piece of writing, Bubble👏👏👏. The intensity of their emotions is captured by you so well.


Originally posted by: soapbubble



He had also hurt Damini. His fingers turned white on the wood he held. She had been angry of course. He understood that - he had a temper himself. But she had been hurt, mystified... she would retreat again behind that tough-as-nails exterior she showed the world. Because of him, Damini who never trusted anyone easily, would add another thick layer to her distrust of the world. Because of him, her loving heart would hesitate over offering love. Because of him, Damini would shed tears tonight.



@bold - That bit was heart wrenching.

Thank you so much for this short fanfic.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Who-I-Used-2-Be

Bubs, you, my dear, are a beautiful, beautiful mind..That was in a league of its own..⭐️

His hurt, her shock, his pain, her confusion, his rage, her strength, and more; everything was perfectly described..

Can you continue writing for us? *makes an absolutely childish and angelic face, with a halo appearing around, and wings too*




Thanks Sarah, you cherub with halo and wings,
😆 you're an absolute sweetheart 🤗 - so glad you liked it.
heh and not putting up bhaav or anything but I'll certainly try to continue 😃 - bit worried inspiration will not strike or that the real show will interfere 😛
Bubble


Edited by soapbubble - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: diya86

I was just thinking that no one really writes fanfic on this forum, and you came up with this! This was beautiful, very believable and truly SPECTACULAR! Thanks for this post... I second Sarah, please please please keep writing for us!!!




Thanks, Diya!
yes, I like to read fanfiction too - I think that's the real mark of good characterisation, when it inspires people to make up their own stories.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya73

That was sooo breathtakingly beautiful !!!!!!!⭐️

But......You know what I am not surprised at all .-----that piece on Sameer--Avni was just soooo profound.... and now this.
After reading this( again and again ...I must say ) I feel kind of scared to watch how all this will play out today. You have raised the bar sooo high that the creatives must do smt outstanding to better this.Keeping my fingers crossed that they can do justice to amazing viewers like you.
Please please keep writing more......and dont come up with any excuses....Ok ?
Prithvi under the shower.... high time we got one !!!😍




Wow, what an utterly nice thing to say! Thanks Priya! 😳
Yes, le'ts ask for a Prithvi scene in the shower. WOOOOOOT! Wet hair, smoulerding eyes, drops glistening on his shoulders.... ok I'm getting x-rated...😳😳 somebody STOP me...
Bubble


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Posted: 16 years ago
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@sistu, krupur, amu thanks so much you guys! Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i completely loved it!!! i can just imagine this situation occurring with prida...you've maintained their character's so well and carried the situation in such a beautiful manner...do write more, would love to read it!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is fantastic, bubbles, u know even if we get to see 50% of what u have written, we would end up having one of the best prida scenes ever..

Loved it completely...

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