||Saree||PH OS 7parts. Completed.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Juneja House . 6 months from now. "HEER..." "HEER" screamed Prem from the bathroom. " TOWEL DO NA?" "HEEER" "HEEER" , no response. It was already 8:15 AM. Heer was still in her night gown, with all her hair out of place, some rolled into a bun. She was sitting on their bedroom floor with Chahat, the floor was covered with Chahat's texts notebooks, bag, pencils ,toys & what not. Heer felt her head spinning, "KAHA RAKHDIA TUMNE VOH SCHOOL KE LETTER, JO PAPA KO SIGN KARNE HAI?" She rolled her eyes @ Chahat who was @ the verge of tears. Heer started packing her school bag pretending not to c her daughters eyes welling up. Chahat's eyes were exactly like Prems , Heer thought, It could melt anybodys heart, but not today , not only was her eyes like her papa, but also her mischevious behaviour. This was the zillionth time that Chahat had lost her school things. "HEER " "HEER" Prem yelled. " Heer got up from the floor with great effort , then she grabbed her towel & stuck it out @ him in the bathroom... "PREM, PLZ DONT CALL ME @LEAST 4 A FEW MINUTES , MUJE CHAHAT KO SCHOOL BECHNE HAI" she said turning around, just to hear prem calling again, "HEER, YE VALA NAHI , MERA TOWEL DO NA..!" he said holding & staring @ her towel. Heer turned around to face him, she stood there for a few seconds silently, fuming red & staring @ him angrily. Prem lifted his head & saw Heer's face, which looked like she was ready to burst. He smiled sheepishly: "THANK U HEER, YE TEEK HAI, MEIN DO KAR AATHA HU, er.. TUM CHALO, ..er.. THANK U" saying this he slammed the bathroom door & sighed a breath of relief! Heer ran back to her search mission. She finally found the letter beneath toto. " VO MAMMA, MEIN VAHA DYAN SE RAKHI THI" chahat lied. "CHAHAT..."
"OOPS SORRY MAMMA" she said holding her ears, showing her puppy face. Heer couldnt control herself anymore. She hugged her baby & kissed her chubby cheeks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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1st one to comment
plzz update asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2. continued...

Heer helped Chahat to pack her bag & steadied her uniform & tied her shoe lace. "HEER" "HEER MERE PANT KAHA HAI? " she heard Prem calling. "HA PREM MEIN AAI" she answered frowning, making Chahat giggle. She gave Chahat a glass of milk "JALDI SE PEELO, I DONT WANT A DROP LEFT , WHEN I COME BACK"she warned . "HEER " she heard Prem calling again" Heer ran back to the wadrobe & took out his pants & also took the letter & pen."HEER TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO? ITNI DER LAGA DI!" he scolded "MERA PANT?" "PEHLE ISPE SIGN KARO, CHAHAT KE SCHOOL KE LETTER HAIN" "OH"! He exclaimed signing it. She gave him his pants. & later went down to the kitchen. * Prem put on his pants & came out buttoning his shirt. "ISN'T MY PRINCESS READY YET?" he asked eyeing Chahat, who immedeately left her glass of milk & ran to her papa, screaming "YES PAPA" & hugging his waist. Prem kissed her on top of her head "VERY GOOD, MY CHAHAT'S ALWAYS ON TIME" he said. "CHAHAT.., NECHE CHALO, BUS AAGAYI" called Meher. Chahat grabbed her bag & making her adorable eyes wider whispered to Prem, " PAPA, BEWARE, MAMMA BOHAT GUSSE MEIN HAI!" saying this she ran downstairs almost knocking down Heer who was coming up. Chahat kissed her on her tummy & waving @ her tummy & yelling "BYE". "BYE BETA" she replied beaming @ her naughty nakchadi daughter. *

Edited by khushix - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3 continued. Heer entered their room & started freaking out when she saw the unfinished glass of milk. "Let her come back, I wont let her get away with this, look at all this mess", she began tidying the room, scolding chahat in her mind. She was carrying all of Chahats stuff to the kids room, when she felt Prems lips on her cheek, his hands slowly making their way around her waist. Her hands were full of books & stuff. She leaned back on to his chest, closing her eyes. "PREEM", she said angrily, "SUBAH SE MERA DIMAG KARAB HO GAYE HAIN, MUJHSE BAAT MATH KARNA, TUM NECHE JAKE NASHTA KARLO, MEIN NAHANE jA RAHE HU". "MEIN BI AAU KYA?"he whispered. "PREM JUST GET OUT" shouted Heer. "OOOH! SOMEBODY'S NOT IN A GOOD MOOD TODAY"he said taking all the book from her & carrying it to the kids room. * After breakfast Prem returned with Heer's breakfast on a tray. He saw a rather tired & pale looking Heer wearing a blouse, trying to change into a saree. Prem smiled & sat on the bed & put on his tie & coat, when he suddenly heard "AAAAHH". He got up to c Heer with her hands on her stomach. Prem ran to her side & held in his arms from the back, "KYA HUA HEER?" "KUCH NAHI" she said angrily " TODASA DARD HAI, MEIN TEEK HU!". Prem smiled naughtily "TUM NAHI , MERA BETA TOH TEEK HAI?" he asked rubbing her bare stomach, which was starting to show her 5 months of pregnancy.






Edited by Kutimani - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thats sooooooooooo cute veryy very niceeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 4 continued.. "SIRF BETAE KE BARAE MEIN SOCH RAHE HO! AUR MEIN?" her eyes welled up, " I KNOW U DONT LOVE ME" tears rolled down her cheeks. She started crying, leaving Prem completely shocked. " OK, OK" he said wiping her tears, turning her around & kissing her eyes . He removed her half worn saree & scooped her in his arms. She couldn't help but smile while tears still rolled down her cheeks. She herself couldnt understand wheather she was crying out of anger, joy or sorrow. He laid her down on the bed & fed her breakfast while talking to her. "HEER", he said " JABSE TUM PREGNANT HO GAYI HO NA, BAHUT WIERDLY BEHAVE KAR RAHI HO! NOT THAT I MIND UR WORDS, BUT IT SOMETIMES DOES SCARE ME & CHAHAT".... He gave her a tablet & a glass of water to drink & stroked her tummy & arms. She took the tablet, "SORRY PREM, I CANT HELP IT, EVEN WHEN I WAS PREGNANT WITH CHAHAT I WAS HYPER" . But this time it was Prems eyes which welled up with tears.





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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey..It's very good. Pls do continue.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it sounds ...................nice..............but scrolling dow all the way for just a sentence is kinda annoying ......................don't you think so...............
no offends............................i am sorry if you are
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey that was really nice update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice one........waiting for the next!

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