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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part5 continued... Prem looked down, trying to hide his tears from his pregnant Heer, but in vain. Prem felt her soft fingers on his wet cheek. He looked into her beautiful eyes, he could c all the love & the pain. Thousands of unspoken words were said in a second. He grabbed her hand kissing it. Heer , still lying down, nodded her head & stretched both her arms for a hug. Prem smiled & leaned onto her body. She made him lie down & he kept his head on her shoulders, his arms around her. Neither didnt speak for sometime. As always they didnt need words to communicate. * "DOCTOR HAD SAID ITS OK, DONT WORRY" she said moving back his hair from his forehead. "UMM.." he muttered " U DONT WORRY HEER, AB MAIN HOON NA TUMHARE SAATH" . Heer smiled " BUT PREM", she said, "ITS ALL THE MORE DIFFICULT NOW, BECAUSE I HAVE TO TAKE CARE OF 3 KIDS" "3 ?" Prems face lit up. With a naughty smile on his face he whispered in her ears : " EK AUR KA PLAN HAIN KYA?" WAISE I WAS ABOUT TO..." Heer pushed him off from her. "THEESRA TUM HO, TUM , ABHI TAK BACHA HO, KOI KAM HUDH NAHIN KAR SAKTHA? SUBAH SE MUJE DAUDWA RAHE HO!" she yelled punching his chest & hitting him. "HEER" "HEEER, PLEASE STOP IT OR I ELSE I WILL.." "SORRY PREM, MAIN.. she was embarassed, & lied back on the bed & covered her face with her hands. Prem burst out laughing. He removed her hands "TUME PATA HAI, TUM KITNI PYARI HO" saying this he passionately kissed her luscious lips. "I LOVE U PREM" "I LOVE U TOO",AB TUM TODI DER AARAM KARO". He pulled the bed covers over her as she was wearing just her blouse & underskirt. Heer closed her eyes & fell asleep...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
hey its very nice did u updated part 6 and 7 where is it?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
i no did yhu cuz i was soo happiii where is 6 and 7:(
plzzzzzzzzzzzz update ASAP
N add me to yhr PM lIST
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Waiting of rthe other parts too.
Nice ya. and romantic too.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
Sorry, Parts 6 & 7 coming up later. WARNING: Dont beat me up after reading the ending.


Edited by Kutimani - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
k jii..very aweosme as always.....
waiting for next parts
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
waiting for the next update dar.
thnx!!
it was really great.!!
👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Part 6 continued.. Half an hour later * Prem was working on his laptop sitting on the bed near Heer. She was fast asleep , holding his hand on to her chest . He turned to look @ her admiring his beautiful wife sleeping peacefully , he thought how innocent she was, All of a sudden Prem's cellphone rang, startled he answered it whispering into it "HA SHARMAJI KAHIYE, KUCH NAHI VOH... OK, I WILL B THERE BY 10". He put down his phone, checked on Heer & saw her slowly opening her eyes . "R U FEELING BETTER NOW?" he asked leaning over & kissing her stomach & neck. "YES PREM" she answered sitting up. "CHALO CHALO AB JALDI SE KADE HO JAO, MUJE OFFICE JANA HAI" Heer looked @ him confused "TAU TUM JAO NA PREM.. , MEIN KYU KADE HO JAAU?"she asked reaching to find her night gown. "KYUNKI, MUJE TUME YE SAREE PEHNANE HAI"prem replied carassing her cheeks. "KYA?"... "PAR KYU?"... "I MEAN ,TUM??... "TUM KAISAE".... she gasped . "BAS! NO MORE QUESTIONS! TUM MERE BIWI HO" MEIN JO CHAHU VAHI KARUNGA!" he smiled his naughty smile helping her up. "NO PREM , ITS OK, I WILL WEAR THE GOWN TODAY, I CANT WEAR THE SAREE" .
"YEAH, THATS EXACTLY WHY AM TELLING YOU, MEIN PEHNA DETA HU NA!" Heer laughed in her mind, she was enjoying watching her desperate hubby Prem. But trying to make a straight face she walked over to Prem, & whispered "ACHA.., TOH JANAB AAPKO SAREE BHI PEHNANA ATHAE HAI?" "YES...er...YES OFCOURSE" Prem said with a perplexed look "ROZ TUMHAIN PEHANTHA DEKTHA AARAHA HU, LET ME TRY " Heer looked @ him , her eyes twinkled "OK, PAR EK SHARTH PAR!"she said. Prem looked @ her suspiciously"KAISI SHARTH ? " .....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
that was nice but what is the shart

i am waiting for more
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
nice....you write cute premeer scenes...waiting for the 7th part.....and do write longer parts! oh and thanks for the pm!

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