New FF-Na Tum Jano Na Hum(MayUr & SaJan)

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Hello IFians! :D

Well, we are a group from AC who started writing a group FF on MJHT! and we wanted to share it with you all!! :D :)

Well, we are 5-6 people in the gorup, so each one updates one day..so yeah..:)

Hmmm..well thats it..here is the intro..and if you guys like it and if we get enough replies..we will surely continue it! :D


Cast:
~Additi~ (Gunjan)
~Jahnvi~ (Nupur)
~Nikhil~ (Mayank)
~Aditya~ (Samrat)
~Abhishek~ (Benji)
~Trisha~ (Dia)
~Jai~ (Uday)

College is about to begin, and students are all hyped about the fresh start. Students will be coming from nationwide, to attend Princeton College, which is well repuatated for it's strong academic learning, and sports. Four youngsters, will be starting Princeton college in a week, but they don't know what obstacles they will have to pass, what friends they will make, and how their life will take a new twist, when they meet each other. This is the story of four Princeton College students, Jahnvi, Additi, Nikhil and Aditya.



Jahnvi Bhushan-She is Additi's older sister, by a very small time difference! She is very bubbly, and outspoken, no one can win from her in a debate!! In studies, she is okay, she was never really interested in school, because her heart was somewhere else! Jahnvi was a huge fan of Bollywood films, she wanted her life to be exactly like a film story..full or romance, action, and problems..but till yet she hasn't found Mr.Right..she is hoping in this new phase of life..koi tho mile ga!!


Nikhil Sharma- Nikhil..the academic champ! He is very studious, always lost in a book. He believes there is no word as luck or love, all there ishard work. He wants to be a self-made man, and make his mom proud. He thinks having a girl in your life, is the biggest mistake boys make, and he does not want to follow that path!


Additi Bhushan- She is the complete opposite of her sister Jahnvi, she is very quiet and very intelligent. She does all the work around the house, likes to help others, and bring the smile back on their faces. She doesn't have many friends, because her friends are very special to her. She is willing to do anything for her sister, and family..


Aditya Kashyap- Aditya..the heart throb of every girl, basketball champ, and champ in every sport. All the girls die on him, but he is still looking for that someone special. His parents are very rich, and reside somewhere in Europe..he doesn't speak much of them. For him his friends mean the world to him, Trisha (Jahnvi and Additi's cousin), Jai (Trisha's brother), and Abhishek (aka Abhi) Adi's best friend, always with him since childhood. He doesn't take studies seriosuly, and teachers don't take him seriously. Adi has one motto, ''live, and let live''.


Trisha Bhushan- Trisha..the diva of Princeton College, leader of the cheerleading squad, and organzier of every event. She can be very rude sometimes (to her innoncent brother-Jai)..but mostly she is very sweet, simple and kind. She has an image to keep, and in order to maintain that, she will do anything. She is very excited about meeting her cousins, but is secretly hiding it. She is a good friend of Adi's, and is part of the gang.


Jai Bhushan- He is Trisha's younger brother, he will also be attending college this year. He is very innocent, and really funny. He wishes to be like his role model, Adi. Jai is hoping soon he will find Mrs.Right..but with Trisha always intefering in his plans..he is nowhere close!


Abhishek Rao- Abhi..Adi's best friend..always by his side. Adi and Abhi have always done everything together, and have always faced good and bad times together. Abhi is willing to do anything for his buddy, and therefore will always be like his shadow.
-Dhruv


That's it. The gang. Sweet and Simple.

Other Characters:
Mr.Rai - Teacher
Mr. Mathur - Teacher
Mr. D - Principal (aka D Princi)



Well, thats it guys for now..please, if you like it, please please comment, and this is just our first attempt..please..or then, we won't continue it!..thanks alot..

Disha, Dhruv, Nivu, Baneen, Rahlia, Karen and Sneha. :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guyz....

looking good.... like the intro...but the only problem i personally av is im gona get sooo totally confused yaar....wiv the names.... could u not keep dem as mayur and sajan???? if u cant its kool... its jus confusing for me!!! im looking fwd 2 nice long updates guyz!!!! especially cuz derez more of u... i want longer updates 😉 ohhh... looking fwd 2 lots of mayur scenes!!!! hehehehe
add me 2 the pm list....
love loads
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xxxxxxx

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Posted: 15 years ago
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its nice guys... plz continue soon.. but one request... plz make this most romantic :)
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Episode 1: Pehli Mulakaat (By Emily)




Morena:

The scene begins in the beautiful meadows of Morena a Town full of happiness and joy!
A girl is standing in between those meadows looking for somone...she hears and soft guitar tune (DDLJ Tune)
She seems to know who is playing that tune and she has a sweet smile on her face and she turns around...she sees a man holding a black guitar in his arms...the girl scans the man from toe to head as soon as she reaches the the chest of the man she haers a voice saying..
Dii Utho !!! bahut der hogayi utho na dii !!!!!
she stops freezes and then tht same voice calls out to her again...
Dii Train chotgayegi...utho !!!!!
she sparng up from her bed to reveal and beautiful young girl with brownish blackish hair...Jahnvi...

Additi: Agghh...finally..ab dii aap jao aur jaldi se tayaar hojao...please warna train chuthjayi gi..okay
Jahnvi: Additi...tune mujhe uthaya kyun...?
Additi: Dii !!! humko train aaj pakdni hai kal nahi please ab jaakar naha dho kar bharaao !
Jahnvi: Theekh hai mata ji aati hun !!

Jahnvi gets ready realli quickly and cums out of the house.
Her parents are standing with her younger sister...

Jahnvi: Kay baatein chal rahi hai mere bina ?
Additi: Kuch nahi dii...par papa mama hume abhi nikal na chahiye bahut der hogayi hai dii ke wajha se !!
Jahnvi: Aare meine kya...aach baba chalo...
Papa: haan bacho tumhe nikal na chahiye !
Jahnvi & Additi both touch their parents feet and take leave frm them and head towards the station !
They catch the train and now they heading for bombay a place they have never seen before looking forward for a succesful tomorrow.

Bombay:
A mansion like house...looking over to a busy street of bombay...

a girl is shown but from the back...

Trisha: Dad!!! Dodo !!! Kahaan ho tum dono bhul gaye kya aaj mere cousins aa rahe hain...humhe uhe pick karne jaana hai !
Dad: Haan beta mein yahein hun par tumhara bhai usse sirf tum utha sakti ho !!
Trisha: Theekh hai dad mein abhi aayi aap please tab tak breakfast kar legiye !

Trisha goes up the stairs into her brothers room...
Trisha: Dodo abhi issi waqt utho warna mein tumhe bahut marungi !
Jai: Sone dona deeds !!
Trisha: Dodo hume aaj humare cousins ko train station se pick up karne jaana hai aur tumhe humre saath chalna hoga !!
Jai: Kyun deeds waise bhi tumhe toh driving aati hai naa !!
Trisha: (thinks to herself for a moment and then replies) pata hai Adi bhi humare saath chal raha hai !
Jai : KYA !! pehle kyun nahi bataya !!! (cums out of his bed rushes to the washroom and is out of it in two mins) Chalo mein toh tayar hun !!
Trisha: sorry dodo meine jhute bolo Adi nahi aaraha hai !!
Dodo: Kya !!! Deeds aapne aaisa kyun kiya !!!
Trisha: Kyun ki mein aasi hi hun!
at this point of time the girls face is revealed to be a beautiful fair and cute face..


At the Train station:

Trisha: (To The Station Master): Sir Yeh morena se train kad aaye gi ?
SM: Abhi bas dus minute mein pochti hi hogi !
Trisha: Thanks !

Trisha walks back to her bro !
After Ten mins of waiting...
Jai: Deeds woh dekho train aagayi !
Trisha: FINALLY !!

The train cums to a halt and passengers start cuming out of their respective compartments...
Trisha: Dodo unhone kaunsa comartment number bola tha ??
Jai: ummm...mujhe...haan 7 number bola tha...waise deeds if you don't mind unnke samne mujhe DODO maath bulana..
Trisha: Shut up DODO !!!

They walk towards Compartment nomber 7!
then after waiting for the rush of people to subside Jahnvi and Additi cum out...and Trisha spots them first...
Trisha: (to The Sisters) Jahnvi Additi ??
Jahnvi: Haan mein Jahnvi Aur yeh Additi !!
Trisha is shocked to she them wearing a salwar suit and wearing indian syted earings...she thought if they were her sisters they would be just like her !
without much to talk about they al just headed home !

At home Trisha was soo disgusted by her cousins tht she made an excuse of being tired and went of into her room !
and Jai had no other choice but to show the sisters their room and the go watch T.V as usual !

Next Day:
Additi: Jahnvi Dii!! Utho Ek Baath suno !!
Jahnvi wakes up and streches a little !!
Jahnvi: Haan bol additi !
Additi: Dii woh hume college ke liye books karide hai toh aaj chalen ?
Jahnvi: Haan theekh hai chal jaisi teri marzi ! par hum janeja kaise ?
Additi: Meine Jai bhaiya ko bol diya hai woh bas tayaar hi ho rahe hain !
Jahnvi : Theekh hai mein tayaar hokatr aati hun !

On The Streets:
Jai: Yeh Yahaan ka sabse se busy yaani ke sabse rush wala market hai !
Jahnvi: Aacha...BY GOD yahaan toh jaise loot lagi hui hai !Additi tujhe sari kitabein milgayi ?
Additi: Haan Dii milgayi !
Jai: aare wahaan ek aach belt milraha hai mein dkhke aata hun tum yahin rukho !!
Jahnvi: Aare..bhaiya ap kahaan..

It was No use he had already gone...
The sisters were just waiting for their borther and then...
suddenly a fast car raced past them, almost endangering their lives! Jahnvi gets real upset!

Jahnvi: Hey you!

The guys rolls down his window, it's so dark, they can't see his face clearly..
Aditya: Who me?
Additi: Haan tum! Ghari chalani nahi aati kya?
Aditya: Excuse me...
He opens his door and gets out-
He's a cool dude, wearing black leather jacket, ruffled jeans, and a red sports jacket, with dark sunglasses
Aditya: Tum hoti kaun ho mujhse aisa baat karni wali?
Additi: This is government property...not your race track!
Aditya: Whatever...
He gets back in his car, and drives away
Aditya: What creeps..iss ladki ko toh main dekhlonga..pata nahi saware saware kahaan se ajate hainn!! Uff...
Jahnvi: Chal chor Additi...log hote hi aisa hain..inko toh kuch dikhayi nahi deta!
She turns around angrily and bumps into a pillar-
Janvi: Oucchh!!
A guys walks past her-
Nikhil: Sach mein...aaj kal log aanken band karke chalte hain...-he begins laughing
Jahnvi: Ughhh!!
She and Additi leave towards the shop in which their bro went in !
Nikhil: Sach mein...kya mulakaat thi..wow..

Hope you guys like it...
xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome
wow nice part
plz continue soon
and plz add me into ur pm list



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Posted: 15 years ago
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u are awesome !!!!
tooo good yr
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you loads guys for giving our fanfiction such a good response!

We will post the next update very soon =)

-Dhruv (on behalf of the NTJNH FF Team)
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Episode 2: Takraar (By Dhruv)


Jai: Yeh Jab We Met ki line kuch zaada hi lambi nahi dikrahi...koi aur film dekhtein hai na..?
Jahnvi: Jai bhaiya, meri favourite film hai..please..ab line mein wait karlo na..?
Jai: Okay..fine..

After 30 minutes of waiting at the ticket booth…

Jahnvi: Yeh line jahaan adha ghanta pehle thi..wahaan ki wahaani hai!!
Suddenly a car raced by and came to a halt right in front of the cinema, and a guy with a red shirt enters the line in front of Additi and Jahnvi, with his back to them.
Additi: Excuse me!!..humari bari hai ticket buy karni ki..ap aise saamne kaise aa sakte hain?
Aditya: Whatever…two tickets please..
He pays, and goes back to his car.
Aditti: Three tickets..
Booth man: Sorry, sold out.
Jahnvi: Kya!! Please sirf three tickets..!
Booth man: Kadiya na...woh ladke ne akhri 2 tickets kharidli..ab mein kuch nahi kar sakta..ab jao
Jahnvi, Additi, and Jai leave..
Jahnvi: Woh ladke ko toh main chorongi nahii..!
Aditti: Di..woh dekho..yeh toh wohi car hai…bookstore..remember?
Jahnvi: Arre haan…aaj mein isko sabak sikake hi chorongi!
Jai examines the sports car
Jai: Umm..too risky..
Additi: Kyun?
Jai: Kyunki yeh car cool dude Aditya ki hai…you know my brother from another mother…
He smiles.
Jai: Isko choro, chalo black mein tickets buy karlete hai..
Jahnvi gets excited..!
Jahnvi: Good idea bro..chalo..Additi tum yahaan wait karo please?
She agrees.
Additi taps the red shirt guy's shoulder who is on his cell phone, he slowly turns around.
Aditya: Tum!
Additi: Haan mein…lekin yeh baat mujhe tumhse kehni chaiye…tum humara peecha karte karte yaahan par agay?
Aditya: What!! Tumhara peecha? You wish!
Additi: Excuse me, tum mujhse aise kaise baat karsakte ho?
Aditya: Dekho..
He examines Additi, who is wearing glasses.
Aditya: Dekho..Chasmish…what do you want from me..?
Additi: Chasmish! Ughh...!
Aditya: Tickets..?
Additi: Tum rakho apni tickets apne pass…aur dobara bilkul mat milna!
Aditya: Haan haan..tumse milna kon chaiye ga?
She leaves angrily.
Nikhil comes to the cinema and finds Aditya..
Nikhil: Kya hua..did I miss anything?
Aditya: Yeah dude…yeh ladki jaise bhi hai, interesting hai…
Nikhil: Ladki..konsi ladki..?
Aditya: Chasmish…!
Nikhil: Your types?
Aditya: No wayyy! Bahut larti hai…aur gussa…gussa toh uski naak par rehta hai…joh bhi isko pasand karega…woh paka gaya..!! That's why Princeton College is the best, wahaan par aisi koi ladki nahi hai jo mujhse, Aditya se takaar le sake..lekin who kuch alag hai...!?
Nikhil begins laughing
Nikhil: Chalo...aisa koi toh hai jo tumhe takaar de sakta hai…!!

Next Day

Additi: Di, tum shopping jari ho na?
Jahnvi: Haan, kyun?
Additi: Please mera ek kaam kardo na…library se mera liya koi books issue kardo please?
Jahnvi: Tikhe, no problem!
She leaves to the library on her way to the mall.
Jahnvi: Bahut rarely mujhe yahaan kadam rakhna parta hai…mujhe aisa kyun lagra hai ki mujhe ghantiya sunayi deri hai!!
She slowly enters the library.
Jahnvi: Aisle 23…aisle 25…haan 26..milgayi
She has to locate a couple of books, and has great difficulty finding them. Time passes really quickly and she doesn't realize that..!
Jahnvi: Chalo…ab yeh issue karaleti hoon main..
She walks to the counter and notices no one is sitting there, she slowly looks around her and realizes she is the only one in the library! Then all of a sudden all the lights turn off..!
Jahnvi: Aahhh!!
She runs to the door, and starts shaking the knob, only to find that it's locked from the outside. She runs around, trying to look for another exit, but collides in a stack of books on the ground and topples over.
Jahnvi: Ouchh!! Mera parr!!
Suddenly, someone lights a candle, and walks towards Jahnvi…she notices it's the guy from the bookstore..
Jahnvi: Oucchh…
Nikhil bends down and takes a look at her ankle…he notices Jahnvi is very frightened.
Nikhil: Choti si moch hai….haath do apna
Jahnvi: Thanks, but no thanks, mujhe tumhari help nahi chaiye..
Nikhil: Okay…phir baad mein mat kehna
Jahnvi takes the support of the table and begins to lift herself off the ground..but she slips. Nikhil takes her arm quickly, and supports her to her feet.
Jahnvi: Thank you..
She begins to take a step.
Jahnvi: Oucchh..
Nikhil: Ruko..
He lifts Jahnvi in his arms, and begins to walk to the window..Jahnvi is just simply staring at his eyes….he smiles.
Nikhil: Ready to jump?
Jahnvi: You gone crazzyy?
Nikhil jumps down, and lands safely on the grass.
Nikhil: Come on jump!
Jahnvi: Whatt!! No way…bahut distance hai!!
Nikhil: Jump or spend the night with books…which do you prefer..?
Jahnvi: What if I fall..?
Nikhil: Don't worry, main hoon na…
Jahnvi jumps down slowly, and Nikhil catches her.
Jahnvi: Thank you very much…
Nikhil: Your welcome…but please do me a favour..get down!!
Jahnvi: Oh sorry..!
Nikhil lowers her down to get off his arms.
Nikhil: Tum itni raat ko library mein kya karahi thi..?
Jahnvi: Books…aur tum?
Nikhil: Same…lekin yeh workers bhi na…jaldi ghar jaane ki liye, library yoohin jaldi band kardete hain!
Jahnvi begins laughing..
Nikhil: Tumhara naam kya hai waise..?
Jahnvi: Oops! Sorry! Main hoon Jahnvi..
Nikhil: Main Nikhil…
The both shake hands.
Nikhil: Waise Jahnvi…I have to ask…problems tumhara picha karti hain..ki tum problems ka..?
Jahnvi begins laughing..
Jahnvi: Okay bye…
Nikhil: Not so fast…time dekho hum dono ko iss waqt auto bhi nahi milli gi!!
Jahnvi: Toh phir…ab kya?
Nikhil: I'll walk you home…
Jahnvi: I don't want to trouble you..
Nikhil: Fine with me…
Jahnvi: K then…phir chalte hain..!
Nikhil drops Jahnvi close to her house, because she was insisting he should also go home now. Both say good –night to each other, and walk in opposite directions.

Bhushan House

Additi: Di..itni der kyun lagadi…main itni worried thi..tum kahaan thii..!!
Jahnvi: Bahut kuch hua…aur itna maaza aya!!
Additi: Aacha..? Aisa kya hua?
Jahnvi shares with Additi the incident which happened at the library, and how Nikhil saved her, and dropped her home safely.
Jahnvi: Main toh bahut bolti hoon, acha tu bata kya hua aaj?
Additi: Woh car wala…I hate him!! Pata nahi apne aap ko kya samaj tha hai…! Itni attitude…!
Jahnvi: Hmm..ek Nikhil hai..aur doosri taraaf yeh car wala…poles apart!!
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