I m there 4 U ~~ SG ~~ One shot

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Posted: 15 years ago
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P.S:The story starts after Gunjan hugs Samrat but the later is my own thing.
I have never written one shots, this is my first try..so pls forgive mistakes.
As everyone were writing so many OS, i thought to try one myself.😉

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After the case got over and Samrat wins, everyone left leaving Samrat and gunjan in the room. Samrat lked up at Gunjan, but felt ashamed. They both looked up in each others eyes. He knew he made her cry once again for the mistake she never did and how tensed she was because of him. He turned himself because he cudnt face her. A tear dropped from gunjans eyes. She called out "Samrat...". He turned back at once at her because he didnt want her to wait. As he turned, she came up running to him and hugged him tightly!!

Samrat was a little taken aback at first. She continued, "Main ab tumhe kahi jaane nahi dungi Samrat..." she cried, " mujhe maaf kardo maine tumhe woh din akela chod diya" Samrat grabbed her from the back, "please chashmish tum ro nahi .. tumhari koi galti nahi hai" but gunjan cud nt stop crying. He tried to control her and wipes her tears but felt something strange.. gunjans body was high on temperature. She again cried.. he checked her forehead... it was high on fever..."Chashmish..tumhe to bohat high fever hai.." He felt tht all of a sudden gunjan was out of control .. "Chashmish .. chashmish .." but she fainted in his arms...Samrat tried to call out nupur or mayank but there was noone out there. He took gunjan in her arms and left the place.

He cudnt think what to do ... caught a taxi when suddenly gunjans cell started ringing. it was nupur "hello gunjan tu kahan hai .. tu thodi der samrat ke saath reh le main mayank ke saath bahar jaa rahi hu" Before samrat cud say anything she kept the phone. "Ab nupur bhi ghar par nahi hai .. chashmish ko kahan le jau." He only had the option to take her at his home. All the way he kept trying to wake her up but all in vain.. "bhaiyya zaraa jaldi karo .." he called out ..

Finally he arrived at home. He took her in his arms once again and kept her on the bed. Immediately he called the doctor to come and check her. The doctor told him to put wet cloth on her forehead till he comes. he quicky ran into the kitchen to take water and cloth. suddenly he heard gunjan coughing. he came running. took water and made her drink it... but she was too weak to open her eyes. he put her back to sleep. then he got the wet cloth and started putting on her forehead.

Within few minutes the doctor came. he took her check up. "Doctor kya hua hai gunjan ko"samrat asked the doctor with tension on his face. doc lked up at him "kuch khaas nahi, stress ki wajah se bohat tired aur weakness aa gai hai. maine injection diya hai .. u pls continue putting the wet cloth on her forehead" samrat just lked at him thinking hw gunjan might have suffered all these days along with him. "ok i must leave now , mr samrat." samrat came to his sense "OK, thank you doc".

Then again he sat beside her and started putting wet cloth on her forehead. while doing he started thinking about the past.

the first time when he made her cry in the library as bhavesh.
second time when she felt hurt because of his lie abt the talent parade bet.
her saying to him "samrat tum aaj tak mujhe samajh hi nahi paye"
her helping him for sheenas date.
breaking of their friendship.
sheena insulting her at the beach party.
and finally her support always at the time in jail.

This all made a tear drop from his eyes which fell on gunjans cheek.. she opened her eyes and started coughing again ... samrat came back to his senses and was a lil happy when he saw her awake "chashmish .. tum thik to ho na .." she tried to get up and he helped her.. "main thik hu samrat" and she smiled at him.😊

*~The End~*
Hope it was good for the first try.😊
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Thanks.😛


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piya2025 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Its fantastic..very nicely written..Gud work:)<33
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you guys, this gives me a booster!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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small andd sweet amazing yaar if u could continue with this it would be awesome
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow..it was awesome..!
Samrat cares so much 4 her..really cute..!
do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its awesome too amazing yaar......I remember we were discussing the same thing yesterday that how would samrat react if gunjan is in pain...................and you expressed it so beautifully.Pls don't forget to continue.............though its a one shot but has a gr8 scope of moving further.It is really very well written.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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a veryy good one shot!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@pragya - hopefully .. but i have so many ffs already at hand. and sometimes writing them bcom boring.. therefore i thought to try a one shot...i dont knw if i can continue it.

@aish - thanks, yes sure i m thinking for some mayur too.

@yashika - yes absolutely. today i thought to try my hand at tht. and since i always wanted the other way around as i told u i tried it.. actually ur OS is the inspiration for this one ... its nothing new. just the other way around of urs.

@kabuli - thank u dear. :))


once again thnk u everyone!!

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