I wrote something for Premeer

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys i wrote something for Premeer
Prem saying to heer
Jabse tum mera samne aane lagi
Dil mera dhakane lagi
ankho se sapne mere churane lagi
Raaton ko neendh udani lagi
bas yah yuhin jigar mein
palkon mein aapne prem ko chupane lagi
hmm tel me how is it guys
i want honest comments
if u stl think it was ok let me know😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ektay11

wow its superb

loved it

Thank you yaar😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very GOOD
KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nitty2910

Beautifull.... and romantic....

Thanks😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutegirl94

vry nyc written..........

aww
Thanks a lot
am happy u guys like it😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow nice yaar... i liked it very much...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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cool....i wish prem would really say that to heer...aww... thatll be so cute😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: emacoolman

wow nice yaar... i liked it very much...

Thank you dear😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: CAqueen

cool....i wish prem would really say that to heer...aww... thatll be so cute😳

I would be really happy if creatives use these lines in the show😛
it wil be just aweosme
but i know they are not gonna do it😡
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I tell u very honestly.... its beautifully written...😃

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