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-SalShah4eva-

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey guys i wrote something for Premeer

Prem saying to heer

Jabse tum mera samne aane lagi

Dil mera dhakane lagi

ankho se sapne mere churane lagi

Raaton ko neendh udani lagi

bas yah yuhin jigar mein

palkon mein aapne prem ko chupane lagi

hmm tel me how is it guys

i want honest comments

if u stl think it was ok let me know😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: ektay11
wow its superb
loved it

Thank you yaar😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Very GOOD

KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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-SalShah4eva-

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nitty2910
Beautifull.... and romantic....

Thanks😛

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-SalShah4eva-

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: cutegirl94
vry nyc written..........

aww

Thanks a lot

am happy u guys like it😊

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WAQAS...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#6

wow nice yaar... i liked it very much...

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SheVi4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

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cool....i wish prem would really say that to heer...aww... thatll be so cute😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: emacoolman
wow nice yaar... i liked it very much...

Thank you dear😉

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-SalShah4eva-

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: CAqueen
cool....i wish prem would really say that to heer...aww... thatll be so cute😳

I would be really happy if creatives use these lines in the show😛

it wil be just aweosme

but i know they are not gonna do it😡

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Resmi Chimes

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Posted: 16 years ago

I tell u very honestly.... its beautifully written...😃

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