one shot- pyar ke barish

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Posted: 15 years ago
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one shot "pyar ke barish"
well here is my fourth one shot hope you like it ,i try to write romantic well im not good in it but tell me if u like it or not
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nu-look maynk weather is too pleasent and in this pleasent weather ,not pleasent romantic too, how any one can be so unromantic ,plz for some time leave my soutan and enjoy the first rain of our love .

maynk-well ,i never see anyone here only you and me then who is the soutan ????????????

N- these books , these books is better then me atleast ,you can sleep with them ,you touch them and ............. she bit her lower lip when she understand what she said..........

m- oh so ur jealous becoz i sleep with them ,i touch them i donot know that ur eagerly waitind for my touch ,he said naughtly and move close to her.

n- by god ,nupur tu kitna bolti hai ,maa hamesha kehti hai ke teri juban to shatbadi express se bhi fast chalti hai,ab maynk kya karge ,before she thought further ,she felt her heart beat going faster end this time she can feel warm breath on her face.
she pinned to wall and she and maynk was standing so close ,her hand rested on maynk chest and she can feel his heart throb.
and this moment they lost in each other eyes .
their heart beat is just like a music for their ear ,she can feel that any time she will lose her control and imagine what happen when hero and herion alone in the house,

she jerked her thought and pushed maynk with full force and run outside to enjoy rain

m-oh god this girl is just impossible very shaky,but she is my life and my innocent angel ,and smiled at her innocent angel ,whom he love most in his life ,her stupid act ,kabhi na khatam hone wali baatine everthing made him deeply love with her after thiei marrige he loves her alot ,her every act make his life more beautiful ,he never like rain but she loves rain he thought and go there
his feet glued watching the scene she was looking like a droop of pearl which we see on leaf in the morning, her face glowing more in the rain water she was dancing like a carefree child .
i can say weather is pleasent but her act making the weather more pleasent
he was mesmerized by her beauty ,her white dress was now hugging her body
when she see him she grab his hand and now they both were enjoying
m pov-nupur i never like the rain before

" I never liked the rain…
until I walked through it with you
Every thunder cloud that came…
was one more I might not get through….
On the darkest day theres always light…
and now I see it too….
But I never liked the rain…
until I walked through it with you…"
maynk see her lady love dancing in rain ,is she know any magic which she sperad in my life
her every effort make my life more beautiful , well im more happy then before i'm,
i alwys feel different when im with you nupur ,you make me complete ,i can feel the music music of love and music of wind.
he hugged her tight , they were married seven month befor but every time when he touch her she felt shy her cheeks turn pink and she blush,
but the rain ,this rain she hus him tight not want to losse the grip
mynk cuped her face and suck the water frm her cheek and she missed her heart beat with the kiss ,
m-nupur look at me but she cant
but she look at him saw the same passion in his eyes ,love and respect whenever he touch it make her felt sooting and at the samt time shy but his touch make her complete,
an inadequate wish growing inside her may be because of this rain, rain alwys hav connection with love she thought
she want to control her self but when her eyes meet with him she losst her self and their lips meet , like the rain going heaviour their kiss going deeper and deeper

and like the drops of rain meet with the earth two lovers meet and lost in each other love .........
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hey this is my fourth but romantic if u like it then press the like button

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jeniluvmayur thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really romantic dear....rain...mayu and nupz....am imagining...blushing too....cute...loved mayu pov...highlight they were married...great😉

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
FABULASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS LIKE ALWAYS
LOVED IT YAAR
DO RITE MORE
THANXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 4 D PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey adi that was such a sweet and romantic update, i totally loveddddddd it man, i know me and my big mouth also gets me in alot of trouble, same is the case with nupz man.
but here our nupz got a special gift man.
wow the rain, mayur and their kiss was sooo beautiful man, i totally loveeeeeeeeeeeeed it man.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow dear you are simple suberb always please dont tell that you dont know to write romantic part... you write that wonderfully.. keep it up dear.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow it was sooooo romantic........☺️..........please write more.........please pm me😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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adi
so cute scene but tell me wr is u r all 3 parts plz tell me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Superb Aditi it was damn cool

Matlab mayur jus rocked

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Adi
very cute,nice and romantic update.
there is a life time rishta between our mayur and rain.
lovely shot dear.
thanx 4 ur PM
Faria

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsomeeeeeeee..........it ws sooooooo soooo romantic...............keep writin lik this yaar....

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