Aashiq banaya apne-fanfic

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part-1…Kavya runs hurrily 2 a place.there Pammi was waiting 4 him.
She was angry:why did u become late?
K:I'm sorry pammi.My watch is slow.
P:nice excuse.
K:plz don't b angry pammi
P did'nt mind him
K becomes sad.
It starts raining.
He buys sum flowers from the shop nearby & goes near P.P did'nt care.
K kneels down & gives it 2 pammi.P did'nt receive.
K sings:marjava…[Aashiq banaya apne}
P smiles & takes the flowers from his hand.
They both dance 2 this song.

Kavya on the lap of nitya.
N:u really luv Pammi?
K:yes mom.i want 2 marry her
N smiles

Ph rings.Nitya picks up the ph.
N:kavya,pammi's ph
K runs 2 take it
P:kavya,I want 2 see u urgently
K:what pammi?
P:u cum fast 2 the park
K:ok,I'm coming

K reaches with a smiling face.P comes.K goes & hugs her.P was standing as a doll.
K:why pammi?
P:what?
K:nothing…but a difference.u r standing as a stranger,not as my gf
P:that's true.bcoz from this moment onwards I'm not ur gf
K:what?
K was shocked


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Posted: 20 years ago
#2
kavy loving pummi?!?! 😕 😆 so anjali should take the rool of pummi now coz pummi is in the place of anjali and anjali must com in the place of pumi 😊
31609 thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#3
urm! kavya luving pammi??? 😭 😕 neways, hope anji cums soon into his life! 😃 😃 continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#4
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue please it sounds great 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#5
Part-2......Kavya:u r joking right?i no that u r ...
Pammi:no,i'm serious
K:pammi?
P:yes.its better 2 b away from each other
K:what r u telling?
P:i mean it
K:what do u mean?
K keeps his arms on her face
P:leave me kavya
K:u don't like me touching u
P:no,since u r nobody 2 me now
K:what did u say?look at my eyes & tell
P:kavya...my dad has fixed my wedding with another guy.
K was shattered:what?then what did u say?
P:i said ok
K:what ?but we were planning 2 marry each other no
P:marriage with u?i was not all serious about it.but ya
i did'nt mind marrying u.but when a better proposal
comes how can i reject?u r just a degree.not so
bright.but my guy is smart.has got a nice job in
states.its natural that when a better guy comes we will
go 4 ...
K:enuff pammi.plz don't tell anything more.plz don't go
away pammi
Tears cum out from his eyes
P:u r boy.then also u r crying?shame kavya.my guy is not
cheap 2 cry like this like girls
K wipes his tears: pammi...plz don't go
P:i'm sorry kavya.bye....
P goes.
K goes crying 2 nitya.he hugs her:mom....i lost
everything
N:what happened beta?
K:pammi left me 4 another guy.he's very brilliant,she
said.not a muff like me
N:don't cry kavya.that girl is ignorent.Everything
happens 4 gud.u'll get a better girl who understands
u.she'll luv u
K:but she won't b my pammi
N:but she'l b better than pammi

Months passed....kavya becomes really an irresponsible &
useless guy.Goes out with friends.Drinks,smokes,comes
home late,wakes up according 2 his wish.His parents r
upset about it

Kavya's dad Mayak gets a letter from his childhood
friend
Suryabhan.He is thrilled.
M:nitya….suryaban & gayathri r going 4 a gulf tour.That
time his only daughter anjali is coming 2 stay here
N:really?we've seen her when she was a baby
M:ya,now she has grown big
N:she is brought up at USA.will she like this place?
M:she is Suryabhan's & Gayathri's daughter.she'll hav
gud culture
N smiles.
WAIT 4 ANJALI
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Posted: 20 years ago
#6
ok the first part i didnt know where this is heading. but i luved the second part, good work keep it up. continue plz.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#7
Part-3.....Kavya is drinking in the club near 2 his
house.His mind is full of pammi's parting words.
He weeps.song of his painful memories:tharapt....
He goes near the window.he sees a girl coming out of the
car & walking.
He remembers nitya's words that he'l get a girl who wil
luv him.
He goes 2 his friends:hey,a pretty girl...
His friends:wow!where?
K:look out thru the windows

They look.they see no1.they become irritated:no1 is
there
K looks:she was there.i saw her.she had soft hair.
1 pal:soft hair?4 that did u touch & feel?
Every1 laughs.
K:jeans & top
1 guy:u r drunk.so u feel so
K:no,defenetely i saw.i feel that this is the girl whom
my mom talked about.
THey feel pity 4 him.
They:yes kavya,u'll get a better girl than pammi who
cheated on u.but we do not no who that girl is

It was Anjali whom kavya saw.she is given a grand welcome
by kavya's parents.
nitya:u've become so big.that time u were tiny.a cute
baby.i used 2 carry in my arms.
Anjali smiles:i miss those period eventho i don't
remember that
Mayank:anjali beti,u r brought up at USA.will u like this
place
A:no,there is no question about it.bcoz i already liked
this place
All smile.
A:very beautiful place.naturality is filled up in this
air.Eventho i was in USA i kept up our culture.
N:we r going 2 giv a wonderful dinner
A:no aunty.2day's dinner is by Anjali
They were surprised.
A goes 2 the kitchen.
N:what a sweet & luvly girl!
M:ya...

THey all taste A's dinner.they r impressed
M:so tasty
N:u cook nicely like ur mom Gayathri.
A:thanks a lot.by the way where is ur son kavya?when wil
he cum?i want 2 meet him
M:he'll cum after midnight.gets up in the noon.u can see
him 2morrow anjali.

Next morning...
A:kavya did'nt get up?
N:now he won't
A:let me go & giv him a surprise

A knocks his door.K who was sleeping gets
irritated.
K:don't u allow me 2 sleep?
A knocks again.
K gets fed up & he opens the door.A slips & falls on
him.both of them hav fallen down.A on K's chest.


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Posted: 20 years ago
#8
Wonderfull! 👏

Continue Pls! 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#9
😆 Ok i know where you were going with this story by making Kavya be heartbroken in love, so tht he values his love for Anjali more and realises tht this time it is true love! 😉 It's also gd coz it means tht Pammi is out of the way, since she is to be wed, coz then she cant come back and separate them! 😛 At least i hope not!😕

😳 It was cute how you've made Anjali be an old family friend's daughter, who is still cultured, coz his parents should not have any objections to their union, either! 😃

Look at me, you've only just began and i've gone off on weaving the remainder of the story! 😆 Sorry, just trying to predict wot will happen next..coz i never get it right! 😆 Your too gd at keeping it fresh! 😉 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
#10
aaww anjali has finally cum. cute story continue plz.

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