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Heys guys,I m just trying out my hands in writing ff for the first time'please do write ur comments..i ll try to continue if time permits'.

KAASH YEH HOTA: NAKSH FOREVER- FF

Its been two days after Naksh's wedding'Third day had just come.Its 6 o clock in the morning.Everybody in the Singhania clan havn't woke up..Alarm starts ringing in the NAksh's room..Akshara s in deep sleep..She didn't hear the buzz of the alarm..but it had waken up Naitik..He got up and sat on the bed and switched it off and saw it s just 6..on his right,Akshara was sleeping peacefully.He was watching it and was lost in her thoughts..suddenly he rememberd his mom telling Akshara that his father is going to Jaipur for a business deal and so he is leaving at 7 am that day..She also told Akshara had to do the pooja and sing bhajan bcoz daddaji is so impressed wit the divinity in her voice and wants her to do pooja.she also tells her if she does pooja it will make him happy.Akshara also agrees and assures her that she will wake up early and make all the arrangements.Since she was tired she hadn't got that thought and didn't wake up..Naitik was not willing to wake her up but she has to do the pooja.otherwise everyone will point out her mistake.he doesn't want all these to happen..He made an idea.He thought if he keeps everything ready for pooja then it would be easy for Akshara..He immediatel rushes to the washroom,takes bath,goes to pooja mandir and prepares everything for pooja..he also makes sure that nobody is awake.otherwise everybody will talk some nonsense about the "nayi bahu"..After pooja arrangements,he goes to kitchen and makes coffee for him and his dear wife..he has never tried out making coffee..but does it for Akshara for the first time!!!😉😉

He goes to their room.she s still sleeping.he gently wakes her up..She was so surprised to see him..She remembers RAshmi telling her that naitik has never woken up before 8..She asks him,"Naitik,Kya ho gaya aapko??itni jaldi ut gayi..kuch khaas hai kya..??She was also surprised to see coffee in his hand for her..she gently takes the cup and has a sip and looks at the clock..its 6.30..she remembers gayatri mom's words and gets panic..She says,"oops,its so late..i hav to do pooja arrangements..Why didn't u wake me up,Naitik ji".He tells her not to get panic as he has made every thing ready and no need for her to worry.The only thing she has to do is to go and take bath and get ready..Akshara smiles at him and is so happy. She takes his hand and places a gentle kiss and runs awy taking her clothes to the wash room..Naitik is so happy because this is the first time she has expressed her love openly to him'😛😉

She comes out in a pink saree..she s so pretty in that..she comes near the dressing mirror and was about to put the sindoor on her mang..by then NAitik holds her hand and he puts the sindoor on her maang!!!😆😆👏

She feels so happy for having Naitik as her husband'And now she realizes that the time is 6.50 and they both leave the room to attend pooja downstairs'

Gayathri ma is about to send Rashmi to call them..but by that time naksh had already come..she was so happy as they hav become so responsible and com for pooja..Everyone has com but Daddaji was not there..Rajshekhar asked Bhabhi ma about Daddaji's whereabouts..She says he is down with slight fever so that he was not able come..Every one is worried..Bhabhi ma tells not to worry and he will be right if he takes some rest and asks akshara to do pooja'After pooja,naksh get blessings from elders and they all go to daddaji's room.. Rajshekhar says he cannot go to Jaipur leaving Dadddaji in this condition..but due to daddaji's continuous insistance he agrees..

He leaves in a taxi to the airport eventhough Naitik offers him a drop to airport.At that time Daddaji gets a call from his manager that their important clients with whom they meeting two days later had come and want to meet him..Since Rajshekhar was not there,daddaji has no other option except to get ready and go.But he was very weak and tired..Bhabhi ma told him to ask somebody to attend them.He said that the meeting was so important and he had to go.Bhabhi ma was worried and went to kitchen to gayathri and the happenings..both of them were worried ..none of them had the guts to stop daddaji..Akshara overhears their conversation and thinks she has to do something..

She goes to Naitik and tells the problem and asks him to go the office that day and meet the clients..He says he has no interest in their family business..But Akshara says,"mere liye..please.sirf aaj ke liye..aap jaayeye aur sambaliye..Daddaji ko acche lage ga..please..mere liye..Naitik ji".He was not able to say no to her request and agrees.."teek hai..sirf aaj mein jaa rahihoon..aur tumare liye..phir nahi.."He gets ready and get down..Daddaji was about to leave..Akshara calls "Daddaji".He turns back..She says "ek baath kahoon..aapke tabyath teek nahi hai..aap kahi math jaayeye..aaj Naitik ji jaa rahi hai..aap fikr math kijiye..woh sab sambhalega".Hearing this everyone s happy'Naitik leaves for office.daddaji praises Akshi for changing his mind.She says that he has agreed for that day only.But assures that she will talk to him and make him take the responsibility.Daddaji is happy.Meanwhile,Rajshri calls Singhanias and tells that the wedding album has come and she will send it through Bhola that evening.At that time Mohit comes there to meet NAitik.He s all surprised to hear that NAitik has gone to office.Gayathri mom asks him to go Akshara's house and get the album since they were all excited to see it.He goes and gets the album.Everyone of the family sits and see the photographs.After that Gayathri gives the album to Akshara and asks her to tak it to their room so that if naitik comes they both could see it..Akshara goes..She waits for Naitik but it was getting late and she couldn't control her excitement.She thinks if he comes she can see it once more.

She opens it and goes through each and every photograph.She is happy..her eyes are filled with excitement,happiness.Naitik 's work has also got over successfully and he thinks of giving a surprise to Akshara and gets her a diamond pendant.Meanwhile,the MAheshwaris were thinking of Akshi.what she will be doing this time,what she would hav eaten,etc..Vishambarnath asks Shaurya to visit Naksh and giv them the honeymoon tickets to Switzerland.Varsha says she will also accompany him so that she could meet Akshi.ShaVa actually wanted to meet Naksh because they wnted to know whether Naksh hav cleared their MU or not..

Here,Akshara was going through the ganpati pratista picture,the mama rasam pictures.Naitik reached the room and he was standing behind her.she didn't notice him.Next came the mehndi photos.Suddenly Akshi's face changed as she remembered the harsh words naitik told her when she showed him the mehndi.At this time,Naitik took her hands and Akshara controlled her emotions.Naitik noticed it.He started tracing her mehndi design.Akshara was surprised and asked him what he was doing??He replied,"isme N doont rahi hoon".Akshara smiles and is so happy.He tries but couldn't find it.Akshara asks"Mil gaye N?"Naitik replies,"s".She asks ,"where??show me"NAitik comes close to her and says "poore N tumhare samne hai,isme mein doondne ki kya zaroorat hai?".Akshara blushes.He takes her finger and places it near his heart and says she is everything for him..and also apologises for those harsh words and spoiling the mood of the wedding..they have a cute eyelock..Meanwhile ShaVa are at their room's doorstep and are happy to see all smiles NAKSH'👏😃👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
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really good please carry on wrting 👍🏼
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Awesomeeeeeeeee.........
It is really fabulous........
Very nyc FF excellent workkkk.......
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hey babrie... fab. work yar ......
is awesom .... waiting 4 next part ...........
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great work yaar!!😊
liked it to the core👏👏
nice part!!
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Really good 1st attempt 😃
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Hey just read the part it was fab
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