Kismet Connection Chapter 5 (Aug 30th 09) Pg7

Hey everyone..

I am kind of bored with the current track of Kis Desh and decided to write my own...Please mind that this is my first time writing anything 😉, so it will be very crude.. Let me know your thoughts and if you guys like it then I will write some more.

So I am going to build my story from after Prem dropped Heer at her Home in the Rain...Here it goes....

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INDEX
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Pg1 - Chapter 1
Pg2 - Chapter 2
Pg3 - Chapter 3

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Chapter 1
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Heer was relieved that Prem has turned down her invitation to come inside..only she know the effect he still had on her, she did not trust herself near him..being around him brought back old memories and feeling she had fought hard to forgotten and buried. Enough.. don't think about him she told herself and closed the door....

Heer made my way into the hall to find her regular babysitter Priya watching TV. Priya is Heer's neighbours
17-year old daughter who watched Chahat whenever she got late at work. She was what you would call the
typical teenager..Her world revolved around college, friends and her biggest worry right now was to convince her mom to let her go see the upcoming release of New Moon with her friends. Heer sighed thinking about my biggest worry ..Chahat

Priya was shocked to see her state.. "Oh my God Heerdi you are completely drenched, I was worried how you were going to get home in this weather. How did you come? How did you manage to get a Cab in this weather? Priya bombarded her with questions..Heer thought for a moment how to answer that question and finally said "Umm..Someone I knew was passing by and dropped me off". "That is good Didi. Okay then I am leaving, Chahat has already eaten and gone to bed" Priya said and started to leave, but stopped halfway to the door and turned to me and asked hesitantly "Didi..Can I ask you something? ", "OfCourse Priya tell me" Heer told her, "Didi did you scold Chahat or she fight with you. Heer frowned wondering what brought this on, she nodded her head to say no. Priya continued "Well, its just that I have never seen Chahat so dull and down..she is usually so bubbly and always troubling me and having fun..She didn't even want to play her favorite game Monopoly..she just did her homework and barely touched her food and went to bed..So I thought maybe you said something to her. I asked her what was wrong but she wouldn't say anything." Heer eyes teared up hearing what Priya said, she knew what was wrong, Chahat didn't want to hurt her so she must have not met Prem and so misses him. She quickly composed herself and told Priya, "Oh that I told her she has been watching too much TV lately and didn't let her see TV in the morning and so she must be upset about it. "Oh that must be it" Priya said not fully convinced, but didn't push the issue furthur. She picked up her umbrella and headed home.

Heer locked the doors and went up to Chahat's room. Chahat was sleep peacefully hugging her favorite doll Toto. She went to her room took a shower, changed and went to bed. Lying on the bed staring at the ceiling Heer thought..am I doing the right thing by keeping Chahat away from Prem, I am hurting Chahat..she wants to meet her Papa and I am the only one preventing it..should I let Prem back into out lives..should I forgive him..can I let the past go..she had always made up her mind that it was going to be just her and Chahat and there was no alternative..is it time to rethink that..The tiredness of the day got the better of her and Heer fell asleep and she was dreaming....


It was a bright sunny day.. the weather was perfect..just enough sun and enough clouds to make it just right for a picnic. The wind blew and filled the air with apple blossoms. Heer was sitting in a pink yellow shaded crape sare on the picnic blanket setting up the food near the orchids. Chahat was near a flower bush collecting flower and making a bouquet of flower, she finished her arrangement and started to run towards a man wearing a white Kurtha, she went and held his hand, he turned around, it was Prem. Prem smiled affectionetly at Chahat and picked her up and carried her near Heer. They sat near Heer and gave her the flowers. Chahat quickly runs off to collect more. Prem takes advantage of the moment alone to give Heer a quick peck on the cheek. Heer turns away embarrassed, she then notices a woman wearing a black salwaar walking towards Chahaat, she takes Chahat by the hand forcefully and takes her with her. Heer is shocked and quickly gets up and runs towards the woman to stop her.. Who was this woman..why was she taking her Chahat away from her family..why was she ruining her perfect day..Heer quickly makes her way to there and angrily stops the woman by putting her hand on her shoulder and comes faces to face with herelf...

Heer wakes up startled from her dream..still remembering that the look on the woman in the black dress..her own face..only full of angry and hatered...What was her dream trying to tell her..was she her own enemy..was she standing in the way of her own happiness... Before Heer could think anymore she more she heard Chahat coughing and went to check on her. Chahat was still sleeping, Heer checked the time, it was already 7am, she decided to get busy with her daily routine. She took a shower made breakfast and got lunch together for Chahat. She was feeling a little under the weather because of getting drenched in the rain..As much as she hated to admit it Prem was right she did get sick by getting wet in the rain..no I won't think of him she thought and got back to packing lunch ignoring the throbbing pain in her head....

Heer took Chahat to her school, to dropped her at school. Chahat did not say a single word in the walk from home to school. Heer thought she needs to talk to Chahat and make her feel better. When they reached school, Heer bend down to kiss Chahat and said to her "Chahat you are upset with you mommy know, I am sorry beta, I promise I will make it up to you." Chahat says "No mommy, I know you tell me to do things for my own good, don't worry mommy I won't be sad, I know if I am sad, it makes you sad." Heer hugs Chahat with tears in her eyes feeling lucky to have a daughter like Chahat who understands her and gives her a goodbye kiss.


Heer heads to office and gets some Asprin for the headache and gets down to work. Her phone rings she picks it up, it Jasmeet aunty. "Heer beta, come to my office quickly there is something I want to discuss with you" she says. Heer hangs up the phone and heads to her office wondering what is going on. She enters to see the whole staff of the marriage bureau there, she wonders what is going on. Then Jasmeet aunty says, "Heer, come sit down" she point to the empty chair near her, "Now that everyone is here, I was to discuss a plan I came up with to build revenue. I have decided that from now on we will add an incentive to all those who find brides/grooms through our agency. We will also making the arrangements for their honeymoon" she exclaimed. "I have been talking to many to the Hotels in all the popular areas and they are going to give us a great deal. As of now I have talked to hotels in three cities: Kullu Manali, Shimla and Dehradun. I want associates from our bureau to go and setup the program and make the arrangements. Heer, you are going to Deheradun, Anita, Kullu Manalu and Shravya Shimla. I will make the arrangements for each of you to leave today."

The staffing meeting came to an end, everyone had left except for Heer, she was still in shock, how can she leave Chahat and go to Dehradun, she had never been away from her for that long. Thinking about this made her headache even worse, she hoped the asprin would kick in soon enough. She went up to Jasmeet aunty to tell her she couldn't leave, but before she could say anything, aunty said.. "Heer beta, I know what you are going to say, that you can't leave, I have already thought about all this. Chahat will be staying with me and Geet and you will only be gone for three days. Also I gave picked the Dehradun for you since it is close to Delhi so that you can come home very soon. Don't say no, I would send anyone else if possible, but I need you, since you are the best." Heer didn't know what to say, Chahat loved to stay with Jasmeet aunty and then she would have nothing to worry. She hesitantly said Yes and smiled...


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Well that's all for now... what do you think....

this is sooo goood.. u must continue...i cnt believe this is ur first try....

Hi
its really nice......................continue soon...............wait 4 the next
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Fatima

Hey
that was very nice
do cont soon....

I am glad you all like it.. I will write some more soon..

Kadambari

omg that was rlly good!! u should rlly write some more!!!! infact i think the show should follow ur story...

Here is Chapter 2....

Chapter 2 (Coincidences)
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***Juneja House***

Prem woke up to the beeping alarm..He reached over and shut it off slumped back on his bed. Another day he thought, wonder what today has in store for him..what heartbreak awaited..His thoughts got interrupted by the beeping Blackberry..what now!!! he thought and reached over to pick it up..It was a reminder email from the hotel manager that he has to go to Deheradun to meet with the owner of Grand Resorts and Hotels to finalize the deal to buy the place. Prem sighed, he didn't want to leave Delhi, this is where Chahat was, where Heer was. Even though Heer refused to meet or talk to him, he was happy for all the coincidences that brought them together. He smiled thinking of their chance encounter in the rain yesterday. If he went to Deheradun, that would not happen. He would talk to Mr Sharma and tell him, he was not going and to ask him to go instead.

Prem got up and dialed Mr. Sharma's number. "Hello, this is Sharma" the man on the other line said.
"Mr. Sharma, this is Prem Juneja, I am calling to let you know that I will not be able to go to the meeting in Deheradun, so I want you to go in my place."
"Oh..okay" Sharma said sounding disappointed.
This irritated Prem, "What is it Mr.Sharma, what seems to be the issue, can you not go to Deheradun ?" making his irritation clear in his voice.
Sharma hesitantly said, "My daughter got wet in the rain yesterday and is sick, I was actually just leaving to take her to the hospital, but I understand that I am needed to go to the meeting. I will make other arrangement"
Prem immediately felt bad for the tone he had taken with Sharma, "Don't worry about it, take care of you daughter, family comes first, I will change things and go to the meeting myself."
Prem hung up the phone thinking..atleast he can be there for his daughter, I am so unfortunate that I can't even see or talk to her. He quickly got up dressed and headed out to office, only to be stopped by his mother.
"Have some breakfast before you leave" she said.
"No Mom, I am in a hurry, will get it in the office. Oh one more thing, I will be going to Deheradun for a couple of days to finalize a hotel deal. I have packed a suitcase, someone from office will be by to get my things before I leave.
"Sure, I will give it to them, take care and call me once reach there" she smiled.


Heer was back in her office on hold with the hotel trying to make her reservation, she had been on hold for almost 15 mins now, then finally someone go to her.
"Grand Resorts and Hotels front desk how can I help you"
"I am calling to make a reservation"
"Sure, what name is the reservation going to be on"
"Juneja"
"One minute...I already see a reservation made under that name, you are all set to come in tonight"
Reservation is already there Heer thought..Ah Jasmeet aunty must have made it...it is a peak travel season, she must have known that it will be difficult to get rooms in the last minute and made to ahead of time. Heer thanked the lady and hungup.

She left to pickup Chahat early from soon, Chahat will be thrilled she thought and smiling to herself, she gets to skip school and get spoiled by Jasmeet aunty.
As she expected Chahat was ecstatic to be skipping school..
"Oh mom, I am go happy I got to skip school, afternoon is English class and Mr. Khanna has been reading the same story for three days now. I was go good to get out"
"Chahat, you shouldn't say that, anyway I need to tell you something important, I have to to Deheradun for some important work and you will be staying with Jasmeet aunty.
"Three days!!" she said sadly. "I will miss you mommy"
"I know beta, but it is very important work or else mommy would never go, you know that. I will come back as soon as work is done."
"Okay mommy, but you promise to buy me lots of Chocolate and call me everyday"
Heer kissed her daughter and agreed to her conditions.

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Prem's meeting finished earlier than he expected, so he decided to leave early, since it was a long drive. The long drive gave him time to think about what he would buy for Chahat and remembered the time when Heer and him had made plans to come her for their wedding anniversary. He sighed knowing now that was a distant reality a dream at most. He would be happy of Heer talked to him, let alone come to Deheradun with him for a honeymoon.

Prem reached early enough to miss the rush hour traffic and checked into the hotel. They booked the executive extended stay suite for him, a full kitchen, hall and deluxe bedroom ...obvious trying to impress him.. The long drive was exhausting and Prem decided to take a shower....

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Heer became more and more impatient and the time passed, they were stuck in traffic and her cellphone was discharged, she wanted to how and let them know..Her cab moved...finally... she thought...

When the cab reached the hotel she quickly scrambled out of her seat to the receptionist to call home and let them know she had reached..She felt relief as soon as that was taken care of...
"The key to your suite", the lady handed Heer the keys.
"Suite?", Heer questioned her.
"Yes, that was what was the reservation made under Juneja"
"Oh"..this must be part of the trial..Heer thought.. to see if this would be something the honeymoon couples would like.

The bellboy dropped Heer's luggage in the suite and left. Heer could not help but admire the room..this was less a room and more a house....A nice hall with a lit fireplace, comfortable leather sofas...Heer thought this was the perfect place for a honeymoon..she approved smiling.

Her thought were interrupted by the a noise she heard near the bathroom..it must be the room service finishing up..but she decide to check and moved to the bathroom door and before she could reach for the doorknob, the bathroom door opened and out came Prem in a Kurtha, wiping his wet hair with a towel and bumped right into her.

It all happened in an instant, she fell back and just when she thought she would land on the floor, Prem threw the towel and caught her mid-air.. she landed into his arms, his eyes intensely looking at her. His wet hair dripping water on her forehead....

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That's all for now... more later.....Let me know what you think....

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

Thank you, for your response.. I am glad you like it.....I thought more people might like it ...Only one person liked it. :(

Plz keep updating. Im in love with this.
Next chapter is gonna be romantic i guess😆