Where did I go wrong?KaSh Mini - COMPLETE

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#171

Thank You guys for understanding.. I will try to update next week 😳

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rav

@-midnightsun-

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#172

aww steffi.. take ur time.. love u...xx

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Somebody

@BebaakBegum

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#173

hey luks lyk sum1 is really busy

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Armaan

@-Armaan-

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#174

Take your time girl ... Good Luck for the assignments and the stuff!! I know ... I've been through the bad times... lol ... Anyways ... par Please bhulna mat ki yahan koi tumhare ek update ke intezar mein din raat ek karke baitha hai!!

Don't you dare forget this !! LOL
Arman ...

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#175

hey stef
im back
i read it dear all at once hehehe
i know only 2 parts but still
finally read it
sorry for being late though
now coming back
rocking intro dear
just loved it
i like ur screenplay(i hope its the same for stories too hehehe)
the way u juggle b/w past n present is nice
it shows connectivity unlike some stories where they simply confuse u
u know what this track is really interesting of armaan meeting ridz on the first day of her college where she was pursuing her grad ... mast it is
plz pm me
update soon

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angel

@-Love.is.You-

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#176

hey steffi the story is goin on awesome dear....

well actually as u said its mini i thought i wud rather read it wen its finished u know like i m so so curious to know about the whole story at one go lolll....but i cudn't uphold anymore n so i read it n now it sounds like how stupid i was that i dnt read it before haha coz the story is cool n the curiousity in me is raising ohh gosh i cant wait for AR meeting....i so hate ridzi's mom in law she is such a low scum woman arghhhh.........

anyways yaar come sooooooooon n continue it just cant wait....

love ya

pooja

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#177

Hehe😳 Does anyone remember this story?😳 Been long time hasn't it.. 😳 Really long

I hope u all remember where is stopped, If not please check page 12 for previous part😳

I have not replied to comments yet, if time permits i shall soon do even that😆 I had left a note on page 22 about my schedule

I am just posting a Promo.. something is better than nothing right....😉😉

Forgive me if any errors. Its all i could manage in 15 minutes😳

Enjoy😳

*Promo*
😆

A few minutes after trying my best to convince him that it was nothing but a little scratch I found myself soon looking at him and he aided my swollen ankle, "hurting?" I only heard. "No, just a little bit!" staring at my now white band aided ankle. Those few moments of silence when you don't know what to talk definitely means there is some tension, I for one didn't want to bring the tension by asking what happened down there, but I was afraid he would ask me something, and I am one of those last people on earth to lie to him diary, you know that.

"Did you have dinner?"

"No, was waiting for you, u freshen up, I'll get dinner"

"No wait here, I'll freshen up and get dinner for us myself. Don't go. Right?"

"Right!"

"How did you fall?"

"Oh, err, nothing, small slip, was mopping"

"Does ma know your hurt?"

"Ye'. No she doesn't!"

There at that moment he caught me, why can't I lie to him diary? That's so unfair.

His nose flared, ok he looks cute when he is angry but I didn't want another bomb in the house at this hour of the night diary, I mean whats the use, he goes and blasts at her and she does the same, pointless leading to nothing except hatred, I didn't want that, so I pulled him back down firmly as he got up, he plopped back on the bed and waited for me to talk, instead I simply said "can we please have the arguments after you have aided my shoulder too?", I said cutely pushing the hair away from my shoulder exposing my clear back and shoulder. It worked, just like I thought, but soon I found my plan of hooking him backfiring on me, the moment those hands touched my shoulder my spine shivered, like someone was gliding ice down my back.

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Thanks all of your for pestering me. 😆I am PM'ing all my readers who are in my buddy list. 😳 if i do get time, I'll PM the rest of you😃

Welcome all my New readers, and welcome back to my old readers😆

Love

Steff

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Edited by Steff_DMG - 16 years ago

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Muskaan

@Asad-Kii-Arzoo

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#178

thnxx alot for d update promo n pm...n i totally frgotten where u left it so i had 2 read d last part again where u left it...😆 will wait for ur next update...u r going great...