FF:Tere liye...{LAST PART 20/PG 50} - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey really nice ff plz update soon............plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks all u people..
its so encouraging to see ur comments..

once again thanks..

i'll be updating soon...
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fab update i wnt to get the mystry solved soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks everyone for ur lovely comments..
do keep reading..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey everyone'here's the next update'really sorry for being late....i know this time im very late...im not getting time to update...cos of my busy schedule...frm next monthit will be on time...u have co operate with me for this month...'hope u all forgive me..and now enjoy the update..




and sorry for the mistakes!!!

~*~part 10~*~

At farm house..

All get in..

Maya Harman and dheer are discussing something

Maya:guys humare plan ko action mein daalne ka time hogaya..

Dheer:kaunsa plan???

Maya:dumbo'.pari aur pj ka..

Dheer:okay okay I got it..

Maya tells something to Harman and dheer that's in mute..

Maya:so'now'no gad bad'dheer especially you'

Dheer:okay..

Just then maahi comes from behind..

Maahi:kya baatein ho rahi thi???

Maya:ah'who ..hum yahin baat kar rahey thay ki Harman mujhe horse riding seekhanae waala hai..aur dheer koi gadbad nahi karega'

Maahi:hmm'maya be careful dheer ka koi pata nahi..

Maya and maahi share a hi 5

Dheer:very funny..\

Maahi:was it???

Dheer:anywayz I don't have time to waste here'already im getting late..

Maahi:late ???kahan jaa rahen ho???

Dheer:meri friend ko receive karna..

Maahi:hum sab to aa gaye aur kaunsi friend hai tumhare jo hum nahi jaantey..

Dheer:hai..koi..

Just then a beautiful girl enters..

She's wearing a black tank top and capris..

Girl:hii..dheer'

They all look at her..

Dheer:hii'come in..

Maahi to maaya:yeh kaun hai???

Maya;mujhe nahi pata..

Dheer:guys this is my friend ritika',ritika..these are my friends..thats maahi,thats maaya,and that's Harry'

Ritika: hii everyone'..nice to meet you all..

Maya/maahi: hii..

Harry: hii..Ritika'nice to meet you too..

Maya gives a stern look to Harry..

Ritika: dheer ne mujhe tum sab ke baarey mein batay'I was eagar to meet you all'..aur dheer ne ne mujhe yahan bula liya..i hope yo all don't mind..

Harry:no..not at all..its good to see you here..

Meet comes there..

Ritika:yeh kaun hai???

Dheer:he is meet,meet this is Ritika my friend..

Meet:hii..ritika..

Ritika:oh..please call me ritti

Meet:as you say ritti..

Mahi and maya watching this get angry..seeing the boys getting close to ritika..

Mahi:meet'mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..

Meet:mahi baad main baat karenge..

Maya:harry..wo bhar kuch arrangements dekhni hai..

Harry: arrangements are almost done rest all you please check..

Mahi and maya stamp their feet hard on ground and goes to heer

Maya:all these guys I tell you'

Mahi:aur wo Ritika..

Maya(mockingly):ohh!!no please call her ritti'

Heer:kya hua??tum dono itne gusse main kyun ho???

Mahi and maya look each other..

Mahi:gussey main???

Maya:bhar chalogi to pata chalega hum gussey main kyun hai

They take her outside..

Guys are busy chatting with Ritika..

Maya:yeh hua hai..

Heer:par yeh hai kaun???

Mahi:Ritika..urf ritti'dheer ki friend

Maya:aur ab..in sab ki bhi..

Heer:bas friend hi hai na'don't you think guys are being jealous for silly thing

Mahi:silly???

Maya: wait pari'jab tumhe koi ignore karey toh pata chalega..

Mahi:how it feels to be ignored'.by the person you love

Heer:anyways..

Heer goes out

Prem is out..

Heer:hii..tum yahan par ho..???

Prem:was just checking out with the palce..

Heer:hm..this very beautiful palce'

Prem:hmm..but yahan phone network nahi hai..

Heer:oh!!!

Prem:lets get in..

Prem heer joins everyone..

Dheer:and this is pari and pj..

Prem/heer:hii..

Dheer:and this is Ritika..

Ritika:nice to meet u all'this really gonna be fun..

Mahi:I think hum sabko fresh ho jaana chahiye..

Ritika:actually you are right mahi'.can anyone guide me to room..

Meet/harry/dheer:why not sure..

Prem and heer goes to their respective rooms

All the three guys leave with Ritika..

Mahi:all guys are dogs!!!!

Maya:not everyone'pj nahi gaya..

Mahi:par sab pj jaise kyun nhai hai????

Maya:chillax sweety iss Ritika ka kuch toh karna padega'

Mahi:haan who bhi bahut jald!!

In the evening..

All are out in the backyard..

Where there is horse stud..

Maya:wow!!! i love horses..

Harry:and what about me????

Maya:hmm..need to think about you'
meet:mahi tumhe horse ridding aati hai???

Mahi(arrogantly):nahi!!

Meet:come I'll teach you..

Mahi:kyun Ritika ko bhi nahi aati..ussey seekhao na..

Meet:main bas tumhe hi seekhaonga..

Mahi:kyun???

Meet:coz I love you not her..

Prem is riding a horse..

While heer is watching everyone from the tea table..

Ritika joins her..

Ritika:hiii

Heer:hii..

Ritika:why are here ???

Heer:coz I don't know horse riding'.and you???

Ritika:coz I don't like horses..

Heer:why???

Ritika:simply..

Heer:they are sweetest one..

Ritika:really????why don't you try once..

Heer:some other time..

Ritika:no'you have try once..why not now??

Heer:but..

Ritika:no buts'

Ritika takes heer to the shed..

Ritika:pj..why don't you teach pari horse riding???

Prem heer look at each other..

Prem:me??

Ritika:yes you..everyone are busy..so..why not you???

prem looks at heer for her assurance.

Heer nods yes..

Prem help heer sit on horse

Maya:how cute'

Ritika winks at maya and shows thumbs up..

Maya winks back at Ritika..

Meet:hey look there pj..pari ko horse riding karwa raha hai..

Mahi:hmm'pata hai pari ko horses bahut pasand hai..

Meet:tumhe pata hai maahi aacha hua ki tum pari ki sister ho..

Maahi:wo kyun???

Meet:wo is liye kyunki'basically pari kuch nahi kehti'aur tum bahut kuch kehti ho'toh pari ke barey main humey tumse hi pata chalega na'to yeh tumhare plus point ho gayi na..

Mahi slightly hit meet on his shoulder'

Mahi:meet!!! Tum na'main jaa rahi hoon'

Meet:how sweet of you meri baat bina kahey hi samajh jaati ho'

Mahi walk in the farm house..

Meet goes behind her..

curledup thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
mine

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hey great to have you back with an update

loved all of it!...it was amazing!!!

loved the whole jealousy and then prem teaching heer!


-aashifa-
Edited by curledup - 15 years ago
asyasahil928 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
your back...long time...🤗 amazing update...loved it... 👏 continue soon and thanks for the PM...😊
PrincessPatel77 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiiii
just caught with all the chapters......mindblowing ff yaar.....enjoyed reading it.....hope prem and heer get to know about each other soooooon!
eagerly waiting for the rest!
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh so finally you UPDATED!!!
nice part as ever...
plz yar this time update asap...
take care,
regards,
Suhana.

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