Decide a Romantic Sequence For Ranvir/Ragini Now - Page 19

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Posted: 16 years ago
here's my second scene for RagVir...hope u all like it 😊

Ranvir leaves for the office and Ragini stays alone at home.....After finishing her household work she gets back to her room and she decides to go to kaushalya nivaas as she was getting bored being alone at home

As soon as she gets up to get ready, her cell phone rings up and she goes and picks it up

Ragini: hello

Ranvir: hello sweetu...Ghar pe akeli ho??

Ragini: haa...toh??

Ranvir: akele akele bore ho rahi hogi na??? main aa jaau tumhe company den eke liye?? Kya khayal hai??

Ragini: bohot bura khayal hai...aap abhi office mei hai, aur abhi aap mujhse zyadaa apne kaam pe dhyaan dijiye, waise bhi mai abhi maa bauji ke ghar jaa rahi hu aur raat ko lautungi toh bore hone ka toh sawal hi nahi uthta

Ranvir: par Ragini

Ragini: par var kuch nahi...aap apne pffice ke kaam me dhyaan lagaiye aur mujhe bhi ready hone dijiye

Saying this she disconnects the phone and smile mischievously

Here Ranvir holds the phone in his hand and says

Ranvir: kaat diya??? Ragini tumne bhale hi mujhe aane se roka hai, par phir bhi mai tumse milke toh rahunga hi aur who bhi abhi ke abhi

He gets an idea and picks up the phone and calls up Malti

Malti: hello

Ranvir: hello Malti bhabhi

Malti: haa...Kaun??? Ranvir ji??

Ranvir: haa bhabhi mai...accha bhabhi, agar abhi aap free ho toh mera ek kaam karogi

Malti: haa, kahiye kya kaam hai??

Ranvir: bhabhi who baat ye hai ki Ragini abhi aapke wahaa aa rahi hai...toh aap abhi usse call karke kahiye ki aapko uske saath shopping pe jaana hai

Malti: ABHI

Ranvir: haa bhabhi abhi...please please please bhabhi..ye last time mere liye itna kar dijiye...please

Malti: accha baba theek hai...mai usse mall mei le aati hu, khush

Ranvir: haa bhabhi khush... thank you bhabhi

Ranvir thinks to himself

Ranvir: kya baat hai, ab ek pati ko apni patni se milne ke liye itni mehnat karni pad rahi hai...isse accha toh shaadi ke pehle tha kam se kam Ragini mujhe time toh deti thi...par chalo koi baat nahi meri Ragini ke liye kuch bhi

Meanwhile Malti calls Ragini and asks her to meet her at the mall at 11 am

Malti Ragini reaches the mall and Malti takes her into a saree store...she looks here and there to see whether Ranvir is there or not...she turns back and finds Ranvir hiding behind a pillar...he waves his hands and isharo isharo mei tells Malti to select a saree for Ragini

Malti asks Ragini to select saree for herself andMalti with Ranvir's help keeps on rejecting the sarees...Malti gets annoyed at Ranvir and she turns back to ask what to do now...Ranvir points out a saree and tells her to send Ragini to the trial room with that saree

Malti turns back and asks the sales man to show the saree Ranvir selected for Ragini

Malti: ye dekh Ragini...ye saree kaafi acchi lag rahi hai aur iska rang bhi tujhpe bohot accha lagega

Ragini: haa bhabhi ye saree acchi toh lag rahi hai, par mujhpe acchi lagegi ki nahi??

Malti: toh jaa na trial room mei jaake dekhke aaja kaisi lag rahi hai

Ragini: bhabhi, ab mai is saree ko dekhne kaha jau trial room mei

Malti: Arey Ragini par dekhke toh aa kaisi lag rahi hai....tu dekhke aa mai jab tak apne liye kuch dekh leti hu

Ragini agrees to Malti and she picks up the saree and walks towards the trial room....she walks across the doors of the rooms and when she is about to open the door of the room Ranvir pulls her in and locks the door...Ragini gets shocked to see him there

Ragini: (with eyes wide open) Ranvir aap...aap yaha kya kar rahe hai??

Ranvir doesn't reply her and keeps on moving closer to her

Ragini: Ranvir aap sun rahe hai ki nahi??

Ranvir still doesn't replies and moves forward to kiss her..when he gets really very close to kiss her Ragini puts her hand on his lips

Ranvir gets annoyed at this and says

Ranvir: Kya Ragini, ek toh itni mehnat se mai tumse yahaa milne aaya, aur tum ho ki sawal pe sawal poochhe jaa rahi ho

Ragini: aap baat toh aise kar rahe hai jaise aapko maine yaha bulaya tha...aap yaha aaye kis liye hai??

Ranvir puts his hands around Ragini's shoulder and says

Ranvir: main tumhe boot miss kar raha tha, isliye tumse milne yaha aa gaya aur upar se mujhe ye bhi dekhna tha ki meri pasand pe meri pasand kaisi lagti hai

Ragini removes his hand from her shoulder

Ragini: matlab ye saare aapke pasand ki hai

Ranvir: haa aur ab tum mujhe ye pehnke dikhaogi

Ragini: Ranvir kahi aap pagal toh nahi ho gaye hai??? Aapko lagta hai ki mai aapko ye pehnke dikhaungi

Ranvir: kyu bhai kyu nahi dikha sakti?? Aakhir mai tumhara pati hu

He again tries to get closer to her and Ragini again pushes him back

Ragini: Ranvir log kya sochenge??

Ranvir: aur kya sochenge....yehi ki ek pagal deewana pati apni biwi se milne ke liye kya kya karta hai aur uski biwi usse bhagane pe tuli hui hai

Ragini: Ranvir aap mazak chhodiye aur yaha se jaiye

Ranvir: nahi baba, ab toh bilkul nahi jaunga...waise bhi hum aise thode hi mil rahe hai

Ragini: Ranvir

Ranvir: kya Ranvir, mujhe pata hai mera naam Ranvir hai...kuch aur bolo

Ragini: ab bhot ho gaya mazak, ab apna mazak band karo aur yaha se jaao

Meanwhile Malti comes there and says

Malti: Ranvir ji, milnaho gaya apni biwi se?? agar aapki aagya ho toh mai usse le jaa sakti hu??

Ranvir gets annoyed and dheere se he says

Ranvir: pehle Sadhna babhi kam thi, ki ye bhi kabab mei haddi banne aa gayi!! Lagta hai mujhe meri biwi se koi shaanti se milne nahi dega

Rangini smiles at his pagalpan and pushing him back she tries to run away...but before she could go Ranvir grabs her saree ka pallu and pulls her back and hugs her tighly from the back and says

Ranvir: Abhi toh mai tumhe chhod raha hai, kyunki dusri kabab mei haddi aa gayi par iska matlab ye nahi kit um ye saree mujhe pehnke na dikhao...aaj jab tum wapas aaogi tab tum ye saree pehnke aana...mujhe dekhna hi hai ki is saree ko pehnne ke baad meri Ragini kaisi lagti hai

And he kisses her cheek and leaves Ragini

Ragini turns back to see him and runs from there shyly

Malti notices her and then looks at Ranvir...she smiles at him and nods her head and leaves the place leaving Ranvir alone!!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
w0wwwwwwwwww
luvvvvvvvv ur scenesssssss preet n dharaaa
dharaa apkee scene mai bhe ranvir kam naughty nahee hai;):P
ahahaha
awwww luvv b0th da sceness
guysss m als0 writting 1 will p0st it ar nytee inshallahhh
perhna sab 0k::P;)
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Posted: 16 years ago
SANIHAAAAAAAAAAAAA
i saw da 1st pagee w0wwwwwwww mashallah buhatt achaa haiiiiiiii
t0 guddddddd!aur paas wala scene aww n dis mix sigy luvv dem b0th
n da way ya ave written ranvir ragini n r0mantic scene its justt luvlyy
awwwww w0w
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: KinshukLuvsDina

SANIHAAAAAAAAAAAAA

i saw da 1st pagee w0wwwwwwww mashallah buhatt achaa haiiiiiiii
t0 guddddddd!aur paas wala scene aww n dis mix sigy luvv dem b0th
n da way ya ave written ranvir ragini n r0mantic scene its justt luvlyy
awwwww w0w

Aww thnk uuuuuuuuuuu Dinaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😳😳😳
Preeet n Dhara i will read the scenes in sometime😳😳
Btww kisi ne bhii 1st page nahi dekha except dinaaaa😭
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Posted: 16 years ago

Just wanted to say congratulations, to all the RagVir fans who wrote these scenes and episodes> You all truly rock and I love reading them!!!!!!!!! You have made me an even bigger ragVir fan!! And I love you all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX ❤️ Keep up the good work!!!!!

P.S the first page is awesome
Edited by fusion55 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fusion55

Just wanted to say congratulations, to all the RagVir fans who wrote these scenes and episodes> You all truly rock and I love reading them!!!!!!!!! You have made me an even bigger ragVir fan!! And I love you all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX ❤️ Keep up the good work!!!!!

P.S the first page is awesome

Thank You Soo Muchh for taking out timee n seeing itt
n awww congrats to u tooo if ur also a ragvir fann😳😳
hope to see alll these on RagVir sumday inshallah😃😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx fusion55...i am really glad that we all made u a bigger fan of RagVir...why dont u join us in writing the scenes??

sanhu, i saw the first page...it looking amazing...bilkul like u
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fusion55

Just wanted to say congratulations, to all the RagVir fans who wrote these scenes and episodes> You all truly rock and I love reading them!!!!!!!!! You have made me an even bigger ragVir fan!! And I love you all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX ❤️ Keep up the good work!!!!!

P.S the first page is awesome

Nice to know this, please be active in Bidaai forum 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dharaa

thanx fusion55...i am really glad that we all made u a bigger fan of RagVir...why dont u join us in writing the scenes??

sanhu, i saw the first page...it looking amazing...bilkul like u

Thank Youuuuuuuuuu My sweetheartttttttttttttttttttt😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

😳Preeeeeeeeeet:-🤗🤗 omgggggggggg i loved ur sceneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee specially when ranvirr helps ragini in getting ready omgg teh scene was so sweet n romantic..i really wanted to know ke yeh karwa chaut kab hota hai:???i want to seee a karwa cahut scene between ragvir frm solonggg

i loved it preeet...👏Lovele Lovelyyyyyyyyyyy...Ranvir ne bhi vrat rakha for ragini awwwww.i can imagine ragini in a multi color lehnga n all..the scene was perfectt
awesomeeeeeeeeee👏keep writingggg😳
Dhara:- awwwwwwwwwwwwww dhaaraaaaaaa i jusr read ur scene maalthi bhabhi bhi aagayii😆😆awww i can imaginee ragini n malthi shopping n ranvir wahan tapkee..yeh scene perhke mujhee woh tiem yaad aaga when sadi ragi mamaji subb went to big bazaaar..aur wahaan ka bhi maalthi ne hi bataya tha ranvri koo haha remember naa
the scene was lovelyyyyyyyyyyyy👏Well Doneeeee🤗🤗
Oh Godd after reading all teh scenss i feel RS should really Visitt thissss Topicc
Yahaan itney awesoem Romantci scenes hainn..ik nwo creatives ke demagh to bilkul nabd haiiinn huh..they betterr come here n read all thiss
unak bhi faidaa n hamaara bhii..wht sayy😳
Edited by SanihaKaKinshuk - 16 years ago

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