new ff:the wedding bells(part 1)edited.

Hey frnds, since some members said that there was some error on the first page of the ff and they were not able to open it…..I reposted my ff.Hope you guyz like it.

Characters

1.Samrat sehgal-Once d basket ball champ of mumbai's excel college…today he is

the captain of the Indian basket ball team.A heartthrob among d masses,

girls all over India r mad abt him but he…. is still mad abt his chashmish…..

and now he is soon gonna break all budding hearts coz he is ready

to sit on d white horse and marry his beloved……………….

2.Mayank Sharma-The most intelligent and studious boy of excel , is now the CEO of

a leading advertising firm and one of the most eligible bachelors of

Mumbai.,,,,,,But soon will not remain the same as his wedding cards r

under the printer's machine.

3.Gunjan Bhushan-The most simple and sweet girl excel have ever had… is now d editor of a leading daily and also takes care of d music department

of the talent school run by her sister.But at the end of the day

she is happy being the sweet chashmish of her BB champ.

and dese days she is blushing a lot….. just like her red wedding

lehnga.

4.Nupur Bhushan:the most charming and bubbly student of excel,she runs a talent school in Mumbai to train new acting talents and she is the one whose name is gonna be dere on Mr. eligible bachelor's wedding card…………….coz she is his lovely bride.

5.Shilpa Sharma:In reality she is mayank's mother but for her its double celebration coz both her sons are getting married on the same day,i.e. Samrat and

Mayank.She has already made it clear to both of dem dat after

the marriage all five of them will live together…….as a loving family.

6.Dia bhushan:She is gunjan and nupur's cousin sister and now-a-days too upset.

actually she wanted her marriage to take place on the same day

as gunjan and nupur but her sweetheart is abroad and so she will have to

wait for two more months.

7.Ranvijay:Dia's fiance ,he is running a successful family business in India and adroad.

8.Uday bhushan:Nupur,dia and gunjan's brother ,he finally found a job

,but god knows how long dat will last and he is still in search of his Miss. Right.

9.Benji:samrat and gunjan's best frnd.Even he is still single and always ready 2 mingle.

10.GD:gunjan's dad(nupur's as well)

11.DD:dia's dad(of course uday's as well)

12.Chacko and annie:dia's best frnds

13.CJ:Mayank and nupur's best frnd.

So here goes my ff frnds.I am writing a short first part.If you like it pls do

reply.Hope you all like it.

Part-1

It's a pleasant auspicious evening and the entire Bhushan mansion is enlightened with colourful lights.The entrance is decorated with vibrant red and pink roses and d music can be heard out on the streets.It's nupur and gunjan's mehendi ceremony,just a day before dere wedding.Inside the house everybody is busy completing the last minute preprations.The mesemerizing aroma of wet mehendi is all in the air.All the relatives and friends have arrived.

all of dem are dressed in lovely Indian outfits.Uday,benji and chacko

are wearing sherwanis and annie is flaunting a beautiful pink lehnga.

U:ye dids itni der kyun laga rahi hain…..mehendi nupur aur gunjan ki hai ya

dids ki?

Annie:(In her peculiar accent)oho uday shayad tumhein yaad nahin ki ranvijay ne

Dia ko apni har dress mein ek photo mail karne ko kaha tha.Isliye she's just trying to look

perfect.

U:par hamein der ho rahi hai aur dad baar baar bula rahein hain…tum sab ruko

main hi dids se poochta hoon.

And he knocks at the door wid gr8 force.Dia opens d door angrily.

D:oh god dodo tumse zara sa bhi wait nahin hota………..

Before she cud complete she notices dat everyone is left open-mouthed

looking at her.She is wearing a very stunning red saree dat ranvijjay gifted her

specially for gunjan and nupur's mehendi ceremony.

A:oh god dia tum kitni sunder lag rahi ho aur ye colour ,its suiting you so much.

D:(wid a smile on her face)thnx babes…but waise mujh par to sabhi colours bahut achche lagte hain…its just dat …ki jab unmein ranvijay ka rang mil jata hai to…. woh aur bhi beautiful ban jate hain.

Chacko:seriously babes aaj to tum bilkul princess lag rahi ho.

D:hey chacko don't call me dat,mujhe princess bulane ka hak sirf ranvijay ko hai.

Benji:are yaar !tum sabki baatein khatam ho gayi hon to nupur aur gunjan ke pas chalein.

U:haan haan ….aur waise bhi papa daant rahe hain……….

And all of dem go 2wards nupur and gunjan's room.

Inside the room….gunjan is waiting for nupur to come out of the washroom.

She is extremely nervous as tonight all eyes will be on her and nupur.Waiting for nupur she looks at her hands and a shy smile comes on her lips……….her cheeks are blushing…..

G:aaj in haathon par meehandi lagegi…..par sirf samrat ke liye….hey bhagwan maine to kabhi sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ki samrat aur main………aur…. ke mera sapna sach hojayega(and she is blushing even more)par… ye di itni der kyun laga rahi hain……mujhe kitni tension ho rahi hai…..aur di hain ki saje hi ja rahi hain!

N:(from inside)kyun? itni bhi kya jaldi hai tujhe……….lagta hai samrat ko dekhe bina

tera dil nahin lag raha.

G:(wid a shy smile on her lips)Kya di tum bhi na,kuch bhi kehti ho…. aur waise bhi samrat yahaan nahin aa raha hai.

Nupur comes rushing from inside.

N:kya!!!kya kaha tune!par kyun?

G:di…. tum bhi na…..tumhein nahin pata ki mehendi ki rasam par ladka nahin aata……

use to….use to….. shaadi wale din hi mehendi dekhno ko milti hai(and she blushes).

N:kya!iska matlab….. mayank bhi nahin ayega?

G:nahin…. mayank jiju bhi nahin ayenge.

N: phir kya maza aayega?

G:Kya!!!!!!!!!!

N:nahin nahin kuch nahin. (to herself:mayank to aa nahin raha aur mein yun hi paglon ki tarah saje ja rahi hoon!By god!)

And then both of them remember dat they forgot 2 see each other's dress and

how both of them were looking.

G:di tumhari baton mein main bhool hi gayi ,di tum bahut sunder lag rahi ho

……orange tum par bahut achcha lagta hai….agar aaj mayank jiju tumhein dekh lete

to behosh hi ho jate!!!!!!!

(nupur blushes)

N:achcha!waise gunjan tu bhi kisi pari se kam nahin lag rahi……kisi ki nazar na lage

(and she puts some kajal from her eye on the back of her neck).

Seeing her love gunjan's eyes are moist and a tear trickles down her eye but

before it cud reach her cheek and spoil her make-up nupur takes it on her finger.

N:nahin gunjan ab aur nahin… kitni mushkil se to tujhe ye khushiyan mili hain…..

ab tere udas hone ke nahin sirf khush rahne ke din hain.

Gunjan nods her head while wiping her tears.

N:gunjan main chahti hoon ki aaj tu mujhe ek promise kare….

G:Promise!par…. kya di?

N:dekh gunjan bachpan se ab tak, hum ek saath rahein hain …jab bhi koi

problem hoti thi hum milkar face karte the ….ek doosre ka khayal rakhte the…..

ek doosre ki aankhon mein kabhi aansu nahin aane dete the……

…..lekin ….shaadi ke baad hum dono chahein kitni bhi door kyun

na ho par tu hamesha khush rahegi

….apni koi problem mujhse chupaegi nahin….

G:main promise karti hoon di…

And both of them hug each other.

my ff then pls do tell me by accepting the invitation card I am sending to you

all………..this is an invitation to all of you at gunjan and nupur's mehendi ceremony….

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