~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#771

thankgod Raj is fine i mean almost fine love the emotional scene of RN meeting . You displayed it really well i hope Muskaan was not raped at that time and Rahul and her relationship doesnot get affacted by it

i just everything will be fine.

plz continue soon

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#772

great part tine...finallly naina found raj...their meeting was soo emotional...loved how u portrayed that..and i hate this aditi😡 i hope all this things doesn't effect RM relations...

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lovebapu18

@lovebapu18

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#773

wonderful part!!

so waiting for the next one!!

do continue soon!!

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#774

Rocking update

finally naina ne raj ko dhoondh hi liya. But his conditions is very bad..yaar insaan kitna torture face kar sakta hai.

Naina and raj cannot help but romance a little with each other..just to keep their spirits high..

Naina is right...who bhi uski hai aur yeh cadets bhi...they are here only to save him.

Muskaan has been through a lot..not wonder she was so angry and frustrated in the beginning. I know that rahul will supoort her and love her no matter what...he is just too hurt himself.

Waiting to know why aditi has done all of this...and i think that aditi is not the boss here..there is someone else as well..

please continue soon

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#775

totally rocking...rajs here....

loved d way u handled d situation....

poor raj kya haalat ho gayi hai but still romancing...cute1

loved d updt

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#776

Sooo sorry for such a late reply...!!!
I din't realise Fatiny was updated...!!!
Anyways, fab update...!!!👏👏
Thank God Raj is found at last...!!! 😃But such a miserable haalat...!!!!😭😭
Aditi is so sick.😡😡..trapping Muskaan first😲..that is why she asked for Rahul...!!!

and u think u r writing trash...!!! 😕 Let me tell u that noone is bothered abt the corridors and stuff....!!!😆😆😆

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#777

Hey kaafi accha ud tha. Interesting to know that y did Aditi did it all. Akhir aisa kya tha jis ki vajah se us ne Raj k saath aisa kiya?

ud soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#778

Finally Naina managed to meet Raj n this was indeed very senti when she looked Raj's poor condition. How much they had torched him so sad.😭 😭 😭 He was humiliated for many days n neither food nor water was given to him. 😲 😲 😲 I loved the way Naina tried her best to take care of Raj n they kissed for a while as if they met after ages.😭 😭 😭
Raj was shocked to know about Aditi that she has planned all n she wanted to take revenge with him 😲 😲 😲 n y it's still mystery. But y she wanted to spoil Raj's life? 😕 😕 😕 She tried to do the same with Muski 😲 😲 😲 but Muski has also hide a big truth, that was shocking.😲 😲 😲
continue soon.

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Tina

@-Tina-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#779

RECAP !!

Mission ! -- Raj found !!.... Final showdown with Aditi !!..... Aditi kidnaped naina during frreshers ball....she sent rohit into muskaans life...--- muskaans truth !!......

Raj asks why Aditi hates him from so many years even when he dint know her !!

Taking you back in time captain.........you definately ought to remember Captain Dhiraj Gupta...

Raj looked up at once.......it had been ages since he heard that name😲😲

Aditi- The innocent dhiraj gupta whom you proved guilty.....

Raj-How do you know him ??

Aditi- Knew him way better than you did....i am Dhiraj Gupta's Daughter....😭😭

Raj looked up in shock..

Aditi-You dont know what you have done to his family....you have no idea...

Raj was waiting to hear more..

Aditi-How could you accuse him like that....inspite of knowing him.....he would never do anything like that....he was the sole bread winner of his family....he had a wife and two daughters...three women to take care of.....

and yet he wanted to serve his country like his father who laid down his life for the country...and at the same time he made sure that nothing ever happened to his family...they managed....manged to have 2 meals a day.......he was your senior god damn it !!....😡

Raj was lost in all those memories...those old days came flying back to him...

Aditi- My mom could not stand the shock....she passed away within two months of dad's death......we were left all alone...i was 14 then ....my younger sister was 8.....where would i go...what would i do.....my mom and dad the ones who take care of us were no more !!..

Aditi was in tears...😭

Aditi-I was too young to manage myself and i had a sister too .... I couldnt see my sister dying because there was nothing to eat..i gave her up...left her at some rich family's dorrstep....do you even know what it takes to do that.....do you have the bladi guts to leave your sister at some other idiots house simply because you cant feed her...think of it damn it !!😡😡

Raj could never think of giving up muskaan....never ever !!.....and not being able to feed her would be the biggest shame of his life..

I dont know where she is today.......how she looks..i dont even know if shes alive or dead.....and i m glad i left her....atleast shes living a better life than me😭😭

Turned 15...average looks with good features...people would openly ask her how much she would take for one night....

I was a single lost soul in the family....there were no relatives...nobody wanted to keep contact with Accused Dhiraj Gupta's family...

Aditi-With nothing let in life i took up whichever route came my way....i joined a group of people who supposedly behaved good...they trained me....i never knew what i was being trained for but they promised me big money.....at the age of 16 i was sent for work.....for the first time in my life...i was sent to work....i was sent to spend the night with some guy in some 5 star hotel...

There was pin-drop silence in the room....

Aditi-I will never forget that day in my life...i got back and cried....cried and cried....and the next thing i did was left that place.... wherever i went...no one was intrested in helping an orphan...they only were intrested in her body......you have no clue of what i have gone through ....

Aditi- I took up to a comparitively more dignified way of exposure...took up to modeling....

She went pulled out some pictures from the table draw and came back..and threw them in fro

nt of him..

But then again...to climb the ladder they wanted to spend the night with me.....it was disgusting where at every step people wanted to exploit you because of a false background or should i say no background!!...

Aditi-I decided to take revenge from those who spoilt my life...who forced me to use my body at every step😡......and to find you i had to accept that my body was my only asset.....i was forced to undertake that transition...i am not today here out of choice....its out of helplesness.....once i got to know about you...my only goal was to kill you.....and even today it is....coz i lost my family because of you .....and i lost my life and my family because of you !!.... i hate you !!.........😡😡😡

Raj stood there with absolutely nothing to say.....

Aditi-From then my motive was only to torture nd kill you....i did everything that i had to do...and its like you know you go into the sea to catch one fish you get addicted you realize theres much more to explore...thats what happened to me..

Aditi-Put yourself in my place...how would it be?... did i do anything wrong??....my means would have been wrong but that was the only option....i still hate you CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT....

Raj remained silent..

Everything was just sinking in..

Raj-You hate me...then let it just be me and you.....why do you want to involve the others...let all of them go......we'l sort it out..

Aditi-Theres nothing to sort out captain...absolutely nothing..

Raj-Let them all go..please..

Aditi-Really......awee...captain rajveer cares so much for his people !!... fine so how many..some ten people...alright.....you take 10 bullet shoots thru your chest and these people will go un hurt....escorted by my men.....umm alright..maybe thats too much....5 bullet shots followed by 5 stabs right on your chest will do ...😡😡😡

Raj was annoyed....before he could do anything..naina had pounced upon aditi...she was standing there quietly for too long...this female was getting on to her nerves........she was banging her left right and centre.....😡😡😡

All the cadets went there and managed to seperate the two...

Aditi was damn pissed..

Aditi-Its done captain....all of you are gonna die...thanx to the grave act of your stupid girlfriend....any last wishes??......

Raj-Aditi..listen to me..😕

ADiti-Umm maybe you want to kiss her...or make out here?.....kool...do it fast....we are all waiting.....after its a once in a life tym opportunity ....

BANG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

One tight slap across her face......

Raj-Shut the bladi hell up !!...😡

Aditi was shocked...

Raj-I am taking your crap for the last god knows how long...just shut up now !!.....

Aditi-You have lost your chance captain.....its all done..final goodbyes my mates !!..

She went and pressed some buttons...

Aditi-Matter of 30 seconds...my people will be here.....and then what awaits your fate you will see...

Aditi was confident...suddenly a fear gripped her..why hadnt anyone come.....

Yudi smiled....

Yudi-Sorry ma'am .....all your communication channels have been hacked and destroyed by the tech savy Yadhuvansh Sahani !!😆😆😆

Everyone smiled....and were totally proud of yudi !!

Aditi laughed !!

She moved to a wall...pulled a slab around..there was a cam there...

She spoke into it..

Aditi-Come in pedra...pedra...lomda.....pedra..

There wasnt any response 5 minutes down the line..

Naina-Well...when i found the love of my life....i disconnected all the camera wires my dear aditi !! 😆😆😆

Aditi- You bladi B

Raj was on her....in a flash he pulled out abhi's gun and held it to her head....

Raj-Dont even complete that.. else you'l be dead at the end of it....😡😡

Aditi was damn angry...how was this possible...they blocked her communication channels....her cameras...damn it...she cant fail again..

Raj-Its all over aditi.....all over....youre finished !!...

Aditi-Thats your misunderstanding captain !....nothings over...its over only when i kill you !!😡😡

Raj-Right now the gun is in my hand and the head is yours !!....... I am sorry for what i did to Captain Dhiraj Gupta......he was my senior...my mentor !!.... i stood up against him simply because i had to stand with navin....navin was true...and thats all i knew !!....i would have stood up against anyone who accused navin !!....and for your information...though navin escaped that case...he is no more today..

Aditi-Oh please..i know your mercy killing story that you cooked up...

Raj-It wasnt coooked up alright !!..😡😡

Aditi-What did you get captain...by killing him yourself in the end....you destroyed my family as well as his.....you have destroyed two families......kill me captain....i dont want to live anyway....this world is a disgusting place....i cant live alone any longer...kill me....

Abhi- Raj....woh tumhe batton main uljhaney ki koshish kar rahi hain...forget it......humein iss yahin marr kar ghad dena chahiye.....😡😡

Raj-Nahi abhi.....isske sahrey bahar tak jana hoga.....itni asanai se hum nikal nahi payengey...isko rasta banakar yahan se bahar lekar phir mar dengey..

Aditi stood there hearing their conversation...she was helpless....they were decided when to slice the animal and eat it up...she could do nothing..

Abhi-Thekhe...cadets...lets move..

They successfully moved out with the help of aditi...

They had 7 guns pointed at her......if they waned their madam alive that had to make way....leave them...and the trained people did just that..........

They successfully came out.....

Once outside the enemy base...they all drove to their base camp...

Raj handed over Aditi to Abhimanyu.....

Raj-Isse academy le jao......thoda interogate karo......shayad kisi aur activities main shamil hoon.....be very careful ...yeh bahut chalak hain...cadets ko saath le jao..

Raj-Cadets listen up..

they all came ..

Raj-Humara aadha misson successful hua hain...humney apney enemy ko kabze main kar liya hain......bas ab isse academy tak le jana hain....aap sab captain abhimanyu ke saath jao......jaisey hi yeh academy main lock kar de jayee.......aapka mission successful !!....

They all nodded and smiled..

Raj-Cadets....I am very proud of each one of you !!... very very !!....yeh jo aapney aaj kar dikhaya hain...koi nahi kar sakta...koi nahi !!... Cadet yudi....apney jo systems deactivate kiye....super !!... really super !! aggar hum yahan zinda hain toh its all because of you .....aur baaki sabney jo jo contribute kiya....i congratulate all of you !! huda sameera tanvi aalekh and muskaan .....naina ne mujhe sab bataya....great job guys !!..aur chauhan sahab...thankyou ...thankyou sahi waqt par aakar mere cadets ko rah dekhneye ke liye aur mujhe bachaney ke liye

Abhi nodded and gave him a hug..

Abhi-Aapke liye..hum kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar saktey hain..

Raj-Thanx !!...ab aap jayiye !!

Abhi-Woh Raj..muskaan..

Raj- Muskaan aur Rahul ko rehney doon....main dekh longa..tum nikloon !!..

Abhi nodded and they left !!

Raj saw Naina and Muskaan walking at a distance.....and rahul a little behind...he walked to them..

Both Naina and Muskaan were emotionally broken....both needed him badly...he hugged them both at one go.........

Raj broke from them and turned to muskaan..

Raj- Muskaan.....i am proud of you bacha !!.... tune kabhi kisi ko kuch nahi kaha....you fought like a brave soldier....all alone....kabhi complain nahi kiya...kuch bhi nahi kaha.....😭

Tears filled both their eyes....😭

She clunged to him..

Raj patted her..

Raj-Muskaan......ek baar sab keh diya hota....main mar dalata usko..😡😡

Muskaan broke from him..

She was silent..

Raj-Khair....ab sab janey de.....sab thekkh hain na......rona bandh kar..

He was in tears himself..😭

He coudlnt console her...she needed someone else...

He looked at Rahul...who was lost in his thoughts..

He signalled to naina to be with her and walked to rahul...

Raj-Rahul....main janta hoon...tu bahut shocked hain...main bhi hoon...hum ko muskaan ne kabhi kuch nahi bataya.....rahul...is waqt muskaan ko aggar kisi ki zarrorat hain toh woh hain teri......i hope iss sab se tu muskaan se rishta

Rahul gave him one glare...

Raj-Janta hoon..sorry !!...jaa uskey pass jaa...

Rahul-Nahi Raj....she needs some time.......ussey iss sab main akele laddna hain.....usko ladney de....usse akela rehney de..

Raj-Tu yeh kya keh raha hain ??😲

Rahul- pata nahi Raj.....muskaan is not comfortable sharing things with me....yahan aaney se pehle bhi kuch problem thi...she dint tell me ....woh pata nahi kyun mere saath kuch share nahi karti...uss din base camp par usney mujhse bahut rudely baat kiya....hum durr ho rahe hain....😭😭

Rahul was in tears !! 😭😭😭

Raj kept a hand in his shoulder..

Raj-Muskaan...aisi hi hain rahul....humein usko samjhna hoga...thodi reserved hain....apney problems dusroon par nahi thopti !!..

Rahul-Magar raj..main toh uska...

Raj raised his eyebrow!!😉

Rahul smiled thru his tears...

Raj cracked him up ever time with his possesivenes..😆😆

Raj-Tu uska kya??😡

With fake anger !!

Rahul- Raj !!

Raj-Kya raj...tu uska kaun hain ??

Rahul-Main uska boyfriend hoon !!😆😆😆

Raj laughed !!...and so did Rahul...but tears still stay in both their eyes..

Raj-Rahul...muskaan ke pass jaa...aur bas uskey saath reh..useey yeh ehsaas dila ki tu uskey saath har kadam par hain...chahey woh tujhse kuch kahe ya phir na kahe !!...samjha......

Rahul-Tune kabse lovelogy main Phd karli ??😆😆

Raj smiled..

Raj-Jabse naina meri zindagi main ayyi...aab please mujh par ehsaan kar..muskaan ko lee ja..mujhe naina ke saath thoda time milega na !! 😉

Rahul-Saala !!

Raj laughed !!

Raj-Jaaa !!

Rahul nodded and went..

Naina saw him coming and moved to go to Raj..

She stood near him...they both stood in silence .....they saw muskaan break in rahul's arms......they saw him comforting her......

Raj sighed !!.... there were tears in his eyes....

His sister was with the person she needed the most !!..

Raj turned to look at naina...

He smiled at her..

Her eyes were filled too....she was dying to see him flash that smile...that killer smile...

He hugged her..

Raj-I missed you Naina !!.... badly !!

Naina-I missed you too !!

Raj broke from her....and immediately sealed his lips with hers !!.....

It was a terrific kiss...too much passion and longing !!.... they hadnt been with each other for so long !!....after a long passionate kiss they broke !!

Raj-I love you Naina.....love you more than anything else in the world !!

She smiled..

Naina-I love you too !!

She laid her head in his chest....the safest place to be !!

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Rahul walked muskaan to a room...there was hay all over...that was where they were supposed to sit..

Rahul and Muskaan sat down....both were silent !!

Muskaan looked at him....lost in thoughts..

Muskaan-Tu mujhse gussa hain ???

Rahul nodded in the negative..

Rahul-Nahi...aisa kuch nahi..

Muskaan-Rahul...mujhse jhooth mat boliyo...i am sorry....maine tujhe kabhi kuch nahi kaha....uss sab ke baarey main......himmat nahi thi rahul....darr laga ki tu mujhe...

Rahul looked at her intently..

Rahul- Ki main tujhe kya??

Muskaan-Tu mujhe chodh dega...ya tu mujhe gussa karega woh sab chupaney ke liye...

Rahul-Kya humara pyaar itna kamzoor hain?😕

Tears flew out of her eyes immediatley..

Muskaan-Rahul....hum durr ho rahe hain..i can feel it....main tujhse durr nahi hona chathi rahul......

Rahul looked at her sadly..

Rahul-Muskaan.....aggar teri zindagi main koi problems hain toh tu mere saath share kar na...aisey yun khud akeli .....kyun muskaan...mujh par bharosa nahi hain.....ek bar bata diya hota....yahan aaney se pehle bhi koi problem thi....tune bataya bhi nahi...akeli ladti rehti hain..

Muskaan looked at him..

Muskaan-Tujhe sab bata dongi...sab kuch !!... aaj ke baad kuch nahi chipaongi...i promise...bas tu mere saath reh..mujhe chodh mat dena..

She laid her head on his chest.....the safest place for her to be !!

He was lost in his own thoughts!!....

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PRECAP !!

Naina-Raj...tumse kuch puchoon ?

Raj-Hmmm

He said playing with her hair..

Naina-Dhiraj gupta kaun hain ?... aur bhai ke case se uska kya lena dena??

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Rahul- Lekin muskaan...akhir hua kya tha farmhouse par !!... tune uss dine base camp par mujhse itna jhagda kiya kyun tha.....

Muskaan looked at him...how could she tell him..

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Raj-Magar rahul tu ....tu muskaan se theekh se baat kyun nahi kar raha...tum dunoo itne akward kyun feel kar rahe hoon...aur koi baat hain kya?

Rahul- Shayad hain..lekin muskaan ne mujhe kuch bataya hi nahi...aisa kuch hain jo mujhe pata nahi lagna chaiye....wahi chupa rahi hain mujhse !!

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Raj-Kaun hain Naina?... Tell me damn it...kisney rahul aur muskaan ki bich problems bada di hain..

Naina-Huda..

Raj-Cadet Huda ????😲😲

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Somewhere around 2 in the night

Knock knock !!

Raj was all alert..

Raj-Sab andar jao..main dekhta hoon..

As he opened the door he saw Cadet huda..

Raj-Cadet huda aap ??

Huda-Jee sir...kuch kaam bakki bache the..toh main wapas aaya hoon !!.....kuch rishtoon main meri wajah se darar padi hain...unhe sahi karney aaya hoon

Raj-Jao cadet...i am proud of you !!

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Alright!!!

All done with the dishum dishum action mission part !...*sigh*

Thank god !!... i never though i'l get thru it !!... lol ..

gave a very long precap just to emphasises on the fact that all the problems will be solved....and next part will be only rn-rm !!..

A few things i have lined up....things you can look forward to on fatiny

- we will soon have a new couple on fatiny !!....😉

-loads of romance😳

- a small party..

-full gang together..

-Return of Little Raj and Megha !!.. *yay* * i luv little raj *

-and one surprise !!... for all of you !! -- thats a little more later though !!... :)

Have fun !!

looking forward to your comments...atleast hit the "like" button if you dont have time to comment !!... i'l know that people are reading !!... :)😉 😊

Also those of you who havent recieved my pm ...

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Luv

Tina !!