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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys i was thinking of writing a ff on sajan n mayur but now that mayur have confessed their love.....so i'll write on sajan say if it is nice or wrong!!! sorry if there is any mistakes...
my life.... (part one)
characters....samrat=the chocolate boy of excell college.girls drool over him...his best buddy is benji n gunjan is his best friend
gunjan=she is a studious n sweet girl her best friend is nupur (her elder sis) n samrat is her love..but she doesnt tell him benji n mayur no that
mayank=he is the hero.lives with his mom....his love is nupur bhushan mayank is a serious boy who is attracted 2 books!!! very much
nupur=she is a very fun loving,bubly girl...she loves mayank nd confessed it in the drama day.
other characters.......diya...gunur's cousin the diva of the college
uday...diya's bro..n gunurs cousin
benji...samrat's best buddy
rv...new student in college n likes diya
so......here starts my ff.....
now samrat has started 2 feel that he has a feeling for chasmish except friendship but he can't understand what it is.......in the canteen samrat n benji r sitting..
benji=samrat..samrat!!!
samrat= oh ha benji...bol kya bol raha tha tu..
benji=kya baat ha dude..ma kabse bakre ki tara bakbak karahu aur tu ha ki ek statue ki tara betha ha. kuch to bol!!! kya baat he mere bhai,koi problem hai??
samrat=nahi yaar,kuch nahi....woh thora sa saar dad karraha ha
benji=to le...tere saar daard mein u gayab kar deta hu...wo dekh
and samrat turns around n sees gunjan coming towards the canteen. samrat sees her and gets lost in his thoughts but benji gets him out
benji=sam..mein tujhe bohot salo se janta hu aur ma tera itna accha dost to hu hi ki janta hu ke kab tu pareshan ha aur kab tera saar dard karraha hai....
samrat=pata nahi yaar mujhe ye kya horaha jab bhi chashmish ko dekta hu to mere dil ko bohot sukun milta ha man karta hai sara din uske sath rahu....baate karta rahu bas usko hi dekhta rahu.😳..par mein use baat bhi nahi kar sakta kyu ki....
benji=kyu ki sheena madam ne mana kia ha isiliye????
samrat=ha..par maine to use samjhane ke bohut koshish ki par...
benji=par kya samrat??? tu khud keh raha hai ke tujhe gunjan ke sath rehna accha lagta ha..usse baat karna pasand hai phir tu kyu???kyu esa karraha hai???
samrat=kyuki...
benji=kyu ki woh do din ki ayi hui ladki ne kaha aur isiliye tune apni itni acchi dost ko chor dia dubaara apni hi galti ki vajase?????
samrat=samrat had no reply.
benji=pata nahi tu voh kab samjhe ga jo gunjan tujhse kehkar bhi na keh pai...
samrat=kya????
benji=ye ke gunjan tujhse.....n then he stopped as he remembered when he gave gunjan kasam that he won't tell samrat that she loves him
samrat=bol na benji..ke gunjan mujhse kya???
benji=kuch nahi...me chalta hu n benji left from there leaving a confusing samrat
In the corrider samrat is still thinking bout benji's words n is feelings...n also the lovely moments that he spent with gunjan suddenly he crashes with mayank....
mayank=oooppssss..im sorry dude
samrat=no dude im sorry...ma hosh me nahi the
mayank=vase hosh me to tum ajkal hothehi nahi ho.......as he knew bout samrat n gunjan but couldn't tell him
samrat=ha tum sahi keh rahe hu...mera dhyan...
mayank=oh!!!! to college ka hero,bb champ ka mood off ha,pareshan ha....batao ma kuch madat kardu????
samrat=nahi dude esi koi baat nai ha ma thik hu.....
mayank=thik ha nahi bolna ha mat bolo.....par ha itna kahunga ke samrat hamesha jo samne ha use mat dekho apne dil me jo ha use suno aur samajhneki koshish karo...
samrat=tum thik keh raheho...n then samrat left
mayank=chalo chahe use na bol saka par ek ishara to diya...😉
after college nupur went with mayank to his house n dia n uday went early...gunjan had some classes so she styed n it became late when she started for home
gunjan=aj to bohot late hogaya...di to chali gayi par ab ma kese jaungi???koi auto bhi to nahi ha....
then samrat came with his bike n stopped infront of her
gunjan=tum??is waqt yaha??? ghar nahi gaye???
samrat=bb practise tha...isiliye par tum???
gunjan=wo...ha mujhe kuch kam tha to isiliye...
samrat=chalo me tumhe chor deta hu
gunjan=nahi iski koi zarurat nai ha m a chali jaungi
samrat=chashmish plsssss zid mat karo...aur chalo!!!! barish bhi hone wali ha...
gunjan=nahi uski zarurat nahi ha...ma chali jaungi..but before she could go samrat took her hand n said..
samrat=nahi!!!! ma tumhe is samay akele nahi chod sakta...tum mere sath chal rahi ho n thats final n took her hand n made her sat on the bike.....then he started the bike and gunjan fell over him😳 samrat told her 2 hold him but gunjan didn't she held the back handle n both started towards the home....
on the way suddenly rain started heavily n so samrat stopped the bike...both ran towards a small shed
samrat=lagta ha barish ese hi nahi rukega....time to lagega ha na chashmish...but there was no reply he turned around n saw gunjan without her glasses drying her dress n hair she was shivering.....samrat was stunned to see her like this as he never saw her in this way n for him there was nothing there excet gunjan...he kept looking at her...suddenly the thunderstorm begin n gunjan ran towards samrat n hugged him tightly as she was scared
her dupatta was eft at the place n she was in samrat's arms.....samrat couldn't understand anything...he felt that if he could nevewr let go of her...he was very happy n so he also hugged her back.....at that moment gunjan also couldn't realize that she was in samrat's arms...n her dupatta wasn't with her...suddenly samrat realized wat was he doing..why was he feeling that he got everything...gunjan was the one girl whom he loved but he still couldn't understand.
suddenly gunjan also realized n took a step back offf she hurrily took her dupatta samrat took ouyt his jacket n put her wear it
samrat=ma janta hu ke tumhe thunderstorms se daar lagta ha...dont worry ma hu
gunjan=thnx
after an hour the rain stopped n both went 2 gunjan's house
gunjan=thank u..samrat
samrat=it's okay mmm tum mera jacket le jao kal dedena
gunjan=thik ha...bye gud nite
samrat=gud nite
gunjan started towards the gate samrat was thinking that if gunjan feels the same way as he does then she will turn.....n after some time gunjan turned....samrat was happy n he left!!!!!
so guys do u think that i should continue??? i promise there will be more scenes of sajan mayur in the next update...plsssss do comment

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RapChick101 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its nice but ur rain scene is similar to tht of naveen di's FF........so it looks a bit clinched no offense ...........but it was romantic....*blushes till hair line*..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice ff dear continue soon also read my one love ne mila di jodi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice part..........
plz continue ..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice one.its really romantic.plz do continue soon,but dere is one request don't write in italics.
bye!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sweet one .do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i really love the starting.plzzzz can u add me in your pm list and plzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its really a nice ff....please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plz do cont sooon i m w8tng thanxs for PM!!!!!!!!

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