WON THE POETRY CONTEST..MJHTians ROCKS!!

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Its a pleasure to inform u all that some of our fellow MJHTians have made a remarkable achievement on this forum...
Owing the wishes and encouragement of the lovely people on the this forum..
Sana(SanaSarwar), aisha (cuppycake990),Sunita(Sunita182) and me(falak01) have won the poetry competition which was held here few weeks back...
SanaSarwar and Sunita won the first prize in English poems category..
and Aisha won the runners-up prize in the same category...
i won the first prize as well as the runners-up prize in Hindi/urdu poems category...

congratulations to sana, sunita and all the other winners as well...

here is the link to the result announcement thread..
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/love-friendship-dating-and-relationships/1214413/poetry-contest-winners-and-runners-up

a big thanx to all the our sweet friends here who supported us all the way...

i m posting the winning poems here...

have a look..and plz let us also know what u guyz think about it...

You

(by:Sunita182)

*FIRST PRIZE*

I won't compare you to a summer's day
for it doesn't last
The warmth of the breeze never parallels
the picturesque spell you cast

Your not the moon
it depends on the sun for its glow
A thousand smiles your presence brings
The rainbows are insecure

The sun can't hold a candle to you
it fades into the night
Your flow , so pure
So bright , your resplendent light

A millions of stars exist
so I won't call you one
Flowers wilt , stars fall
the dusk washes away blue off the sky


Nothing compares to you
The perfect illusion of my mind
I can't help but wonder
Are you perfect or am I blind ?

You pour life down my soul

and no being is as divine
You are everything , everything

Just not mine


Street Girls: The looted treasure Of God

(by:SanaSarwar)

*FIRST PRIZE*

She was born smiling at the world

But they frowned at the word girl.

When she reached the age six , she wanted to play

But they molested her to be their own toy to play.

At the age of 12 when she sought to study

They made her work and she had to be steady

she heard sixteen was suppose to be sweet

But woke up when she was put on a beggar's street.

At the age of 20 she was married to a man

she thought finally she will rest and have some tan

Her dreams were only just unrealistic dreams

Her husband beated and made her scream

she was used and abused and then discarded

If she had children would then she be regarded?


When the little miracles of God came, she felt elated

Finally she had someone who will love her, so she waited

she took care of her children and was an obedient wife to her man

But he divorced her to go to another and left her with no man

She struggled for her children, Heart broken though she was,

When they grow up will they remember what a good mother she was ?

Time passed and her bones became weak

And she looks back and recall what a life it has been.

Her children r living their own life now

but she is forgotten and is left all alone now

If she dies will she be remembered and may be only then loved

Or will she still remain the girl who was forever unloved.

ARJUN, MY LOVE, MY SWEETHEART....šŸ¤—

(BY:AISHA)
*RUNNERS-UP*
I thought of a poem especially for my sweet heart,ā¤ļø
Describing his qualities i dont know from where do I start,šŸ¤”
He is stylish and hot , handsome and smart,šŸ˜Ž
His KILLER SMILE just took away my heart,😃
That voice, those eyes, that talent, those looks,😊
They drive me crazy and make me forget my books,
I just feel like pulling his cheeks whenever he smiles,😳
Just to do that i can even run miles and miles,šŸ˜‰
I think i love him but is love that simple??ā¤ļø
I just dont know coz' i forget everything whenever i see his dimple,
I really wanna tell him how do i feel,😳
But i guess whenever i'll see him ,my lips will seal,šŸ˜•
My heart starts crying when his eyes become moist,😭
But when he is happy ,my mood becomes light,šŸ˜†
His SMILE always takes my breath away,
I just wanna hug him but is there a way??šŸ¤—
I adore him , i love him from the depth of my heart,😳
I didnt know how to write poems,but his eyes also taught me this art,
I wish to meet him one day in my life on a beautiful sight in the evening twilight,šŸ˜
My ARJUN, MY LOVE, MY SWEETHEART seeing and talking to you would be such a DELIGHT.............ā¤ļø

MAA..

(BY:FALAK)
*FIRST PRIZE*
Hai wo mamta ki moorat...
Duniya mein sabse pyaari hai uski soorat...

Khuda ka bheja farishta hai..
Jiske man me sirf mamta hai..

Jaanti hai jo sirf pyaar lutaana..
Jise kehta hai MAA ye sara zamaana..

Jo hume 9 mahine apne khoon se seenchti hai..
Aur hume duniya me laane ke liye dard sehti hai..

Hume apne aanchal mein chhupakar rakhti hai...
Duniya ki burayi se bachakar rakhti hai..

Hamare liye saari duniya se ladti hai..
Haan, ye ek MAA hi kar sakti hai...

Maa ki god mein hum saare dukh bhool jaate hain..
Uske pyaar se hum har gham se jeet jaate hain...

Wo hamare nanhe kadmo ko sahara deti hai...
Hume jeene ki wajah deti hai..

Wo hume jeena sikhati hai...
Hamari zindagi ko raah dikhaati hai...

Jab ek bachha pehla lafz bolta hai
To wo "maa" hi hota hai...

Bachpan ki baaton ko log kitni aasani se bhool jaate hain...
Jawaani tak aate aate "maa" ko peeche chhod aate hain...
Nahi kar paate hum maa ke dard ko mehsoos..
Aur us se door ho jaate hain...

Use humare sahare ki zaroorat hoti hai...
Use humse milne ki tadap hoti hai...
Lekin nahi kar paate log uski ye khwahish bhi poori..

Aur "maa" phir se duniya mein akeli hoti hai...

"Maa" ko hai khuda ka darja haasil..
"Maa" ke bina nahi milta kisi ko saahil..

Hamari laakh galtiyon ke baad bhi uske hothon se dua hi nikalti hai..
Haan,ye ek "maa" hi kar sakti hai...

Dena "maa" ko khushi,hai uss khuda ki ibaadat...
Hamari zindagi hai sirf "maa" ki amaanat...

"Maa" ke bina ye duniya be-jaan hai...
Mera uss "maa" ko dil se salaam hai...


PYAAR HUA..IQRAAR NAHI...

(BY:FALAK)

*RUNNERS-UP*
Khushboo pyaar ki hawaaon mein ghul rahi hai...
Fizaaein bhi khushnuma ho rahi hai...
Har taraf hai pyaar ka mausam...
Iss dil mein bhi ajab si hulchul ho rahi hai...


Yeh thandi hawaaein aaj meri rooh ko chhoo rahi hain...
Mujh par anjaana jaadu kar rahi hain...
Sab kuch lag raha hai naya sa...
Lagta hai pyaar ki shuruwaat ho rahi hai...


Uski khushboo hai meri saanson mein...
Sirf wo hi wo hai meri baaton mein...
Mere dil-o-jaan mein basti hai wo..
Sirf uske hi nishaan hain meri raahon mein...


Uski baatein mere kaano(ears) mein goonjti hain..
Uski muskurahat mujhe jeene kaa maksad deti hain...
Uska dard mehsoos karta hoon main..
Uski aankhein har pal mujhse kuch kehti hain...


Usse hi hai meri saasein,usse hi meri zindagi..
Usse hi hai meri khushi,wo hi meri badagi...
Naa ho jo wo mere saath...
To bemaayne hai ye zindagi...


Uski nazron mein main khud ko paata hoon...
Uski jheel(lake) si aankhon mein main gum ho jaata hoon...
Uske bina adhoora hoon main...
Usse milkar main poora ho jaata hoon...


Hai mujhe usse mohabbat bepanaah...
Ab to uska hi hai har lamhaa..
Uske ishq mein mere maulaa..
Ho gaya hoon main FANA...


Uske dil mein bhi pyaar ki shama jal rahi hai...
Uski aankhein mujhe kuch ishaare de rahi hai...
Uske dil ko bhi ho gaya hai pyaar ka ehsaas...
Par na jane kyun zubaan kehne se darr rahi hai...

Phoolon ke saath unki khushboo hai..
Bhanwaro ke saath unki gunjan hai...
Chaand ke saath uski chaandni hai falak par...
Har taraf bas pyaar hi pyaar hai...
Lekin aaya hai ye waqt kaisa..
Ki mere pyaar ko uske iqraar ki darkaar hai...


Pyaar mujhko bhi hai...
Hai pyaar usko bhi...
Phir bhi na jaane kyon..
Iqraar se darte hain dono hi...
Gaa rahi hain dhadkane pyaar ka nagmaa...

Magar labo par aati nahi baat..
Ek-doosre ka izhaar sunne ke liye
Tadapte hain dono din-raat...

Nazron se karte hain ishaare...
Dono apne dil se hain haare...

Badal gayi hai ye duniya hamari...
Mohabbat hi manzil hai ab hamari..

Aaj to bas kehna hai yahi...
Pyaar hua magar iqraar nahi...

Kehta hai ye dil mera...
Aayega ek naya savera..
Aayega kal aisa bhi...
Jab pyaar bhi hoga aur iqraar bhi...


loads of love..

falak and aisha..

join in our celebration....
aisha will be giving treat to u all....😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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gift for u allšŸ˜ƒšŸ‘
keep writing poems!!😳
Edited by -skylark- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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congo to all da winners 😊
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something salty...







ab kuch meetha ho jaye...😊




i hope u guys like the treat...
enjoy ..
congo to all the other winners....🄳

thanx for ur wishes guys...šŸ¤—

loads of luv..aisha..
Edited by cuppycake990 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!!!!!! congratulations to sana, aisha sunita and falak!!!!
Edited by shamil - 16 years ago
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🄳I am proud of all of u .....šŸ¤—

Falak u for brilliant and touching poems in hindi ..šŸ‘.they touch ur hearts .....


Ayesha ur love for Arjun made u a winner in Life 2 šŸ‘( and yes for 2 of us Pak ke izat Rakh le šŸ˜†)

and
.Sunita . first of all thanks for telling us about this competitionšŸ˜› .... and u write poems as gr8ly as u write ur FF šŸ‘....


this is high five 2 all of us .... Love u all ...ā¤ļø


Edited by SanaSarwar - 16 years ago
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MJHTians all the way!! U guys write gr8 poems...i've told u already...shd write poetry books...u'll bcum famous!! Keep up the good wrk...keep writin such poems...love them!!

Thank u 4 the treat!!
šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤—




Edited by 371768 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok falak...posted the treat..
congo all..
n enjoy..

luv you..aisha..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ayesha itnee tasty pics hain .... Mujh ko seriously hunger attacks honay Lagay hain šŸ˜†...office may hoon šŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks fr treat dear!!

by god, aap sab kitney talented hai..mujhe toh complex hotah hai...u guys write such wonderful poems..FFs...mk siggys n avis...n all that..i wish i ws soo creative!

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