FF: It’s In His Kiss: My Family on Pg 129(08/07) - Page 98

First of all, a big sorry for not updating for so long, I was kinda busy and my laptop was not working but I somehow have managed to write this update and let me warn you this is my worst update ever. I am not at all happy with this update. So sorry for the long wait and crappy update.

Shiv takes Gauri's hand and walks out. He takes her to the middle of the garden, stops and turns to look at her. Seeing her tears he gently wipes it off. "Rudr..." without letting her complete Shiv pulls her into his arms and hugs her tight. The moment her face hit his chest, Gauri started crying out loudly. Shiv securely held her as he too gave into to his tears. Shiv cups her face in his palms and starts showering her with kisses. Gauri immediately held on to his wrist as she cherished his love and kisses. In the end, Shiv leaned down and took her lips in his and kissed her, a kiss filled with love, passion and promises.

"Shhhh" Shiv says as he gently shook his head at her wiping off her tears. "I'm sorry Rudr." Gauri hiccups. "Why are you saying sorry? I should be the one saying sorry for believing that you would leave me for money. I should be apologizing for accusing you and insulting you. I hurt you so much Gauri... I'm sorry. I didn't even let you speak when you tried telling me the truth. I'm so..." "No, Rudr." Gauri cuts him off "I hurt you a lot. I had promised you that I would always trust you over others after that Malika issue and I never kept my promise. It was not your fault, it was never your fault, the situation was such that you believed others, and you were angry with me and thought I was lying again. You don't have to say sorry." Gauri says as she wiped his tears off and gently kissed him on his lips. "Then marry me." Shiv says. Gauri looks at him in shock and then asks with fresh tears falling from her eyes "How can you forgive me Rudr? How can you forget what I did? I wrote jeeju's name as Sahasra's father, so you won't take her away from me. Though it was just a page and not the official document, I still did that to you and Sahasra. How can you forget that?" "You lost me, Gauri and you were scared to lose Sassy. You had no other way out, and you were helpless, Sassy was all you had. If I can't understand that, then what is the use of me loving you for all these years?" hearing Shiv say that Gauri starts crying even more, hugging him she says "I love you, Rudr. I have always loved you and I will always love you." "If you love me so much then why did you leave me and Sassy?" Shiv asks accusingly as he pushed Gauri away from him. "I would have come back." "When?" "The day I forgive myself, and feel that I deserve you two." Gauri says. "Don't ever say that again. Sassy and I can't live without you. You are everything to us, and we will be lost without you." Shiv tells her sincerely. "Even I can't live without you two." "Then just shut up and marry me." Shiv orders her. "Can't you ask me nice and properly?" Gauri asks pushing him angrily. "Come on, Gauri just say yes!" "NO!" Shiv immediately goes on his knees and says dramatically "Gauri Chatterjee you are the only person who can make me go on my knees and beg you to marry me, you are the only person who can make my heart skip a beat or make my heart gallop with just a smile, you are the only person who can make me fall in love every single day of my life, you are the only person who can complete me, you are the only person I'll ask this, will you marry me?" Gauri smiles at him through her tears and replies "yes." Getting back on his feet Shiv excitedly hugs her and declares "I love you."

Shiv and Gauri didn't know how long they stood like that lost in their world, finally happy. "Gauri..." Shiv gently called her. "Hmmm" "Will you ever forgive your father for what he did?" Gauri breaks out of the hug and looking at him determinedly she says "No." Shiv doesn't say anything, holding his hands Gauri asks him "Will you forgive mummyji for what she did?" "I don't know, Gauri." Shiv replied as he took her hand in his and slowly started walking. "When I think of what she did to me, I get so angry at her. But last night I had been thinking, whatever she did, she did it for you and how can I ever be angry with someone who think of your happiness?" Shiv asks her then turning to her he asks "Will you forgive her?" "She left you when you needed her the most." Gauri says angrily. Shiv doesn't say anything, he knew Gauri very well she will not be able to stay angry at his mother for a long time, he was sure Gauri will forgive his mother soon, and a part of him also believed that Gauri will forgive her father.... eventually.

"Sahasra has your eyes." Gauri tells Shiv with a smile. "Yes." Shiv says proudly. "Even in character she is just like you- loving, caring, loyal and possessive." "Isn't that your qualities too?" Shiv gently asks her, Gauri looks at him in shock and then what he had said sinks in she says amazed "I always tried to relate her to you, maybe it was my way of holding on to you never thought she could be like me in anything other than looks." Shiv smiles hearing that "but then, she can be a little too stubborn and naughty when she wants, and that is so not me." Gauri says teasingly. Shiv takes her hand and gently kisses it "Thank you so much for her." "You gave me her." Gauri tells him. "Gauri... will you tell me about your pregnancy, how you were then, what all you did, everything?" Gauri looks at him wondering where to start when Shiv says angrily "I should have been there with you, making sure you were happy instead..." Gauri cuts him off "You were always with me, Rudr. Whenever I needed you, I used to close my eyes and you were there." Gauri says as she stood on her toes and gently kissed him on his lips.

Shiv was sitting with his back resting against a tree and Gauri leaning on his chest as he listened to her talk. Shiv quietly listened to Gauri talk about her pregnancy, Sassy and what Ipshitha and Shashank did for her. Once she finished telling him everything, she asked him to tell her about what had happened with him, and he told her about how Milind and he had formed the company, the initial struggling days, the tension, then the joy when they made their first profit, how Milind and Prachi had been with him and finally their decision to come back to India. They sat together thinking about all that they had missed out on each other's life. Suddenly remembering something Gauri says "We have a problem." "What problem?" Shiv asks frowning. "Yesterday when I dropped Sahasra at your place we were walking near the pool and she seemed scared to walk next to the pool. I don't want her to have hydrophobia." Gauri says with a frown. "Aqua phobia baby," Shiv gently corrects her and Gauri rolls her eyes "and you don't worry I will take care of it." "Mummy! Papa!" Sassy loudly calls them as she ran towards them. She hugged Gauri happily and settled on her mother's lap. "Mummy, Papa and I had so much fun yesterday. You should have been there." "Now, Mummy will always be there because you, Mummy and I will be staying together from now on." "Really?" Sassy asks excited. "Yes." "Even Adi, Ippy mama and Shankypoo will stay with us?" "No. but they will be staying next to us, so you can meet them whenever you want." Gauri tells her. Sassy after thinking about it for a while agrees "okay".

As they sat talking there, Ipshitha loudly called out to them. They three quickly headed towards Ipshitha to see what she wanted and were shocked to note that Shashank, Ipshitha and Adi were standing with a couple of bags. "We are leaving this house." Ipshitha told Gauri, "I have packed all your things, I don't want to stay here a second longer. Let's go." Gauri nods her head and they leave.

Since Shiv's house in Kolkatta was sold off, they decided to stay in a hotel and head there. As Shiv was about to walk towards the reception, Shashank stops Shiv from behind. "Shiv, I know you are Sahasra's father, and I am sure you and Gauri might have decided to get married also, and I am assuming and hoping it is as soon as possible." "Yes. We have decided to have a temple marriage tomorrow." Shiv informs Shashank and Ipshitha. "Great." Shashank smiles, and then continues "I know there is no point in all this and it is really really late" and he rolls his eyes "but I want you to..." "You want me to?" Shiv asks confused. "Stay in a room of your own and not share one with Gauri before the wedding." Shashank says while Gauri blushes profusely Shiv looked shocked and kinda pissed. "Come on Shashank, we are getting married tomorrow." "Yeah I know, but let's just make sure we don't have anymore of these (pointing at Sassy) running around before you guys make it proper." "We have been staying away from each other for five years now." Shiv tries to reason with him while Gauri turns redder and redder. Shashank folds his hands at his chest and stubbornly glares at Shiv, and Shiv glares back at him. Finally Shiv decides to give in "Okay, you win." Shiv concedes I can always sneak into Gauri's room without him knowing.

Gauri was putting Sassy to sleep after dinner when someone started softly knocking on her door. She smiles shyly, it was Shiv. He had whispered to her at dinner that he was coming to their room at night. She rushes to the door and opens it. "Hey" Shiv greets her with a sexy smile and she smiles back "hey." "Can I come in?" Shiv asks as she was blocking his way, Gauri makes way for him and he quickly gets in and closes the door. "Who is it mummy?" Sassy asks loudly. "Who else?" Shiv replies. "SHIVY!!!" Sassy excitedly screams and gets up from her bed and runs to the door and sees Shiv walking towards her. She pounces on him and he quickly picks her up and starts throwing her up in the air making her laugh out loudly. "Jeeju's and di's room is right next to ours." Gauri reminds Shiv softly. Shiv quickly asks Sassy to reduce her volume, and was about to settle on the bed when they heard a loud knock on the door. "That could be jeeju!" Gauri tells Shiv. "Shit!" Shiv curses and putting Sassy down on the bed, he runs into the bathroom to hide. After Shiv closed the bathroom door, Gauri opens the door and sees Shashank standing there. "Jeeju? What happened? We were about to sleep." "Where is he?" Shashank asks. "Who?" Gauri asks innocently. "Shiv!" "What are you doing there?" Ipshitha asked as she walked towards Shashank with Adi in her arms. "Shiv is inside I heard Sahasra and him laughing." Shashank informs her. Ipshitha turns to look at Gauri and Gauri couldn't control her blush. "Ask him to come out, Gauri." Shashank tells Gauri. "He is not here." Gauri replies, Ipshitha snorts hearing that. "Move aside let me check." Shashank says and Gauri had no option but to give way. Shashank walks in and sees Sassy sitting on the bed looking at the bathroom door and no1 else was in the room. "See, I told you he is not here." "Who, mummy?" Sassy asks. "Rudr" Gauri replies hoping she wouldn't ask anymore questions. "Who is Rudr?" Sassy asks confused. "That would be your Papa." Shashank explains. "Why do you call him Rudr?" "That is also his name." Gauri explains and turning to Shashank she says "He is not here." "Mummy, did you forget? Papa is in the bathroom." Sassy says shaking her head at her mother's short memory, and gets down from the bed and goes to the bathroom and knocks the door "Papa, Shankypoo is calling you." Shashank couldn't help but chuckle while Gauri wanted to dig up a hole and hide there for the rest of her life. "PAPA!" Sassy calls again, and immediately Shiv opens the door and comes out "Flush is working now, Gauri. I don't think you will have anymore problems tonight." Shiv says then turns to Shashank and feigning surprise "What are you doing here? Her flush was not working and she called me to repair." "You were repairing the flush? How nice!" Shashank says sarcastically. "What was wrong with the flush?" Sassy asks confused. "I used it before you came." She says looking at her father. Shiv couldn't help but say "Damn it!" "Now I think you should..." and Shashank was cut off by his son "Ammit!" everyone turned to look at Adi in shock who was laughing excitedly, Shiv slowly turns to look at Adi's parents and Ipshitha looked like she wanted to cry while Shashank simply looked too shocked. "Adi started talking?" Sassy asks excitedly, then turning to Shashank accusingly she says "And you didn't tell me!" Shiv turns to look at Gauri who looked like she would burst out laughing any minute now, and asks "That didn't happen to be his first word, did it?" Gauri nods her head trying hard not to laugh seeing Shashank's expression. "Shit!" Shiv softly curses. "Eeeet!" Adi screams excitedly. Shiv turns to look at Shashank who looked ready to kill and says "I think I should hit bed. It is really late." and runs out from there.

As there was no time to shop, Gauri had worn one of her old saree for the wedding while Shiv wore a plain kurta. Milind and his family along with Ishaan and Garima, the only people who were invited for the wedding reached just in time at the temple. Shashank and Ipshitha did the Prachidaan while Sassy happily sat on her father's lap for the whole ritual. After the wedding was over, Milind goes towards Gauri and remorsefully says "I'm sorry, Gauri that I screamed at you that day and blackmailed you. I didn't know the whole truth." Gauri smiles at him and replies "You should have screamed at me more and told me what had happened then Shiv and I might have got together little earlier." Milind grins and replies "I can be a bloody fool at times." Gauri starts laughing hearing him and they hug, forgiving and forgetting the bad memories.

Shiv walked into the decorated hotel room and found Gauri standing in the balcony lost in her thoughts. He hugs her from behind and whispers into her ears "What are you thinking?" wrapping her arms over his she replies "Us." "Are you happy?" Shiv asks her. "Yes. Are you?" "Very." Gauri turns to him and smiles at him lovingly. "I have to give you something before I forget." Shiv says and walks towards the cupboard while Gauri looked on curiously. He comes back to her with a box and gives to her. Gauri opens it to find a diamond set and looks on confused. "You gave it to me for safe keeping." Shiv reminds her, "told me to give it to you after our marriage." "Oh my god!" Gauri says shocked, now she remembers Mummyji gifting her, and she had given it to Rudr that time as she felt the gift was too expensive. "And you kept this all this while?" Gauri asks shocked. "You told me to keep it safe." Shiv replies. Gauri hugs him and whispers "I love you Rudr." "I love you too Gauri." They stood like that for a while and that's when Shiv notices the empty bed and freaks out "Where is Sassy?" "Jeeju and di took her with them." when gives her a confused look, Gauri explains shyly "To give us privacy." Hearing that Shiv grins at her naughtily, Gauri quickly hugs him to hide her blush. Shiv kisses her on her temples and hugs her tight, then hesitantly asks "Do you mind if I bring her back?" breaking the hug, Gauri smiles at him lovingly and caressing his cheeks she tells him "I told jeeju that you would want her to stay here. But after what happened last night he didn't seem to believe me." Shiv chuckles remembering what happened the previous night. "Before they sleep why don't you go get her?" Gauri asks Shiv nods and goes out of the room and a few minutes later he was back with a sleeping Sassy.

Shiv gently puts her on the bed while Gauri went to change her saree. By the time Gauri came out, Shiv had settled down on the bed next to Sassy watching her sleep. Gauri gets on the bed and lies next to Sassy and watch Shiv watching their daughter sleep. "With her eyes closed, she looks just like you." Shiv whispers and bending down he gently kisses Sassy. Gauri keeps her hand on top on Shiv's which was resting on Sassy's stomach. Shiv looks at her and sees her watching him with love, he immediately picks up Sassy and without waking her up makes her lie on top of him and then scooting closer to Gauri he pulls her closer to him. Kissing her on her forehead, Shiv went to sleep and he slept through the night for the first time in five years hugging his family close to him.

Shiv woke up to hearing people lovingly cooing into his ears, he starts smiling recognizing the voices and slowly opens his eyes to see Sassy sitting on his torso and Gauri partially leaning on him. "Good morning, papa!" Sassy excitedly wishes him. Looks like they have been up for a while Shiv smiles, "good morning, Sassy." Suddenly he felt someone kissing him on the corner of his mouth, "Good morning husband." They hear a knock at the door, Gauri informs Shiv as she gets up "I ordered coffee for us and milk for Sahasra." And she walks towards the door. "Brush your teeth and come, Papa." Sassy instructs her father.

After fixing Shiv's coffee and giving Sassy her milk Gauri went to make a call to Shashank. Shashank had informed her that her packet has arrived and Gauri excitedly hung up the phone. She walked back to where Shiv and Sassy were sitting and found Sassy sitting on Shiv's lap and sipping his black coffee while her glass of milk was left untouched. "Sahasra drink your milk." "I like Shivy's coffee." Sassy replies as she continued to sip from Shiv's cup. Gauri turns to look at Shiv and he was cheekily grinning at her "I think you should just accept it, Gauri. We Kapoors' don't like milk." Sighing Gauri sits down, she might as well accept it. After Sassy and Shiv finished his coffee, Gauri gets up and walks towards Sassy "Come mummy will give you a bath." Shiv gets up holding Sassy, "No. Papa and Sassy are going to have their bath together." Hearing that Sassy gets really excited and Gauri smiles at her. "If mummy wants, mummy can join us." Shiv says giving sly looks at Gauri. "No need." Gauri quickly says when she sees Sassy was going to say something.

After Shiv and Sassy went to the bathroom, Gauri quickly went to Shashank's room to collect her envelope and came back to hear loud chattering and giggles from the bathroom. She walks in to see Shiv and Sassy in the tub splashing water at each other. Gauri seeing Shiv in his boxers starts slightly blushing though she tried reminding herself that she has seen him without that also and there was no need to blush. Suddenly she felt water splashes and realizes that Shiv and Sassy were splashing water at her, laughing she rushes to them and starts splashing water at them when she felt a hand at her waist and turns to look at Shiv who was trying to pull her into the water. She softly pushes him off laughing and moves away while he gave her an I-will-get-you look. By the time, both of them had finished with their bath Gauri was drenched. She takes Sassy out to the room to dress her up while Shiv took a proper bath.

Gauri was brushing Sassy's hair when she felt Shiv hug her from behind "I think I will die of wanting you." Shiv sensuously whispers into her ears. Gauri turns to look at him and takes in a deep breath seeing him in only a towel. "Do you think we could go into the bathroom for a while, you know for..." Shiv winks at her. Gauri gives him a seductive smile breaks out of the hug and walks towards the bathroom, seeing that Shiv starts smiling broadly and was about to follow her when she ran into the bathroom and closing the door starts laughing. Shiv starts smiling and says softly "When I finally get you into my arms, I am going to make up for all this." "Papa what is time?" "7:45."Shiv replies and taking the brush from the bed, he starts combing Sassy's hair. Once he finished combing her hair, Sassy quickly jumps off the bed and grabs the TV remote and switches it on. "What are you going to watch?" Shiv asks as he walked to the cupboard to get his clothes. "There is Tom & Jerry at 8. We will watch together okay?" "Okay sweetheart. I will just change my clothes and come." Shiv replies and walks to the sitting room to wear his clothes.

Ten minutes later, Gauri finished wiping her body and was about to take the bath robe when she realized that there was no bathrobe. That's when she remembered Sahasra playing with the bathrobe the night before, she hits her head now what was she going to do? She can't wear the clothes she just wore as it was drenched. She wraps the towel around her and starts to go out. She opens the door and sees Rudr and Sahasra on the bed. Hearing the door opening, Shiv turns to look and sees Gauri in her towel and his heart skips a beat. And then starts broadly smiling at her. And Gauri knew going out in her towel was a very bad idea. She goes back in and peeking out the door she calls out to Sassy "Sahasra, can you get Mummy's dress from the bag or get Mummy's bag please?" all the while looking at Shiv who was watching her hungrily. Sassy was about to get up when Shiv stops her "Sassy you watch TV, I will get it." And he gets up giving a meaningful smile to Gauri and walks towards her bag and quickly getting her clothes he walks towards the bathroom. "Give it." Gauri says putting her hand out, holding the clothes behind his body, Shiv slowly starts pushing the door with his body. "Rudr, stop it." Gauri whispers, he shakes his head keeps pushing the door and quickly opens it and getting in, he locks the door. Gauri starts moving back while Shiv after keeping her clothes on the rack right next to him and leaned on the door. "Leave, Rudr. Sahasra is right outside." Gauri begs. "She is outside not here." "Please Rudr just give me my clothes and leave." "Take it." Shiv says cheekily. Keeping an eye him, Gauri walks towards the rack and was about to take it when Shiv grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him. Gone was the smile and cheekiness, his face was filled with want and hunger. "Oh God, it's been so long Gauri." Shiv whispers passionately. "Too long, Shiv." Gauri whispers with equal passion. Shiv leans down and takes her lips in his and hungrily kisses her.

Shiv was about to remove Gauri's towel when Sassy banged on the door "Papa, Tom & Jerry is about to start, come out?" "Oh my God!" Shiv says desperately as he broke off the kiss. "Papa? What are you doing there?" "Coming Sassy." Shiv calls out. Gauri sighs. Shiv gently kisses her on her shoulders "I have to go." Gauri chuckles hearing his sad declaration, Shiv looks at her and frowns "I am starting to believe that we are Tom & Jerry characters. You are Jerry; I am Tom and Sassy being Spike always saving you from me." Gauri laughs hearing that, disappointed Shiv goes out.

Shiv and Sassy were watching Tom & Jerry when their phone started ringing. He picks it up. "Shiv, Shashank here." "Hey!" "We have decided to go to the amusement park today. Since Milind and his family are coming, there is place for only one more person, and we got to vote and we picked Sahasra." "I LOVE YOU BROTHER!" Shiv says excitedly. Shashank starts laughing "Just lie to Sahasra that you guys will come in another car and we will be back only after dinner so you guys have fun." "Thanx dude. I'm indebted to you." Shiv says, suddenly he hears Adi laughing on the other end and an excited "Ammit" Shiv quickly hangs up. By the time, Shiv hung up Gauri had come out of the bathroom. "Who was that?" "Shashank." And he tells Sassy about the outing and a few minutes later, Shashank and Ipshitha came with Rithwick (who had been missing Sassy like crazy) and they left with Sassy immediately.

Shiv looks the door after putting the Do No Disturb sign and walks back into the room to see Gauri holding an envelope. He was about to hug her when she thrust the envelope towards him. With a confused look he opens it and reads in shock. "You changed it?" Shiv asks shocked. "Sorry it took me so long." Gauri says regretfully. "Hey don't be." Shiv reassures, and his eyes starts filling with tears "Thank you." He says as he looked at Sassy's birth certificate and in the father's column it was filled Shiv Rudr Kapoor. "When did you get this done?" "The day I found out the truth, I asked jeeju to do it. He knew some people there and they did it without the usual procedures and all." Gauri explains. "And Sahasra S K stands for Sahasra Shiv Kapoor." "I used to think it was..." then he decides not to talk about all that, so shrugs "leave it." He turns to keep it safely. "I'm really sorry Rudr." "Enough. No more talks. I have had enough of your sorry and love declarations. Now instead of words show me with actions how much you love me." Shiv says and seeing her blush he picks her up and walks towards the bed.

Epilogue

One and a half years later

"Renaissance Kapoor!" Shiv excitedly says. "Howz that?" he turns to Gauri who was reading a book. "Or Anastasius Shiv Kapoor? Which one you like?" Shiv asks excitedly, as if he was not even talking Gauri turns the page and continues reading. Irritated Shiv snatches the book from her "Are you listening to me?" "I'll when you start giving me suggestions to name my son and not buildings." "Very funny! Come on, Gauri what is wrong with these names? They are so powerful. Hearing the name itself people will think aaah this boy is something." "Yes! Especially those school bullies who will think that this boy is something to pick on." Shiv glares at her. "We really don't have to find a name having similar meaning that of Sahasra's." Shiv was silent for a while then he says "How about Wulfric Rudr Kapoor? We can call him Wolf." For a moment Gauri looked tempted to consider the name then shrugs "Naah!" Pissed Shiv gets up and walks off. Gauri smiles seeing him grumpy. Life has been heaven ever since they got married. Immediately after they got married, Gauri wanted to have a baby so Rudr could experience all that he had missed out on Sahasra, but then Rudr didn't want to have another baby fast as he wanted to make up for all the lost time with Sassy. After a year of Gauri's nagging he had finally given in, and now she was in her seventh month of pregnancy and they were going to have a boy this time. When Shiv had found out that Ipshitha during her internship had worked in the gynecology department and was good in reading the baby's sex had taken her with them for Gauri's check up and she had informed them that it was a boy, and ever since Shiv was trying to find THE perfect name for their baby. She felt someone licking her toes and smiles seeing Oscar and Omega at her feet. She had been heart broken when Rudr had found out after a year long search that Oscar and Omega had died, but then Rudr had somehow managed to track down a person who had one of their baby's grandchildren, and from him he bought two pups who had a striking resemblance to Oscar and Omega and gifted it to her on her last birthday.

Life had changed for the better for all of them. They all had well settled into their new life without a hitch. Sahasra, Rudr and her had well settled into their family while Ipshitha, Shashank and Adi also well settled in Mumbai. Ever since Adi has been the toddler he seemed to idolize Shiv, and even today he tended to imitate every single thing Shiv did, much to Rudr's delight and Shashank's horror. The only sad moment in her life was when her father passed away, it had taken a long time but she and her sister had eventually made peace with their father and two weeks after that he had quietly passed away in his sleep.

Shiv was thinking of a name for his baby when his concentration was broken with loud laughter, he turned to look at that sound and found his daughter playing freely near the pool with Tiger. "Rudr, Gauri and Sahasra come inside, it is getting cold out there." Nikhila called out to them. Shiv turned to look at his mother and smiles at her, and rushed to Gauri's side to help her get up from the swinging. Deja vu. This has happened before or had he dreamt of this before? Shiv wondered as he helped Gauri walk back inside. "So did you get any new names?" Gauri teased. "Thinking." Shiv replies. As he was stepping inside the house he suddenly screams "Shataka Kapoor!"

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Hasn't proof read it, so please forgive the mistakes. Thank you so much guys for encouraging me to write this fanfic, and please do leave your comments😃

Kuku

Originally posted by: pia.

hey i am sure u will be able to make it very interesting and loving u always do wit ur ff's so don't worry about that just make it long lol and interesting and i am willing to wait lol
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Originally posted by: xx-ReenO-xx

not 1 tiny mistake xcept fr know ko u rote now hehe LOL... sorry yaar😆

awesum part..... uff i was waitingg fr dis part since da beginningggggggggg lolzzzzz i hope it was upto ur expectations😳

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updt nxt part asap nd yhhh plzz make it cuteeeee fr SG!!!!

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Originally posted by: pria4ever

Guruji👍🏼....u always make my weekends so perfect with ur FF'soh my god!😳😳😳...luved the update...Shiv knows the truth👏...enjoyed his convo his mom...Alok's truth😡...now i'm just waiting for Shiv-gauri confrontation n i'm sure their convo will be as exciting it didn;t come out all tht well😭....😳...awaiting ur updates....Once again...Gr8 job👏..thank you so much yaar... updated😃

Pria

Originally posted by: premsONLYmine

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Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

Aww yaar, I havent been able to comment in here for a while! Sowwiee! :-D no probs hun😃

This part was really good! thank you Sooo much going on! Im soo glad to see it moving further! My favourite part, besides shiv finding out, is when nikhila calls out to him as Rudr, and he says, "Don't call me that, my mother used to call me that" uff, that was soo cold! But so totally deserved! i am so glad u liked tht part... i felt it was one of the few emotional parts in my fics😳😆 I think even though nikhila did this for Gauri, she was very selfish! she was not really selfish just looking out for gauri, then later she was scared to lose Shiv..hmm yeah in a way she was😃And I cannot understand Alokh! Ughh! He is the WORST father! I lovee when shiv feels that its his right to step in when Gauri says that she does have a daughter, and he says, "Yet we don't understand you Mr. Chaterjee" Gosh, uve given shiv some mighty good dialogues! thank you so much hun... so glad u liked his dialogues😃😃😃I love that even in this time, when he is soo sad, he's still so cocky! Haha! For lack of a better word that is :-DLMAO!

I love Ramukaka! He is sooo adorable! I felt so bad for him..Especially when you wrote that he walked out of the room like a defeated man! Poor guy, its no fault of his own!yeah he is a nice guy and wanted the best for gauri but unfortunately his loyalty was towards Alok more! Im so happy he kept the letters! They only confirmed Gauri's belief that Shiv always loved her!yeah *sigh* no idea why i am feeling emotional😕

And awwww poor sassy, "They'll inject me" how cute! And so very innocent! I want to see more of sassy in the next parts! We've missed her much! hehehehe u will see how innocent Sassy can be in the next update😉😆😆 And I cant wait for their conversation! Its going to be lovely, no doubt! i am sorry yaar...the convo sucked big time.... i cudn't just get it ri8😭 I love the whole story line to ur FFthank you hun... this was inspired from Paradise by Judith McNaught,. one of my fav books😃..im chooo sad its getting over soon! I honestly hope ull be back writing something'uff, which reminds me, ive left my own readers hanging! kick ur ass and update girlie!😡😆😆Haha, I need to get to that too! But lovely part hun! thank you😃 I loved shiv in this whole entire part! U could totally see the pain and anxiety he is going thru after finding out the truth! And Gauri's pain was almost tangible throughout that whole scene with ramukaka and throwing the lamp! LOVELY! thank you so much hun... i am so so glad tht i cud bring across both their pains 😃And sooo sowiiee for not commenting on ur other part! Got a teeenny lil busy! no probs hun...glad u read and commented😃

Cant wait for ur next part!finally updated😃

-AnnJan-

P.S - have we ever told u that we LOVE ur Bharat Chawda siggie? gosh, he looks exceptionally good in EACH one of those pics! hehehe! :-D hehehe no u haven't.... thanx yaar... i found these pics on the net, i think it was a part of his portfolio as it had his numbers too😉

Originally posted by: soniayk6

kuku sorry yaar .got problem with internet so couldn't comment.iam really sorry.no probs hun😃 but yaar u rocked it again.i was waiting this part since ages i.e shivgauri knowing the truth about one another.its fantastic n fabulous part.keep up the great work girl.as usual u rocked it again 👏.

omg..thank you so so much😳

i just loved it.i felt sad with the part where shiv tells his mom to stay away 4rm his family.i think it was bit toooo harsh.poor women she did it all 4r gauri's happiness .because of alok she facing the hatred 4rm her loved ones.i feel sorry 4r her.whatever she did is not gud but still she isn't completely at the fault.what say yaar. yeah... i always felt tht she was helpless at tht time, and Shiv and Gauri will understand it soon, and she will be back in the family😃 n coming to alok oh godddddddd he such a stupid person not even regretting what he has done n still trying to conceal his sin.he is soooooooo🤢. yeah he is just @$#@$#$@

n the ending is simply rocking yaar. thank you😃iam just dieing to read ur next update now.i just hope u don't expect too much 'coz my next update sucks😭 take ur own time n come back with a rocking update kuku.once again u r rocking with ur fabulous work👏.
thank you so so much hun😃