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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hii alll!!

i write poems once in a while , and as a tradition i post them here 😊 i hope old readers dnt mind! 😆

i wrote this poem for my love and just felt like sharing it , and plz also tell me if she ll like it cz she is mad at me 😭



u may still be a dream
but a dream that's so long
u may still be a thought
but a thought to i belong

u are someone
who complete me
and any day without u
ohh just depletes me

u are a meaning of being something
u are the desire of being someone
u may have left me alone
but u ll remain my only one

u came to my life
at the time all doors were closed
u brought me sunshine
at the time even sun was blocked

ur smiles made me smile
gave me strength to cover many miles
u were that light
made me win over all plight


now that u are gone
i feel like standing
waiting for you
through dusk and through dawn

i wish i cud have a day with u
even if just before i die
though u say u 've turned stone
i know it's wrong coz u nt gud at lie


u gave me the reaon to live
u made me a better man
widout u there wasn't even me
widout u i was my own enemy

u were too good a life
for me to believe wasn't a dream
u are my worshiped wife
u didn't fully know it so seem

ur words make me still smile
ur lil fights make me laugh
ur style is so unique
ur anger for me getting lil cough

ur words they meant so more
i don't even know how much
that time was so good
can't even think to forget it as such

i don't know if cud ever say
and i don't know if there'll be a way
to express what i have felt
or to have those stones melt


uuuuuuuu brought me this life
n uuuuuu will remain my love
uuuuu are my only one
and uuuu will always be my love
.........will always be my love
.....will my always be my love
...will always be my only love my only love


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Posted: 16 years ago
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omgosh that's reallyy good! (:
she'll lovee iiitt!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^ Totally agree.. Wonderful && Heart felt;
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omygoshh..tht was soo cuteee..she'll lovee it for suree..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank u all 😊

but abhi tak meri himmat nahi hui use yeh send karne kee ,😔

not that i m waiting for voice like 'if u sent it she will come' !! 😳 but idk how she ll react 😕

Interestingly ,in constrast to the great dialogue of 'field of dreams' above,even her name starts with 'Jo' but she isn't shoeless, infact has a large collection of heels ..😆

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