new FF Truth,lies and love updt 7.7.09,ch 4-pg 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi everyone.i am new to this forum.

and i really wanted to start an ff.this ff starts from when heer left prem at the station.please do read and comment.do tell me if you want me to continue

FF-TRUTH,LIES AND LOVE

chapter 1

Prem couldn't believe it. His Heer had just left him. If he had had his way then he would have followed her. But she had prevented him from doing so by questioning his respect for her, by telling him that if he had even an ounce of respect for her he was not to follow or try to stop her from leaving. And now he was all alone. Alone, incomplete, practically nothing without her. All that was left behind were memories of her and the payal which was a symbol of their eternal love for each other.



JUNEJA HOUSE
Ashlesha had just returned to the house from kasauli. She was pleased with herself; after all she had achieved what she had wanted. She was sure that Heer as much as she loved prem would never forgive prem for the mistake both of them thought he had made. Her love for Prem however deep-rooted could never overshadow her self-respect. The plan had been perfect she thought.
Meanwhile gayatri was sitting on the sofa in the drawing room equally pleased .although her original plan had failed and Prem had got to know that Heer had not betrayed him she had nevertheless got what she had wanted. But even though she was happy, a tiny part of her heart knew Prem would not be able to live without Heer. And as much as she might have hated Heer, she loved her son. But she would get her son married again she thought. Just then Ashlesha entered there room. Ashlesha had long since gauged gayatri's growing animosity towards Heer and knew that gayatri was equally happy that Heer had left the house. On seeing ashlesha gayatri spoke "its really sad to see prem and heers relationship breaking like this. But somethings can't be helped"
Ahlesha replied with a wry smile on her face "you don't need to pretend before me. I know everything.iknow how you hated heer and that the whole sameer fiasco was planned by you to create misunderstandings between Prem and Heer." She continued seeing the worried look on gayatri's face "but you don't need to worry. I won't tell anyone. Even I wanted the same thing as you did. Infact nothing happened last night between prem and me. Prem was sleeping the whole night. He dint even touch me nor did he look at me. That guy is hopelessly in love with heer. He can never even think of another woman. Even though he thought that Heer had betrayed his trust he was muttering her name the whole night. But I made him believe that that he had slept with me and had cheated on heer."
With a heavy heart Prem entered the house. This house would never feel the same to him again without his heer .He heard his mother talking to someone in the drawing room and quickly made his way there as he needed comfort from his mother right now.
Standing on the doorway leading to the drawing room prem heard the entire conversation taking place between his mother and ashlesha. Never had he imagined that something like this was possible. When heer had told him about sameer he had simply thought that sameer was just some fraud trying to get money from heer by making some false stories. But now hearing that the whole thing was a setup by his mother and that even ashlesha had made him believe that he had committed a mistake an unknown feeling rendered him immobile.it was a mixture of fury, relief, devastation. Fury because of what ashlesha and his mother had done , relief that he had not betrayed heers trust, devastation because his mother whom he had idolized had done this to him. But now something needed to be done he was torn between wanting to confront his mother and going to find her but decided on the latter. He needed her. Needed to tell her, reassure her of his love, he couldn't risk losing her. He turned away from the room and drove to the station quickly praying to god that he would find her.

hope you all liked it😊

chapter 1-pg 1

chapter 2-pg 1

chapter 3-pg3

chapter 4-pg6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow i simply luved the first part...It was very well written...Good that prem got to knw abt g3 n ash...It was an awesome part..*claps*
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Btw do continue...Wud luv to read the next parts...Cant wait...
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thank u so much it means a lo
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nice start. plz continue soon.
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thank u so much .i will post the second part very soon...
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waitinggggggg for next part asap.
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hey guys heres the second part plz doo comment it really encourages me.

chapter 2

He turned away from the room and drove to the station quickly praying to god that he would find her.

His heart was beating rapidly. What if her train had already left? If that was the case he could always catch the next train to ambala but the fact was that he could now not bear even a moment's separation from her. Especially now that he had come to know that he had not betrayed her trust. The right pocket of his coat felt heavy and he realized that he still had the payal with him .Good he thought. This time when he adorned her foot with the payal it would be forever. When he arrived on the platform he was relieved to note that the train to ambala was still there. He frantically searched the platform but there was no trace of her. The train for ambala was leaving in 6 minutes. He had to be quick.




INSIDE THE TRAIN

Tears had not stopped flowing from her eyes since the time prem had confessed to having slept with ashlesha. Her Prem had done this to her. She had forgiven him for questioning her chastity,suspecting her and rajveer. She had even forgiven him for creating a scene in the restaurant. But she could never ever forgive him for this. She had to start her life afresh now without prem and his memories. Just then a small girl of about 10 years came to the window requesting her to buy gajras to put in her hair.this caused a stream of fresh tears to flow from her eyes as memories came flooding back to her. She began to reminisce the time when when she, prem and meher had been going to ajmer sharif and a similar girl had requested Prem to buy a gajra saying "memsaab(heer) ke baalon mein achha lagega".and how Prem ahd obliged the little girl on hearing this. He had even helped put the gajra on her(heer's) hair. A little movement beside her brought her back to the present. A man sitting beside her was buying a gajra from the girl.heer did not look at the man's face as she dint want to show her tears to strangers. She kept fiddling with her hand bag trying to take out some money to buy a bottle of water. Suddenly she felt a hand on her head and realized with panic that the man beside her was trying to put the gajra on her hair. She turned around and was just about to shout at the person when she realized with shock that it was Prem. Her Prem. No not hers anymore.

A sudden fury gripped her she shouted at him "so now I see that you don't even respect me leave alone loving me. And how dare you touch me. Or did you think I was ashlesha. go home and leave me alone. ashlesha must be waiting for you at home and you will also be eager to spend another night with her.". this was too much for Prem .the dam of his patience had broken. He caught hold of her hand in anger with one of his hands while the other hand still clutched the gajra. Ignoring her protests he dragged her out of the train. His face was contorted with fury at what she had just said. When on the platform he grabbed her arm forcefully ,his nails biting into her skin and replied-"ya you are right I am really eager to spend another night .very very eager . But not with her,with you. Did you get that. I want to spend all my nights with you. You are mine and now listen I will explain everythi………….."

By now heers anger was uncontrollable-"what do you yhink of yourself Mr. Prem Juneja.you think I am some bloody possession of yours.legally I still may be your wife but you have no right over me okay and…."

Before heer could even complete her sentence Prem pressed his hand over her mouth and twisted her arm behind her back .beside them the train to ambala was leaving the platform

.hope u guys like it.plz plz do comment.it means a lot
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awesomeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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great part. plz update next part soon

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