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Sneh Jiwan Prasher

@Sneh-Jiwan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: urooj92

yaar ur rite, im also new to this forum but kisi ne welcum tak nahi kiya 😔

~ Welcome Yaar Maliha ~

Aap Aye Bahar Ayi !!

Na Jaana Ab Hume Chood Kar !!

Na jaana Ab Yeh Dil Tood Kar !!

Atay Rehana Baar baar Tum !!

Rah Dekhege Ab Subha Sham Hum !! 🤗

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Sneh Jiwan Prasher

@Sneh-Jiwan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: urooj92
wow sneh jiwan kya baat hai..
👏👏

Aap Ke Liye Yeh Araz Kiya hai Urooj Aye Dost Meri !!

Wada Na Karo Agar Tum Nibha Na Sako,
Chaho Na Usko Jise Tum Pa Na Sako,
Dost To Duniya Me Bahot Hote Hai,
Par Ek Khas Rakho Jiske Bina Tum Muskura Na Sako !!

lo Yeh shairy ab aap ke naam ho gayi !! Maf karna namo mai galti hogayi

Edited by Sneh-Jiwan - 16 years ago

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dont have one :P

@..imperfect..

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Sneh-Jiwan

~ Welcome Yaar Maliha ~

Aap Aye Bahar Ayi !!

Na Jaana Ab Hume Chood Kar !!

Na jaana Ab Yeh Dil Tood Kar !!

Atay Rehana Baar baar Tum !!

Rah Dekhege Ab Subha Sham Hum !! 🤗

ye aapne mujhe welcum kiya ya maliha ko..?

Edited by urooj92 - 16 years ago

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dont have one :P

@..imperfect..

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Sneh-Jiwan

Aap Ke Liye Yeh Araz Kiya hai Maliha Aye Dost Meri !!

Wada Na Karo Agar Tum Nibha Na Sako,
Chaho Na Usko Jise Tum Pa Na Sako,
Dost To Duniya Me Bahot Hote Hai,
Par Ek Khas Rakho Jiske Bina Tum Muskura Na Sako !!

comment to mene ki lekin shair to aapne maliha ji ke naam kar dala 😛

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dont have one :P

@..imperfect..

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

@ sneh jiwan: thanku ji 😳

did u write it urself?? itz really nice..

urooj

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Sneh Jiwan Prasher

@Sneh-Jiwan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: urooj92
@ sneh jiwan: thanku ji 😳
did u write it urself?? itz really nice..

urooj

My dearest friend Urooj thanks for your very nice comments !! Yes I have written this myself for you thats why I mentioned that I will be writing more shairy for you !! I am a shaiyar and sometimes do say few words in mehfils and when around friends !!

This is for you !!

Dil main ek dard chupaye baithey hai !

Tanha hain hum phir bhi muskuraiye jaithey hai !!

Koi sune ley agar humare dil ke rone ki awaz !

Khud apna hi muskurana bhul sakatey hai !!

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dont have one :P

@..imperfect..

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

thanku so much , aap ke saare shair bohat ache hain 👏👏

keep up the good work

u should create one topic which has only ur shayri

urooj

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Sneh Jiwan Prasher

@Sneh-Jiwan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: urooj92
thanku so much , aap ke saare shair bohat ache hain 👏👏
keep up the good work

u should create one topic which has only ur shayri

urooj

Dear friend urooj thanks for your nice comments and liking of my shairy !!

Here is another one for you !!

Ek aah dil sey nikali

socha unhey bhula baithey hai

yeh dil ka jootha beham tha

isi liya yooh tanha chup baithey hai !!