My Suggestion-😊
In the college M asks N to stay back for few hours after the college!!....N agrees( the reason can be any,but she is unaware of the real reason).....when every one has gone....M asks N to wait in a classroom.....Chinu was also about to go,but M asks Chinu to prepare some very nice burgers and coffee for 2 ppl...M asks chinu to decorate the plate quite beautifully.....But he doesn't tell Chinu why he is asking for him to do all this....After that Chinu too leaves....now only the peon is there in the college and as usual he is outside(at the gate....so don't know what all is going on inside)😉....N gets tired of waiting for M and starts wondering where has he vanished......then just as she was about to stand up and go in search of him,Mayu comes....M has a sly smile on his face.....
N asks him that where he was and why is he smiling?.....M comes close to N....N gets a lil uncomfortable......M tells her that he has something to offer her....she looks at him,still shyly,and stares at him with a questionable look!.....M then comes close to her,whispers in her ear "pehle canteen mein chalo" and then holds her hand.....he then starts taking N to the canteen as N was a lil shocked!.....There she sees that on a beautifully dressed table, a beautifully arranged eatables are kept....in b/w them is kept a rose pot.....she looks at M astonishingly!.....M smiles back at her!.....She gives a questionable look to him as if asking that what all is this?....then M tells her "Wo maine kisse film mein dekha tha ki Raj Simran ko D..D....Date pe le jata hai(he stammers deliberately so as to make Nupz excited to know as to what he is going to say).....aur tumhara Raj toh mai hoo na.....toh maine socha ki kyun na mai bhi apne Simran ko(before saying further sentences he first comes close to Nupz and takes her hand in his own)...Date par le jayun(he speaks these words at low voice...close to her ear)....".......N blushes a lil and then looks at M with the corner of her eyes....M smiles slightly looking at N's blushing!......then he asks N to have a seat....both sit down and then they eating😳......but in b/w all these cute sc. keep happening b/w them,like M removes sauce(if there is one) from N's lips as she is unknown of it....both feed each other with a spoon(like in DDLJ)....they keep holding hand in b/w the eating.....and all such cute scenes!......
After this eating date is over, N says "thanks Mayank" in a low voice...."Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum Raj ki hi tarah romantic bhi ho"....then she smiles slightly.....M too smiles.....then he again comes close to N and tells her that "Par abhi hamare date khatm nahin hue hai.....abhi toh tumne apne asle Raj ko dekha hi nahi hai".....N agian gets surprised and also smiles....she then says "Matlab?".....M then takes her hand in his own and takes her to the music room......he then plays a romantic dancing song(i wish it to be "Bahon ke darmiyan"...but it is creatives choice...but plz it should be a romantic dancing number).....he then bends on his knees and asks for nupz hand....Nupz is surprised to see such a gesture of her Padako bf and so she smiles in astonishment!....then she gives her hand in his and M draws her close to him.....Nupz blushes and so she keeps her eyes low.....then both have a close dance on the song.....(i really want the dance to be a lil passionate and romantic...coz this is the only part in their date where u guys can show passion and romance...and acc.. to me romance is a must in a date😳).....after they have danced for some time,the dance started becoming a lil passionate,so N starts walking away from M....but M tries to draw her back....N feels a lil uncomfortable.so she says M "M shayad ab hamien chalna chahiye".....M looks at N surprised as to why she is saying so,but then he understands that N is not feeling comfortable this way so he lets her go....After then both come out from the room and start moving towrds the gate of college.....While they are walking, N holds M finger...M looks at him(but both keep on walking)...N then slightly looks at M with the side of her eye.....She then says softly "Mayank i m sorry vo dance ke time par main yu chale gayi...vo.."...But M cuts in b/w..M says "Nupur...main samjhta hoon....balki I m sorry...main kuch zyada hi romantic ho gaya tha shayad"..then he winks at her!.....N blushes....she then says "Nahin M...tumhare koi galti nahi hai...vo mai hi..."....M again cuts "N chalo ham yeh maan lete hain ki dono ki hi thodi thodi galti thi....warna ham aise hi pura time spend kar denge😆"....Both then laugh slightly....Then N says "Par M thnx a lot....main yeh date aur yeh din kabhi nahi bhool payungi😳!".....M smiles back😳....After that they reach the door and then get prepared to go.....as soon as M was about to go,N calls him from back....he turns....N then comes close to him.....he was surprised as to why N is coming to him....she then says "M mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai"...M brings his face close to her.....she pretends as if she is about to say something in his ear,but just then,she kisses his cheek and quickly draws away from him....M is surprised but very happy....as she was about to run away,M holds her hand and draws her close to him....he pretends as if he too is going to kiss her...but he says "Good Night Nupur...and i love u..." in her ear and then leaves her..... N blushes and smiles and reciproctaes the same sentence.....after that they say "bye" and leave.....😊
Edited by krishmjht - 16 years ago