PremHeer || Goodbye To You (a oneshot) - Page 2

Originally posted by: sweetness4eva

Wow, that was superb...Prem realizing that what it feels like to have lost everything, was awesome!!! Aw, thank you!

I love your oneshots!!
They make me emotional:) That is so sweet! Thank you!

Very nicely done!! Thank you for writing this!!! Thank you for the compliments, and for commenting!

Originally posted by: noneeM

Goodness me A! Goodness Goodness me! Glorious! Absolutely Glorious!

My Spot! Be back....

Love:-Nonee

A! That was heart-rending, gut-wrenching and utterly tragic.... Is that a good thing? *bites lip*

The smile's been wiped from my face as I write, a poignant feeling taking over my fingers, May two soulmates never ever have to go through such anguish, such pain, such soul shattering...Oh! A! This is so so sad..... Sorry? If it helps, MHT will not end like this. Ever. 😃

I can't begin to think of the trauma Heer has been through...and will be in for the rest of her life....loving Prem, hating him for putting her through so much torture, loving him still inspite of everything and being unable to come to terms with that...A! You've woven magic with the pain you've woven into this one shot! Aw, I love the way you've summarised what I was trying to express! And thank you! *hugs*

And Prem! I really really don't want to be in his shoes...ever....How is he going to survive this? How? How? He won't be able to survive this A! I can feel the anguish, the shattering of his heart, his life....Oh! The brilliance of your writing.... Yeah, I don't think he would. I mean, his heart would keep beating (because he knows what his dying would do to Heer) but he wouldn't really be living, know what I mean? Thanks N! Your comments make me smile! 😃

'This is what it felt like when your world ended!' A!......I'm taking this sentence with me.... Go right ahead!

Big hug:) Back atcha!
Love:-Nonee

Originally posted by: ash08

Radz,

Beautiful!! 👏Thank you Ash!
Very nicely written. I could feel the pain that they both are going through. Thanks. Glad you liked it. 😃

Love, Love you too.
Ash

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

that was really great! good to see some sense in prem finally! ..realising what a big mistake he made in blamin heer and beleiving gayatri mum...thanks alot for posting this!

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😊

*edited*

VERY VERY Tragic...but now that I live for that kinda stuff...LOVED IT!👏 The emotions you were 'playing' with were sooo well written out...Prem...hmmm I kinda wanted to give him a hug at the end, only because for once his 'charm' didn't win her over, and there was nothing he could do about it! 😳 That part made it good though because ultimately his character deserves that.... Shabz really has brainwashed all of us na? 😆 Thanks Meera! Coming from you, it means a lot!

Can't wait for more! 😃

Love you, love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

YOU WROTE TRAGIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BLAME YOU! 😆

Thanks. 😆 That was in N's words "gut wrenching" I LOVED IT! The sheer emotion, wanted me to tip my hair out. *sigh* I love that feeling. Really well written, and woah Heer, go wash your mouth with soap. :) Thank you! And OMG, thanks for reminding me to edit that! 😆 I censored it, like I should have done earlier. 😆

--shabz

Originally posted by: munam_13

Radz... back to action... wow!!! I loved this one... Though I can never bring myself to write about their separation, but you guys write it so beautifully that I love reading them... Priyo! *hugs* Thank you! 😳 I think if you tried, you'd write it beautifully. You have such a way with words. 😃

I loved the angry flared Heer, The turmoil and the war shes going through of rejecting him yet loving him to the core was so visible and I loved Prem's broken state, he knew all though he's wrong and did not try to defend himself. I loved it a lot hun, good work Aw, thank you! I was worried that wouldn't play out so well. But I'm so glad you liked it! Means a lot. *hug*