hi everyone......guys i'm a kind of "silent reader" and don't make many posts.....i love reading ffs and oneshots....this is my first attempt in writing any oneshot....so plz bear with me n plzzzz do tell me how it is...criticisms are always welcomed...it will help me improve.....
Introduction
well this is basically a cute scene between mayur and mayu's mom which i want to see in the show(but if not possible then also its ok).....well i've presented it in the form of oneshot i hope u like it guys...
sweet moments-(mayur oneshot)
(if u remember correctly there was once a garden shown in front of mayu's house with some chairs and table....well my scene is set over there....).
mayu, in white shirt n blue jeans, is sitting on the couch in his garden n nupur, in pink n white chudidaar, is lying beside him with her head in his lap and legs stretched out....mayu's fingers are playing with nupur's open hair....
nupur half blushing and half smiling says-
N: mayu ek baat poochon??
M: haan poocho na...
N: tum ye mujhse pyaar...mera matlab k..k..kabse...kab hua tumko iska ehsaas??
Mayu stopped smiling and the inquisitive look on his face changed to a look like he was memorizing something...
M: mujhe khud nahi pata chala ....par haan jab hum log ahemdabad gaye the na tabhi se mujhe kuch alag alag sa lag raha tha...shayad...
Nupur stops him in b/w-
N: par mayank aisa kaise ho sakta hai....tab to hum...nahi TUM mujhse kitana ladte the...aur wapas ane ke baad bhi to....acchha to tum mujhse apni feelings chupa rahe the itane dino se????
M: haan!!
N: par kyun??
M: mujhe darr tha ki agar tumhare dil mein aisa kuch nahi hai to tum bura maan ke mujhse door chali jaayogi!! aur main apni best frnd ko khona nahi chahta tha!!!
Mayu's face became a bit sad as if he was about to cry...
Nupur becoming emptional...held mayu's hand tightly and they both started to talk through their eyes...nupur trying to convey that she would always be with him and will never leave him alone....
they both were lost in each others' eyes when suddenly there is a coughing sound from behind....they both come back to senses.....mayank turns back to see his mom standing there with a broad smile on her face(she had actually walked over to the place calling out mayank's name and had seen both of them lost in each other...had stood there for a while but then decided to tease them...so started coughing fakely)....
mayank on seeing his mom gets immediately nervous n embarrased-
M: maa??tum??
nupur on listening "maa" suddenly gets up from his lap...highly embarrased...red with blush....
mom comes close to them and keeps observing them with a smile....
nupur feeling very uneasy avoids looking at her....again n again she touches her hair n sets them right...n again n again fixes her suit...rolls her dupatta's corner on her finger n stares the ground.....
mayank also avoids looking at her n looks here n there...joining both his hands into a fist and pressing them tight....but somehow he steals a glance at his mom n sees that she's smiling like anything...
M: maa tum aise kyun dekh rahi ho?? aur aise hans kyun rahi ho???
(MM=mayank's mom)
mom says with a sarcastic smile..
MM: kuch nahi beta...maine kuch nahi dekha!!!
she stares at nupur n realizes that she was uneasy....
M: maa!! kya nahi dekha?? aisa kuch nahi ho raha tha...ki...
MM: are tu chod mayu!!(gives him a grin)...nupur beta.......
N: j..j..ji ji aunty!!
MM: beta main ye poochne aayi thi ki tum kuch thanda logi ki garam...
N: kuch nahi aunty...main bas jaa rahi hoon!!
MM: arre aise kaise jaa rahi ho...abhi to aayi ho...shaayad...batao kya logi....thanda ya garam??
N: aunty garam!!
MM: acchha chai ya coffee??
N: coffee..
MM: black coffee ya doodh waali??
M: maa kyun pareshaan kar rahi ho meri nup....mera matlab hai nupur ko???
Nupur again stares the ground...
MM: arre waa!! acchha baaba theek hai main abhi coffee leke aati hoon...tab tak...u both continue!!!
she says with a grin....n turns to go...
M: maa!!!
she turns back.....
MM: haan beta..
mayank suddenly hugs her tightly....
M: maa mujhe tumhe kuch bataana hai....
Nupur realizes that mayank is going to tell everything to her...she thinks that she won't be able to control the situation....she didn't know how to handle it...as it is she was so embarrased at being caught like that by his mom....n mayank telling everything then would make her all the more nervous....
so she pulls mayank by the sleeves and whispers in his ears...
N: mayank plzz....jab main chali jaaon tab bataana...plzzz...
his mom overhears her and says...
MM: nahi beta!!! uski zaroorat nahi hai!!! mujhe sab pata hai...
M&N(together): kya pata hai???
MM: wahi jo tum bataana chahte ho....beta main bohot kush hoon...main jaanti thi ki yeh din zaroor aayega par kab aayega ye dekhna chahti thi...
Nupur starts blushing n stares the ground while rolling her dupatta on her fingers...n mayank
looks at his mom and smiles a convincing smile!!!
MM: mera beta aaj itana bada ho gaya!! main tum dono ke liye bohot khush hoon beta!!!
both hug her....
MM: arre main abhi coffee leke aati hoon....aur phir sabko mithai bhi to baantani hai....
she goes....mayu n nups sit down on the couch again....looking n smiling at each other...
Nupur also rests her head on his shoulder....mayank holds up nupur's palm tightly into a fist and kisses her hands and puts another hand on the fist...protectively!!!!
~ ~ * " THE END" *~ ~
(or i should say the beginning)
sorry for any mistakes.....plzzzzzz do tell me how is it.....i'll appretiate ur comments....ur criticisms are also welcomed...thank u...
Edited by prerna_agrawal - 16 years ago
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